Final, Revised Submission

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Through the use of various literary techniques, conventions and rhetorical

features the articles separate themselves from one another but, at the cost
of impartial credibility.
The main point of this paragraph is to point out the
conventions of the sub-genre and show how the articles
use these conventions.
The Main point of this paragraph is to point out the literary
techniques the writers uses in writing their articles and
how some of the techniques cause the articles to lose
their credibility as impartial sources.
The main point of this paragraph is continue on pointing
out the literary techniques and how they are used.
The main point of this paragraph is to state what we can
pull from the techniques that were used in the previous
paragraphs and state their use.
The main point of this paragraph is to point out the
similarities and dissimilarities in rhetorical features
between the three pieces and how they affect credibility.
This paragraph is an extension of the previous one and
continues to analyze the similarities and dissimilarities
between the three articles in terms of rhetorical features.
The main point of this paragraphs is to discuss the similar
surface-level features the three pieces share and how they
hint towards their genre.
The main point point of this paragraph is state why people
should learn about genre and how it can affect their lives.
This paragraph serves to conclude the piece and state the
point of the thesis.

In this paper I had many large changes. First of all, I rewrote most of my introductory paragraph
since it was filled with too much fluff. I also wrote a new thesis statement for my paper since
the original really wasnt a thesis. I also deleted my original second paragraph since it was
basically a continuation of my intro paragraph and was also filled with fluff. Another major
change I did was deleting whole paragraphs because it made my paper too long. Instead I
condensed my paper into paragraphs that focused on the ideas of all the articles combined
instead of having paragraphs for each separate article. I also added more analysis to my paper so
all my statement connected with the new thesis.