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Arden Shakespeare
First published in 2012 by the Arden Shakespeare
Editorial Matter and Selection copyright Russ McDonald, Nicholas D. Nace
and Travis D. Williams 2012
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Hamlet's Couplets
THIRTY TWO
Hamlet's Couplets
JAMES GRANTHAM TURNER
Let us go in together;
And still your fingers on your lips, I pray.
The time is out of joint; O cursed spite,
That ever I was born to set it right!
Nay, come, let's go together.
William Shakespeare, Hamlet, 1.5.184-8
So Hamlet closes the powerful scene in which he confronts the
Ghost and swears his entourage to silence. This oddly satisfying
expression of dissatisfaction owes much of its finality and
memorability to its prosodie form, a single pentameter couplet
emerging from blank verse. Horatio has just rebuked him for 'wild
and whirling words', and Guildenstern will later tell him to 'put
your discourse into some frame' and not speak 'so wildly' (1.5.132,
3.2..300-301). This couplet provides the 'frame' and assures
Horatio and Marcellus that he is not essentially wild. Or does
it? Throughout Hamlet, I suggest, sudden irruptions of rhymed
verse pose exactly the question of which 'frame' fits his 'discourse'
and which cramps and tortures it into a false shape.
This shapely couplet ironically performs what it declares impossible, the first line with its strong central pause offset by the fluent
second line, bound by rhyme and meter into a measured resolution
or 'setting right' of a caesura in history. Yet its placing in the final
five-line sequence seems irresolute, even awkward. The ringing
forte declaration sounds jarring after the pianissimo injunction to
silence, and might foreshadow the notorious Folio rendering of his
last words, 'The rest is silence. O, o, o, o'. The couplet appears
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(in pointed contrast to Hamlet himself) his exits never place him
in metrical control.
Even Hamlet must struggle to establish mastery over rhyme
in the many soliloquies he is dealt by Shakespeare. The first has
no rhyme at all, while the second, anticipating an encounter with
the Ghost later that evening, ends quite badly: 'Till then sit still
my soul - foul deeds will rise/Though all the earth o'erwhelm
them to men's eyes' (1.2.255-6). The couplet seems forced by the
arbitrary rhyme 'rise/eyes', which adds little to the meaning- the
opposite problem to the Popean 'creep'/'sleep', lulled by excessive
conformity of the rhyme words. The more decisive ending of the
'rogue and peasant slave' soliloquy, 'the play's the thing / Wherein
I'll catch the conscience of the King' (2.2.539-40), still leaves a
lingering suspicion of weak rhyming, 'thing' being rather flat. The
'witching hour' and 'all occasions' soliloquies end more soundly
(3.2.38-9, 4.4.645). But the most intense prosodie effect comes
in the scene where Hamlet declines to kill Claudius at prayer, when
both protagonists, separately and serially, in their very different
styles, close on a couplet:
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HAMLET
KING
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My mother stays;
This physic but prolongs thy sickly days. Exit
My words fly up, my thoughts remain below.
Words without thoughts never to heaven go.
(3.3.95-8)
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268
(84-6)
He 'plays' contempt for play, fashions an exterior frame to declare
his absolute independence from the exterior. The couplet, with
its reconciliation of antitheses, captures his contradictory attitude.
But it also threatens to envelop him in convention: Gertrude incorporates his 'common' interjection into a second distich rhyming
'be'/'thee' (74-5).
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271
QUEEN
(8-11)
Killing Polonius sets off a bout of grimly humorous coupletmaking - 'almost as bad, good mother /As kill a king, and marry
with his brother' (26-7) - which recurs as he begins to lug the
corpse away: punning on 'drawing to an end', he jeers that
Polonius 'Is now most still, most secret and most grave, / Who was
in life a foolish prating knave' (212-13).3 Within the confrontation
itself, of course, he adopts a less puerile tone, indeed overacts the
thunderous moral authority. At one point he tries to bring the
scene to a dignified close with a sententious distich ('I must be
cruel only to be kind./ This bad begins and worse remains behind'
[176-7]), only to boil over again with frothing imprecations against
the bloat king and his reechy kisses. Again he reasserts control
over the rhyme and the circumstances, but now in the exultant
mode of the murderous prankster who will hoist Rosencrantz and
Guildenstern with their own petard
And blow them at the moon: O, 'tis most sweet
When in one line two crafts directly meet.
(207-8)
George Puttenham could hardly define better the rhetorical and
emotional effect of a good couplet.
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THIRTY THREE
The Dumb Show in Hamlet
TIFFANY STERN
Dumbe showfollowes.
Enter a King and a Queene, the Queene embracing him, and he
her, he takes her up, and declines his head upon her necke, he lyes
him downe uppon a bancke of flowers, she seeing him asleepe,
leaves him: anon come in another man, takes off his crowne,
kisses it, pours poyson in the sleepers eares, and leaves him: the
Queene returnes, finds the King dead, makes passionate action,
the poysner with some three or foure come in againe, seeme to
condole with her, the dead body is carried away, the poysner
wooes the Queene with gifts, shee seemes harsh awhile, but in the
end accepts love.
William Shakespeare, Hamlet (1604, 'Quarto 2', H P )
The dumbe shew enters.
Enter a King and Queene, very lovingly; the Queene embracing
him. She kneeles, and makes shew of Protestation unto him. He
takes her up, and declines his head upon her neck. Layes him
downe upon a Banke of Flowers. She seeing him asleepe, leaves
him. Anon comes in a Fellow, takes off his Crowne, kisses it,
and powres poyson in the Kings eares, and Exits. The Queene
returnes, findes the King dead, and makes passionate Action.
The Poysoner, with some two or three Mutes comes in againe,
seeming to lament with her. The dead body is carried away: The
Poysoner Wooes the Queene with Gifts, she seemes loath and
unwilling awhile, but in the end, accepts his love.
William Shakespeare, Handel, in Comedies,
Histories, & Tragedies (1623, 'Folio', 267)
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Notes
1. Parenthetical citations for Volpone are from Jonson & Watson, Volpone, but
this argument will often (as here) require the use of punctuation from other
editions.
2. English Crammar in Jonson, Works, 690 ( 1692 edn). The 1640 edition reverses
the functions of comma and semi-colon.
3. McDonald, Shakespeare, 11.
4. Booth, Sonnets, ix.
5. See Ong.
6. English Grammar in Jonson, Works, 690.
7. English Grammar in Jonson, Works, 690.
8. Booth, Precious.
9. McDonald,'Jonson', 114.
10. Watson.
Mahood, 144.
Dekker, sig. F.
Tusser, sig. Biiii.
Bawcutt,2.1.118n.
Gibbons, 104.
Quintilian, 8.3.61.
Quintilian, 8.3.61.
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1. Righter, 60. After almost half a century, Righter's book remains in my opinion
the best of its kind on this topic.
2. Righter, 57.
3. Personal communication. My understanding of Richard II has benefited
enormously from Professor Potter's writings and suggestions about the play,
and it gives me pleasure to record my gratitude here.
4. Iser,94.
5. Kierkegaard, 18, 20.
Booth,'Value', 141.
Stewart, 55.
Empson, Seven Types, 90-101; G. Wright, 'Hendiadys'.
Moretti, 92-3.
Cavell, 179-91.
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Notes
Stern, 63-80.
Quarles, 4.
Mehl, 113.
Greg, 'Hallucination'; J. D. Wilson, 151.
For more on F Hamlet as a revision, see Ann Thompson and Neil Taylor's
introduction to their Arden 3 Hamlet, which chooses Q2 as copy text.
6. Cropped note on copy of Locrine (London, 1595), reconstructed in Greg,
Papers, 226-35. Contractions have been expanded.
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