Please grab your composition books. After the bell please
begin on your bell work, which you will see on the next slide Greek and Latin Vocab 2 STA, STI Latin STARE, STANTUM stand, stay
STANCH: (v) to stop the flow of Desperate to stanch the blood seeping from the wound, the doctor decided to put a tourniquet on the patients arm above the elbow. synonym: cease
STAUNCH: (adj) firm and steadfast Though Reverend Lockwood was a staunch believer in the goodness of humanity, he found his faith tested by the horrible events of that week. synonym: strong antonym: fickle, wavering EXTANT: (adj) still in existence; not destroyed Scientists continue to search through the remains of the museum in the hopes that they will discover some extant works of art. synonym: existing antonym: extinct
RESTIVE: (adj) resisting authority; difficult to control : restless; fidgety Police feared the townspeople would grow restive under the strict curfew and begin to engage in acts of civil disorder. The elderly man expected the children to become restive during his long speech, but they listened attentively instead. Rhetorical Precis Write a rhetorical precis of your essay. For the rhetorical precis you will write a brief analysis of the content, purpose, and persuasive strategies of your essay. Sentence 1: Note the name of the author, the genre and title of the work, and the publication date in parentheses; a rhetorically accurate verb; and a that clause containing the major assertion or thesis statement in the work. Example: Charles S. Peirces article, The Fixation of Belief (1877), asserts humans have psychological and social mechanisms designed to protect and cement (or fix) our beliefs. Rhetorical Precis Continued Sentence 2: Provide an explanation of how the author develops and supports the thesis, usually in chronological order. Example: Peirce backs this claim up with descriptions of four methods of fixing belief, pointing out the effectiveness and potential weaknesses of each method. Rhetorical Precis Continued Sentence 3: Summarize the authors apparent purpose, followed by an in order to phrase. Example: Peirces purpose is to point out the ways that people commonly establish their belief systems in order to jolt the awareness of the reader into considering how their own belief system may the product of such methods and to consider what Peirce calls, the method of science as a progressive alternative to the other three. Rhetorical Precis Continued Sentence 4: Offer a description of the intended audience, the relationship the author establishes with the audience, or both. Example: Given the technical language used in the article, Peirce is writing to an well-educated audience with some knowledge of philosophy and history and a willingness to other ways of thinking. As a whole: Sentence 1: Note the name of the author, the genre and title of the work, and the publication date in parentheses; a rhetorically accurate verb; and a that clause containing the major assertion or thesis statement in the work. Sentence 2: Provide an explanation of how the author develops and supports the thesis, usually in chronological order. Sentence 3: Summarize the authors apparent purpose, followed by an in order to phrase. Sentence 4: Offer a description of the intended audience, the relationship the author establishes with the audience, or both.
Example: Charles S. Peirces article, The Fixation of Belief (1877), asserts humans have psychological and social mechanisms designed to protect and cement (or fix) our beliefs. Peirce backs this claim up with descriptions of four methods of fixing belief, pointing out the effectiveness and potential weaknesses of each method. Peirces purpose is to point out the ways that people commonly establish their belief systems in order to jolt the awareness of the reader into considering how their own belief system may the product of such methods and to consider what Peirce calls, the method of science as a progressive alternative to the other three. Given the technical language used in the article, Peirce is writing to an well-educated audience with some knowledge of philosophy and history and a willingness to other ways of thinking.
Editing the draft 1. QUIETLY read your essay out loud to yourself so you can listen for any mistakes and hear the rhythm of your writing. 2. Figure out your own pattern of errors the most serious and frequent ones that you make. 3. Look for one type of error at a time. Then go back and look for a second type, and if necessary, a third. 4. Check for spelling and that you have used the right word for the context. 5. Use reverse editing to catch errors: Take a piece of paper and cover up all but the last sentence of your paper. Check this sentence for any mistakes; edit where needed. Then expose the sentence above that one and again look for errors. Continue reading in this fashion, sentence by sentence, back to the beginning of your essay. 6. Use Part II of the Evaluation Form (the other side) to help you with your revisions. Final Papers Your final papers are due TOMORROW!!!!! They must be typed! No electronic copies will be accepted. The library and labs allow printing so there is no excuse. Follow MLA formatting (there is an example on Roosevelts webpage) (a great source is OWL Purdue google MLA format and it should be the first result). You must also include your abstract at the beginning of your paper (no, this does not count as part of the 2-3 page requirement).