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24 Mo' Hours 11/8/2012 If I had an extra 24 hour to work on my first draft I would take the time to strengthen the structure of my essay and spend most of my time working on the structure because I was able to provide sufficient content but my essay structure, syntax and diction could use some definite work. If I was working on any content it would be to take more time to add to my nurturing nersus nature defense. I would not remove any information I've provided because each tiny bit of information is hugely important to the purpose of my paper. Without any portion of my EIP the paper would simply be incomplete. I definitely feel that revisions are needed and that