Dylan Baird

Comp II TR 9:00
Diana Watkins
24 February 2015
Annotation
In this essay, I chose to write about my struggle of seeking an open mind and how
it has benefited me. Using elements from my past and present mindsets, I tell how having
an open mind became easier as I sought it out.
I chose this paper because I think it turned out well for one night of free writing.
Beside that fact, it also showcases my natural ability to organize a paper with minimal
grammatical errors.
This paper is strong in organization and flow. Other points, such as the
introduction and conclusion, also shine in this essay. On the other hand, it shows my use
of comma splices and poor word choice, which I am trying to improve.
All in all, the paper is fairly decent judging by the grade I received. It is not
perfect, but it helps me to see some of the areas that need improvement for future papers.