Audience feedback on pitches (peer

assessment)

Name of group and task idea

Becky, Emma and Rob. Film

Genre
• Horror/thriller

Target audience

• 15-40. Both genders.

Other texts it reminds you of (intertextuality)

• The ring (Samarah)

• Newt and Eli from Hollyoaks.
• The Grudge.

Potential problems

•Might be too complicated to follow.

• Too much for 2-3 minutes.
• Hard to film in the dark.
• Making clear that the imaginary girl is imaginary.
• Might not be scary.
• Not the correct scenery.
• Costume ideas.
• Adding the right effects

Positive comments e.g. how it’s hooked you, original

ideas, etc

•Original idea.
• Unique.
• Good use of point of view shots
• Fast pace.
•Clear idea of what they want to do
• Ideas about the mise-en-scene
• Good ideas on camera angles and shots
•Good ideas about the costumes

Advice/suggestions

• Think about how and when to use the correct effects

•Scary sound
• Scary lighting
• Try out the effects before actually using them
• Try and make it clearer for the audience that she’s imaginary.