personification
Imagery
simile
metaphor
Audio
Host
of the deal.
It sounded like an elephant was
stampeding down the front staircase5, with
each junction of the foot onto staircase
following a clumsy cadence.
You almost killed us back there! The
driver spit into his 7/11 cup. This is the
closest hes ever come to recycling. The
trailing red and blue lights moved closer in
the rear-view mirror.
Hey, Im talking at you! yelled the 7
foot tall 40-something. The rest of the bus
had been lulled back to sleep by the
whirring of the engine, granting the giant
and the driver complete candor.
Back staircase, instructed the driver.
Whatd you say!?
Cant use front staircase when in
motion. The driver spit a second time.
You almost killed all of the
passengers including yourself back there,
and youre telling me to use the back
staircase!
Cant use front staircase when in
motion.
STOP THIS BUS RIGHT NOW!
The tires began shrieking as the
command to go from 95 mph to 0 was
executed. A cacophony of confused
screams and mechanical contortions filled
the space as the giant crashed through the
windshield. It was as if a time machine
traveling at full speed into the future made
an about-face and set the coordinates to the
stone-age. People say that you see your life
flash before you as you die, but apparently
there was no time to write, direct and
produce 85 different biopics in the span of
this paradocially never-ending and abrupt
instant.
The moment was past. There were no
more screams. Three police vehicles had
piled into the back of the bus. Red, white
and blue lights were flashing, illuminating
the debris and the carnage, and adding an
extra layer of irony over this Fourth of July
weekend.
5 simile
Deepened Voice
My regular voice