Jordan Loo
UNIT PLAN:
Fear & Honor
Understanding Themes
Language Arts
12th Grade
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Table of Contents
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Lesson Plan: Sentence Diagramming and Parts of Speech Intro. Lesson Pg. 9
Lesson Plan: Shirley Jacksons -The Lottery
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Student Analysis
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DM1-DM6 Reflection
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Loo 3
Analyze the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate
elements of a story or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is
ordered, how the characters are introduced and developed).
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.3
Loo 4
What does Carpe Diem mean and how can it relate to literature and
writing? (Which emotion is stronger? Honor or Fear? Why?)
E. Concepts
Based upon the Utah State Core standard, what do students need to know?
Utilize close reading strategies and deep thinking.
Analyze how different points of view influences the mood of a story.
Compare and contrast the structure of literary texts.
Identify theme as well as understand how theme influences the
development of plot, setting and characters.
F. Skills
Students will analyze a developing theme/idea over the duration of a text.
Students will be able to make a connection between literature and real life
situations.
Students will observe how developing themes are vital in popular short
stories.
Students will understand the importance of good communication and being
proactive as a person and a writer.
Students will be able to write and create stories following specific themes.
Step 2 ASSESSMENT EVIDENCE
A. Pre-Assessments
Students will take a pretest that will assess their knowledge of what we will
cover in the unit (adjustments will be made according to the results of
students.)
Questions will assess the general understanding students have of figurative
language, key people, and close reading strategies.
B. Formative Assessments/Evidence
Students will take multiple choice and short answer quizzes throughout the
unit that assess their understanding of deeper thinking, the power of
emotions, and information from literature read in class.
Students will also take quizzes that will require them to employ close reading
strategies to perform at proficiency.
Multiple class discussions will require students to participate at random for
credit.
C. Summative Assessments/Evidence
Students will demonstrate an ability to perform close readings alone in the
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Materials needed
Copies of:
Shirley Jacksons The Lottery
Edgar Allen Poe- Thou Art the Man & The Sphinx
My class has 22 students in it and 18 of them are Caucasian. Of the remaining 4 students, I
have 2 Native American students, and 2 Hispanic students.
There are 12 females and 9 males in the class.
There are no ESL or exceptionality students in this particular class.
Analyze the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story
or drama (e.g., where a story is set, how the action is ordered, how the characters are introduced
and developed).
Content, Reading/Language Walk-Away:
Walk-Away:
Students will identify key themes within a text and discover the importance of themes in relation
to plot lines and what is considered strong writing.
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ASSESSMENT EVIDENCE (formative/summative checks for
learning) (Match the Content Walk-Away)
Modifications/Accommodations
Modifications/
Accommodations
(ELL, IEP, GATE, etc.)
story.
Summarization/Closure
- Class discussion on fear as a theme for horror and why it is interesting.
Talk about examples of fear as a theme mixed with action, comedy, or
romance themes within Literature and film. Reflect on why they are
interesting (popular)/ or why they are not. Also talk about how themes
are everywhere in pop culture and it would benefit the students to be able
to identify key themes when analyzing books and films in the future. I
anticipate each class will have a different discussion course, however, I
want them to walk away realizing that different emotions usually
correlate with different themes used in art and literature. For example
What emotions does the viewer usually encounter when
reading/viewing a comedy? What about a Romance?
NOTES TO TEACHER
What do I need to remember to do?
- Review Power Point slides.
- Prepare modifications for possible ELL and IEP students in class.
- Read/review Thou Art the Man (for myself as the teacher)
Materials to have ready?
- Student journals
- PowerPoint/ YouTube video
Approximate time needed for lesson?
- 1 class period
Reflection:
I think that this lesson may take a few class periods to complete if I want to do it right. I need to
prepare so that each class will be at the same point as any other so that no one gets left behind. Since I
havent taught this lesson in a real-life situation I am curious as to how interested the students will be.
I wonder if the interest will vary from class to class and why that might be the case. I will be able to
use the assessments to decide if I can continue to more complex elements of literature or if I need to
continue to focus on the basic elements such as theme, setting, character roles, etc After each class
finishes a segment I think it would be valuable to take notes about things that the students already
knew and what they may have struggled on.
My class has 22 students in it and 18 of them are Caucasian. Of the remaining 4 students, I
have 2 Native American students, and 2 Hispanic students.
There are 12 females and 9 males in the class.
There are no ESL or exceptionality students in this particular class.
Language Standard 4
Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning words and phrases based on
grades 1112 reading and content, choosing flexibly from a range of strategies.
b.
Identify and correctly use patterns of word changes that indicate different meanings or parts of
speech (e.g., conceive, conception, conceivable).
Content, Reading/Language Walk-Away:
Walk-Away:
Students will analyze the structure of a sentence (basic parts of speech, nouns, pronouns,
adjectives, etc).
Students will dissect sentences to understand the essential parts of a complete sentence and how
modifiers add to a sentence.
Modifications/Accommodations
Modifications/
Accommodations
(ELL, IEP, GATE, etc.)
Summarization/Closure
- Class discussion on Sentence diagramming. We will go over each of the
sentences on the board and decide whether any corrections need to be
made. Because this unit consists of the relationship between themes and
syntax I will go over the importance of understanding appropriate
sentence structure and how writers have mastered the art to appeal to
emotion. I will ask questions such as How does regionalism play a part
in the realism of the piece? Why is that important? I will then pass out
the post-test after answering any more questions.
NOTES TO TEACHER
What do I need to remember to do?
- Gather worksheets and materials.
- Review Power Point slides.
- Prepare modifications for possible ELL and IEP students in class.
Materials to have ready?
- Worksheets
- PowerPoint/ You Tube video (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SqHPqdmljwM)
Approximate time needed for lesson?
- 1 class period
Reflection:
I think that this lesson was a good eye-opener to what parts of speech need to be re-taught. While
there were a handful of students who got all seven parts of speech definitions correct, the majority of
the students did not. Understanding parts of speech is a basic skill of being a fluent English speaker.
Students who plan to attend college need to know the difference between a pronoun and an adjective
while they may not need to know how to diagram the first sentence to the Constitution. I think that a
future lesson for this class would be to go into parts of speech in more detail and possibly assign
group presentations or something to get these seniors in high school ready for college.
My class has 22 students in it and 18 of them are Caucasian. Of the remaining 4 students, I
have 2 Native American students, and 2 Hispanic students.
There are 12 females and 9 males in the class.
There are no ESL or exceptionality students in this particular class.
Determine two or more themes or central ideas of a text and analyze their development over the
course of the text, including how they interact and build on one another to produce a complex
account; provide an objective summary of the text.
Content, Reading/Language Walk-Away:
Walk-Away:
Students will be able to identify simple and complex themes from the popular story The Lottery
to show them what elements are required to write an interesting yet formal piece of literature.
Modifications/Accommodations
Modifications/
Accommodations
(ELL, IEP, GATE, etc.)
Summarization/Closure
- Class discussion on The Lottery and how stories can have a twist at
the end all the while being set up earlier in the story. Talk about the value
of not just creating an open and shut story. Ask the question why do
some stories end in unexpected tragedy? What would the world be like if
EVERY story ended happily? Many students asked how those crazy
writers like Poe became so popular. This would be a good time to
emphasize the importance of those types of stories.
NOTES TO TEACHER
What do I need to remember to do?
- Gather worksheets and materials.
- Review Power Point slides.
- Prepare modifications for possible ELL and IEP students in class.
Materials to have ready?
- Worksheets
- PowerPoint/ YouTube Video (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4qME64SkxM)
Approximate time needed for lesson?
- 1 class period
Reflection:
I think that this lesson was a good reminder to myself of the importance of understanding the elements
of writing literature rather than just reading a story and liking it or not. I used the analogy of music
with the students when they asked why it is important to understand these elements. Many people can
hear a song and like it, however, those that understand the process and know each note are the ones
who can fully appreciate the songs worth.
My class has 22 students in it and 18 of them are Caucasian. Of the remaining 4 students, I
have 2 Native American students, and 2 Hispanic students.
There are 12 females and 9 males in the class.
There are no ESL or exceptionality students in this particular class.
Determine two or more themes or central ideas of a text and analyze their development over the
course of the text, including how they interact and build on one another to produce a complex
account; provide an objective summary of the text.
Content, Reading/Language Walk-Away:
Walk-Away:
Students will be able to identify simple and complex themes from the popular story The Sphinx
to show them what elements are required to write an interesting yet formal piece of literature.
Modifications/Accommodations
Modifications/
Accommodations
(ELL, IEP, GATE, etc.)
Summarization/Closure
- Class discussion on The Sphinx and how stories can have a twist at
the end all the while being set up earlier in the story. We will discuss the
similarities and differences between Poes The Sphinx and Jacksons
The Lottery. These two stories work well with each other because they
both have a twist at the end, one for the better and the other for the
worst. I will ask the questions What was the difference in
emotion/feeling when the climax occurred during The Sphinx vs The
Lottery? Were they different? Why? Was one more shocking than the
other?
NOTES TO TEACHER
What do I need to remember to do?
- Gather worksheets and materials.
- Review Power Point slides.
- Prepare modifications for possible ELL and IEP students in class.
Materials to have ready?
- Worksheets
- PowerPoint/ You Tube video (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbhZr_--YRc)
Approximate time needed for lesson?
- 1 class period
Reflection:
I think that this lesson was a good reemphasis of the importance of understanding the elements of
writing literature rather than just reading a story and liking it or not. I used the analogy of music with
the students when they asked why it is important to understand these elements. Many people can hear a
song and like it, however, those that understand the process and know each note are the ones who can
fully appreciate the songs worth.
My class has 22 students in it and 18 of them are Caucasian. Of the remaining 4 students, I
have 2 Native American students, and 2 Hispanic students.
There are 12 females and 9 males in the class.
There are no ESL or exceptionality students in this particular class.
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, wellchosen details, and well-structured event sequences.
Engage and orient the reader by setting out a problem, situation, or observation and its
significance, establishing one or multiple point(s) of view, and introducing a narrator and/or
characters; create a smooth progression of experiences or events.
Content, Reading/Language Walk-Away:
Walk-Away:
Students will identify key elements of Drama and storytelling and will then write their own
collaborative stories.
Modifications/Accommodations
Modifications/
Accommodations
(ELL, IEP, GATE, etc.)
NOTES TO TEACHER
What do I need to remember to do?
Reflection:
I think that this lesson was a lot a fun. Every student in every class participated in the activity. Many
of the stories that were read at the end of class were very clever. Because the story was not the work
of a single person more people were willing to share. Most of the stories were funny and there were a
few that fell under a very dramatic and even tragic light but they were beautifully written. I think that
it is hard to assess a lesson like this but the value in having students collaborate on a written project
and use critical thinking skills to include elements on the fly is crucial.
My class has 22 students in it and 18 of them are Caucasian. Of the remaining 4 students, I
have 2 Native American students, and 2 Hispanic students.
There are 12 females and 9 males in the class.
There are no ESL or exceptionality students in this particular class.
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, wellchosen details, and well-structured event sequences.
Engage and orient the reader by setting out a problem, situation, or observation and its
significance, establishing one or multiple point(s) of view, and introducing a narrator and/or
characters; create a smooth progression of experiences or events.
Content, Reading/Language Walk-Away:
Walk-Away:
Students will identify key elements of Drama and storytelling and will then write their own
collaborative stories.
Modifications/Accommodations
Modifications/
Accommodations
(ELL, IEP, GATE, etc.)
which themes the writer put in the story on purpose then collaborate with
the writer.
Independent (You do it alone)
Each student will finish their narrative alone and after the writing
workshop they will make the necessary changes before handing their
stories in for a grade.
-Depending on the
severity of the students
needs I can have them
Summarization/Closure
draw or help them write a
story. If a few students are
- The students will be able to read their stories in front of the class as
ELL students I will put
those listening try to identify literary devices and themes within the story. them in the same group
After all of the students are done we will discuss if there are themes that
and allow some mixed
are more popular than others and why that is so. I will emphasize the
language in their stories.
importance of being able to identify the basic principles of stories so that
the students may be considered educated on the subject. Questions to
ask: How does syntax influence the readability of a story? In what ways
can a writer interest a reader through literary devices?
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NOTES TO TEACHER
What do I need to remember to do?
Reflection:
I think that this lesson was meaningful and as a whole the unit has value. It is amazing to me how
many people dont know what a theme or metaphor is and therefore the extent to their criticism is
ya, it was good or no, it was garbage. When students understand the structure of stories and films
they will be able to identify the skill and mastery or lack of put into those stories. As a teacher of
Language Arts I believe it is my job to educate students on the art of language, after this unit I
would consider most of my students to have a basic back ground in the knowledge of these arts.
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Student Analysis
Most students will have a hard time understanding sentence diagramming at first glance.
It is crucial for students to understand the elements required to create a sentence. In order to
grasp the big picture and enjoy the entire painting students need to understand what goes into
each stroke of the paint brush. In order to make this lesson more relatable to the students I will
ask them to imagine something with layers for example a hamburger. I will ask what the essential
parts of a hamburger consist of (bun & meat), and then talk about how everything else are just
add-ons or modifiers. I will then introduce the horizontal diagram with the vertical line. The left
side represents the bun and the right side represents the meat. Everything extra branches off of
these two parts. Understanding basic sentences will help students improve their writing and
grammar usage. Parts of speech need to be determined to understand which words modify which
(for example adverbs and verbs- adjectives and nouns) throughout the lesson mini lessons or
reminders should take place to help students remember parts of speech that they already should
have learned.
I think that this lesson was a good eye-opener to what parts of speech need to be retaught. While there were a handful of students who got all seven parts of speech definitions
correct, the majority of the students did not. Understanding parts of speech is a basic skill of
being a fluent English speaker. Students who plan to attend college need to know the difference
between a pronoun and an adjective while they may not need to know how to diagram the first
sentence to the Constitution. I think that a future lesson for this class would be to go into parts of
speech in more detail and possibly assign group presentations or something to get these seniors
in high school ready for college. Data from Pre and post-tests-
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Summary of individual student performance on assessmentsIt was interesting to see the spectrum of pre and post test scores. One thing that I am
proud of is that every single student improved from the pre-test to the post-test. After looking at
the post-tests a majority of the class still had trouble with sentence diagramming. The next day I
gave them their tests back and I went through how to diagram a sentence again to make sure they
knew how to before moving on. Student 9 did exceedingly well on the pre-test and scored a
100% on the post test. I feel that this is because she pays attention and participates in class
discussions. If she has questions about the content I am teaching she takes time to come and ask
me to help her before and after school. Student 5 scored average on the pre-test in respect with
the rest of the class, but did much better on the post-test scoring a 12 out of 17. This particular
student hadnt the slightest idea how to diagram a sentence. After realizing this from the pre-test
I made sure she understood how to do it before the post-test. Student 13 only received 4 out of 17
on his pre-test and 8 out of 17 on his post-test. I feel that this is because he missed a lot of classes
and wasnt able to grasp all of the content needed to do well on the test. I talked to him after I
handed them back and told him he could retake the test if he wanted but he chose not to.
(Refer to Appendix C for student work.)
Sub-group assessment
I decided to use gender as a sub group specification. Students 1-12 are females and 13-26
are males. The females had a higher average score of 5.3 on the pre-test compared to the males
3.3. Both averages were very low and while I expected them to have difficulty I did not realize
many of them did not know some of the basic literary devices such as adjectives and nouns, keep
in mind this is a senior class. While this was not a unit assessment more of a lesson assessment it
allowed me to grasp what the students already knew about sentence structure. Because the
overall unit focuses on a reader response it is hard to assess through a point system exactly what
they needed help with. The post average for the females was 12.1 compared to the males
average of 11.0. The females scored better because they seemed to be a little more motivated to
learn the material. While doing small class activities they seemed more determined to think of
ways to remember specific terms and concepts while many of the males worked hard there were
a few who seemed to be thinking and discussing other things.
Explanation on how evidence from assessments supports or contradicts pre-test, post-test,
formative/ summative assessments related to student learning.For the most part each of the students were very active during the formative assessments
and class activities. There were a few students who elected to talk about things outside of class
during small group projects and were slow to turn in their assignments allowing other students
who were already finished time to get off task as well. I believe the majority of the students
learned the basic idea of how to diagram sentences but didnt really care to put forth a full effort
in understanding different concepts. The evidence from the summative assessment shows that
although mans of the students didnt seem to put forth much effort they still learned more than
they knew at the beginning of the class period.
Explanation on how assessment data is used to draw conclusions about the learning of all
students through the evaluation of student performance on objectives.-
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The biggest benefit in grading the assessments is seeing that every single student improved.
I know it would be much harder to draw a conclusion about the overall effectiveness of the
lesson and the assessment if some of the students did worse on the post- test than on the pre-test.
While I would make note that many students could have performed better in the post-test it is
hard to measure or explain what could have been done to make them perform even better.
However, seeing that an overall improvement did take place it is fair to say that the lesson
objectives were met.
Discussion on the assessment instruments to determine the validity of questions used in
assessments to measure student learning.For this specific lesson I created my own assessment. I wanted to incorporate parts of
speech along with three basic sentences for the students to diagram. I looked online and used
other resources to try to find a basic test that consisted of those two elements but had no luck. I
think it was fairly easy for me to create this simple test using basic computer skills. However, in
the future I think it will be much more resourceful to find lesson plans with assessments already
included. I will say that if I feel that my future students need more practice in certain areas I will
not shy away from creating my own assessments.
Evaluation of student learning relating to core standards and objectives.Copies of completed student assessmentsMy objectives for this lesson were:
Students will analyze the structure of a sentence (basic parts of speech, nouns, pronouns,
adjectives, etc).
Students will dissect sentences to understand the essential parts of a complete sentence and how
modifiers add to a sentence.
Most students were not familiar with sentence diagramming whatsoever and after the 30 minute
lesson could diagram simple sentences consisting of a subject predicate and a few sentence
modifiers. Also many students had difficulty with the parts of speech and as we went through the
lesson I was able to cover each of the seven parts of speech. Most students showed an
improvement on the post-test especially with the parts of speech section of the assessment.
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In each of my lessons I presented from the Power Point program which allowed
me to share information in an organized and creative manner. I was also able to use
my mentor teachers class microphone and projector to teach all of my lessons. I tried
to incorporate YouTube videos to try to grasp students attention to relate prior
knowledge with the specific material for that lesson. As an English teacher I expect
each class to take a different course in the discussions all the while covering the same
essential questions and enduring ideas.
DM3-Subject Matter
The first lesson I taught about sentence diagramming. I was familiar with the
concept but had to do some research about the basic rules and principles so that I
could teach them to the students. After a couple hours I felt prepared to teach and
answer questions about sentence diagramming. For my second lesson I taught about
creative writing and Drama. I had much more previous experience and although I
learned many things while putting together a Power Point presentation I felt confident
I teaching and discussing the lesson I had prepared.
DM4- Environment
I believe that by eliminating backpacks and binders from being on the top of desks
I also eliminated cell phone shields and other type of distractions. At times I allow for
multiple students to speak within small group discussions which can get fairly loud so
by having a means to have them quiet and listening was very crucial in carrying order
through the lessons.
DM5-Reflection
I think that the assessments that were given to the students is not a fair means to
evaluate the students because I taught specifically about what would be on the
assessments themselves within the 30 minute lessons that I prepared. If the lessons
were taught under a different setting over a two week period I think it would be more
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accurate. I do believe that the students learned multiple meanings and strategies
within the lessons that I taught which is very reassuring to me as a teacher. The
students were very creative and assertive during the class activities which made for a
fun leaning environment.
DM6- Teaching Dispositions
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Appendix: A
References
Alicea. (2014, January 21). Elements of Drama by Mrs. Alicea. Retrieved April 26, 2015, from
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SGmgLVHfaY4
Diagrammar. (2010, August 29). Retrieved January 12, 2015, from https://www.youtube.com/watch?
v=SqHPqdmljwM
How to find a theme. (2011, August 8). Retrieved January 15, 2015, from
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4qME64SkxM
Jackson, S., & Sandland, R. (1983). The lottery. Mankato, Minn.: Creative Education.
Poe, E. (1966). Complete stories and poems of Edgar Allan Poe. Garden City, N.Y.: Doubleday.
Price, V. (2008, January 14). An Evening with Edgar Allen Poe: The Sphinx. Retrieved January 26,
2015, from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbhZr_--YRc
Theme (Boring English Course Presentation). (n.d.). Retrieved January 12, 2015, from
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HykEd7bT6kw
Theme Worksheets. (n.d.). Retrieved January 12, 2015, from http://englishlinx.com/theme/
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