Name of Reviewer:________________________________

Name of Reviewed:_______________________

Progressive Era Speech: Peer Review

Peer Editing Key Areas in which you would like them to elaborate (Circle & D) Confusing sections = ?, Grammar/spelling errors = (Box)

Introduction: Does the introduction hook the audience?

____ Yes

_____ No _____ No

Does the introduction briefly present the problem and who they are as a Progressive Era Reformer? ____ Yes Praise and Suggestions for Improvement:

Explanation of the Problem: Is the topic sentence clear and does it explain what the paragraph is about? Why? Why not? ____ Yes Do they provide specific details about the problem? ____ Yes Is there any description of the problem that is vague, confusing, or limited in details? ____ Yes Are the various aspects of the problem clearly organized and explained? ____ Yes Praise and Suggestions for Improvement:

_____ No _____ No _____ No _____ No

Being an Agent of Change Is the topic sentence clear and does it explain what the paragraph is about? Why? Why not? ____ Yes _____ No Do they explain specific strategies, organizations, and/or laws in detail? ____ Yes _____ No Are the various parts of what was done to help solve the problem clearly organized and explained? ____ Yes _____ No Praise and Suggestions for Improvement:

Conclusion Do they briefly review the main points in their conclusion? Do they explain how the issue matters to the preservation of Americas ideals? Praise and Suggestions for Improvement:

____ Yes ____ Yes

_____ No _____ No

Do they have 2 short quotes (underlined) included in their speech?

____ Yes

_____ No