UNDERGROUND TUBE- Paragraph

SCORE
PERCENTAGE
Sentence structure and punctuation for two paragraphs
5% deas or parts of sentence are !ost"# "in$ed or se%uenced &#
con'unctions such as and( when( then( so( &ut) Sentences are
!ost"# co!pound with "itt"e *ariation in word order) Sentence
su&'ects and *er&s are fre%uent"# repeated) +u"" stops and capita"
"etters are used to de!arcate sentences( !ost"# accurate"#) ,er#
"itt"e re"ation to Underground te-t)
.o!!as in "ists are used)
/0% Sentences are !ost"# gra!!atica""# sound with so!e *ariation
in su&'ects and use of e-panded noun phrases) There is so!e
use of re"ati*e c"auses( e)g) who( which( and su&ordinating
con'unction) Ta$es so!e ideas fro! Underground te-t &ut
!a'or errors)
There is so!e e*idence of correct use of co!!as to !ar$
c"auses within sentences)
/5% Both co!pound and co!p"e- sentences are used( with phrases
and c"auses &ui"ding up re"e*ant detai")
1ppropriate gra!!atica" constructions are used to de*e"op the
re"e*ant te-t t#pe( e)g) co!p"e- *er& phrases for proposa"s the#
wi"" &e a&"e to go( connecti*es of ti!e in recount( of that
indicate se%uence in e-p"anation) Ta$es infor!ation fro! te-t
&ut incorrect"# written)
20% 1 range of gra!!atica" structures is used to *ar# the "ength and
focus if sentence and to e-press shades of !eaning) !persona"
constructions are used when appropriate) 1 range of
punctuation is used to correct"# to structure sentences and the
who"e te-t( so!eti!es to create de"i&erate effects e)g) the dash(
&u""et points or parenthetic co!!as) Ta$es infor!ation fro!
te-t correct"# written &ut has so!e s!a"" errors in content)
25% There is appropriate *ariation in sentence and structure3 si!p"e
sentences are used effecti*e"# and contrasts achie*e particu"ar
effects or e!phases e)g) acti*e4passi*e *oice) 1ccurate
punctuation is used to *ar# pace( c"arif# !eaning( a*oid
a!&iguit# and create de"i&erate effects4 Ta$es a"" infor!ation
fro! te-t and has on"# one or two erros)
Anonymous. (2010). Adapted from Generic writing Mark scheme. Available:
https://www.google.co.uk/?
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accesse" 15th 6ay 2017.