Summary of problems observed in the feature article writing task

1. CAPTF Areas Content Audience Problems observed - News commentary instead of a feature article - A letter of compliant instead of a feature article - Giving unnecessary information to the target audience - Speaking to another group of audience instead of the target audience Purpose Tone Format - To give comments only - To make complaints only - Language too informal - Language too emotional - A very long title - No paragraphing 2. Grammar/vocabulary Tense, direct/indirect speech, and passive voice problems.