Assignment #5

Karli Bird English 1050

1A. What do you hope to accomplish with this essay?
I hope to inspire women to have the desire to be treated like a princess and to have the understanding
that it is not a bad thing to want to be loved and cherished. I also hope to inspire men to have the
understanding of how important princesses are and that the woman they date are as just important.
1B. How clearly have you defined and communicated your working thesis?
I believe my thesis represents the whole paper. Very clear and concise.
2A. How well does your essay respond to your rhetorical situation?
It responds very well. I have listed several facts and persuasive topics in my essay that will cause my
audience to side with me.
2B.If it is an academic essay does it fulfill the requirements of the assignment?
Yes.
3A. Have you tried to do much in this essay?
Yes, I have spent a tremendous amount of time on this paper and put my heart into it as well.
3B. Are your goals too limited or inconsequential?
No, I believe this topic is incredibly relateable and you can bet your bottom dollar I am sending a copy of
my essay to the writer of "Ten Reasons to Avoid Princesses."
4. How does your essay respond to the needs, interests and expectations of your readers?
Everyone dates and if they aren't right now, they will eventually. This essay exhibits that having
qualifications for the men and women you date is perfectly normal. You should have those
qualifications.
5A. How effectively does your essay fulfill the commitment stated or implied by your working thesis?
My thesis is a short wrap up of my entire essay and they whole piece can go along with that.
5B. Do you need to developed it further?
No
6A. What supporting detail and evidence have you provided?

I have related being treated like a princess to the quality of having high standards, princesses in
monarchies and what they do and also to pageant princesses.
6B. Do they relate clearly to your working thesis and to each other?
Yes.
7. What additional details, evidence or counterarguments might strengthen your essay?
Giving examples of actual Disney princesses and some of their amazing qualities.
8. Have you included any material that is irrelevant to you r working thesis?
No
9. How could your introduction and conclusion be more effective?
Add a lot more detail and specifics.
10. What overall strategy does your essay follow?
My teachers instructions for the essay and the outline I had written when I started the paper.
11. Does your essay follow the appropriate conventions for this kind of writing?
Yes
12A.What is the relationship between the organization of your essay and your controlling purpose or
thesis? The essay is very organized and well written. Follows the thesis throughout the entire paper.
12B. Is this relationship clear to the readers?
Yes
12C. What cues have you provided to make the organization easy to follow?
Steady qualified information that is easy to follow.
13. Have you tested the effectiveness of your organization by outlining or summarizing your draft?
Yes