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Savannah Kaplan
Professor Padgett
ENGL 102
10 April 2016
The Value of Complementary and Alternative Medicine:
A Solution to the U.S. Healthcare System
While healthcare has made significant strides in the last century, increasing the average
human life span by over 40 years, there have been much smaller strides made in the last couple
decades. Furthermore, there have been numerous recent reports about an increasing number of
expensive medical approaches or medicines that are not only ineffective, but lower the long-term
health of the patient. This is of particular concern because the regulatory agency responsible for
protecting the American people from such abuses, the Food and Drug Administration (FDA), has
increased their surveillance and regulatory requirements for medical approval. At the same time
that medical gains are slowing down, the health care industry has become aware of limitations of
their approach to resolving certain health problems, such as those associated with pain and
psychiatric management. This awareness has resulted in the medical industry looking at
alternative approaches to address these problems. Due to widespread corruption in these medical
and pharmaceutical industries, the National Institutes of Health (NIH), has announced a whole
new field of medicine called Complementary and Alternative Medicine (CAM): CAM is
formally defined as a group of diverse medical and health care systems, practices, and products
that are not presently considered to be part of conventional medicine (Barnes). Subsequently,
some of the new healthcare advances were rediscovered in these existing alternative and
complementary medical approaches, such as acupuncture, chiropractic medicine, and herbal
supplements. It is important for patients to recognize and become familiar with complementary

Comment [AP1]: Nice academic-y sounding title!

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and alternative approaches as well as traditional medicine so one can choose a medical path that
suits their needs and lifestyle best.
There is a growing concern among professionals in the medical field that as much as one-

Comment [AP2]: I like that your thesis is clear here, but I am

left wondering why this is important or patients to recognize? I
assume your paper will answer that question, but a taste of that
answer would be helpful in the intro.

third of medical expenses are unnecessary: being spent on ineffective medicines, unnecessary
tests, and ineffective procedures. The root cause for this inefficiency can be attributed primarily
to corporate and individual greed; greed by large pharmaceutical companies to report profits,
clinical researchers to accept money to inaccurately report results, and by the prescribing
doctors, whom benefit financially by prescribing ineffective remedies. This greed has a number
of direct and indirect ramifications on ones health, ranging from health care costs to availability

Comment [AP3]: Youll have to make the case that this greed
and inefficiency exists after you make this claim as opposed to
simply declaring this to be truth.

of non-traditional alternative approaches to health care. Several of these alternative approaches

are highly effective for specific ailments; however, the alternatives lack the support of medical
and pharmaceutical companies because the companies cannot make a sufficient profit from these
alternative remedies. Without the industries support, research, and advertising funding,
complementary and alternative medicines are less likely to become mainstream treatment
options.
Every day billions of people consume prescription medicines produced by
pharmaceutical companies. These companies are treated by society with great respect due to the
companies carefully crafted corporate image for creating jobs, helping citizens, and investing in
research dedicated to saving lives. When in reality, their incentives are likely much less

Comment [AP4]: Again, you have to make this case, you cant
assume your audience will be able to buy into this idea, they have
to be persuaded to buy into it.

honorable:
The big pharmaceutical companies are, in fact, the most sophisticated marketing
machines in history, selling billions of dollars in products that often do not work to tens
of millions of people who do not need them, leading to millions of hospitalizations in

Comment [AP5]: Block quotes dont need quotation marks.

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North America every year and is the fourth leading cause of death in North America
(MP Challenges Corrupt).
People are not as much aware of the corruption and greed going on throughout the medical and
pharmaceutical industries. The astonishing growth of pharmaceutical advertising and its impact
on consumers is quickly becoming a serious consumer issue. Due to the industries incentive of
making as much profit as possible, it has lead to various forms of corruption: Corruption in the
pharmaceutical sector occurs throughout all stages of medicines chain, from research and
development to dispensing and promotion (Medicines). Alternatively, these pharmaceutical

Comment [AP6]: For example...

companies should be spending their money on more important areas such as testing the safety of
their drugs or curing some of their side effects.
Not only do pharmaceutical companies occasionally violate research, development, and
promotion, but the dispensing and labeling of their product is also frequently compromised.
Warning labels, which are intended to be the most important method of informing the consumer
of whether the medicine is appropriate for them, are often misrepresented by big pharmaceutical
companies (MP Challenges Corrupt). The companies create the prescriptions safety labels
to do the exact opposite, making sure neither the doctors nor patients have a clear idea whether
the drugs are safe or not. Examples of the ways these companies manipulate the safety labels are
that most unwanted results are not published, the companies will hire people to make their drug
sounds favorable and they will morph negative into positive results, such that the safety labels
promote a greater acceptance of the product.
The FDA is constantly in court with pharmaceutical companies to ensure that they do not
use wrongful or over-inflated language to promote their drug. A good example of
pharmaceutical misrepresentation recently occurred when Allergan, released a prescription

Comment [AP7]: Good! An example. Im wondering if you could

have more of these.

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eyelash thickening agent called Latisse. The FDA concluded that the pharmaceutical company
misrepresented their product to the public by claiming that it may only cause allergic reactions
like itching and redness, when in reality, the drug was causing cornea infraction, hair growth
outside of the treatment area, and permanent darkening of eye color (Mapes).
To assign a single motive behind all these various forms of dishonesty, it would have to
be to increase a companys profits. The pharmaceutical industries want to market blockbuster
drugs, sell billions of dollars in products, and gain enormous profits. Based on their track record,
it appears that many of these companies will do almost anything to achieve this goal, The
bottom line is the drug companies arent going to protect you (Mercola). Unfortunately, until
the testing, permitting, advertising and motivation for high profit margins is corrected in the
pharmaceutical industries, it is important for one to question reported results in medical journals
and on safety labels before assuming any drug is safe.
Companies will purposely avoid revealing alternative options to staying healthy if the
options do not result in profit for them. This is why it is important for people to become educated

Comment [AP8]: How do you know this? That they are

purposefully avoiding revealing alternative options? i think you
can safely say that they have no interest in telling customers about
cheaper alternatives that dont require prescriptions. Otherwise, I
think you are inching toward conspiracy territory.

on the new field of medicine called Complementary and Alternative Medicine (CAM). The
practices are not profit-based and are proven to be just as beneficial, if not more than
conventional medicine. Complementary medicine is used together with conventional medicine;
for example, of the use of aroma therapy to reduce discomfort after surgery. Alternative
medicine is used instead of conventional medicine; examples include the use of special diets to
treat diabetes, or acupuncture to treat migraines. One very important task that the NIH is
attempting to do in establishing this new field of medicine by formalizing and carefully defining
the terms and the different types of treatment included in CAM.

Comment [AP9]: For example?

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The National Center for Complementary and Alternative Medicine (NCCAM) has
organized CAM into five major categories. One such category is the Alternative Medical
Systems: Approaches to medicine built upon complete systems of theory and practice (Get
the Facts). Some alternative medicines include homeopathic medicine, aromatherapy, and
traditional Chinese medicine. Acupuncture is an example of a traditional Chinese technique, and
is an extraordinarily effective alternative where trained practitioners use small, thin needles to
manipulate the bodys natural energy flow (Turner). By inserting these needles into a subset of
hundreds of specific points on the body, the acupuncturist can redirect energy and blood flow to
cure or prevent certain medical conditions. Many people are becoming more aware of the
positive affects acupuncture has to offer: Today, more than 3 million people in the U.S. use
acupuncture which treats more than 28 medical conditions, including pain, respiratory and
digestive disorders (Turner). Acupuncture is one of the many, very successful treatments
included as an alternative medical system.
The second category of CAM is Mind-Body Interventions. This form of CAM uses
vastly different techniques to enhance the minds capacity to affect bodily functions and
symptoms (Get the Facts). The central principle to this system is that the body and mind
are connected and can lead to faster healing if the two are working together for the patient.
Underlying this approach to treatment are such ideas as the power of positive thinking and
mind over matter. Other less-common techniques used in this category of CAM are
meditation, prayer, and mental healing.
The third CAM category is referred to as Biologically Based Therapies which use
substances found in nature such as herbs, foods, and vitamins (Get the Facts). For example,
because many vitamins become deficient under certain conditions they are needed at elevated

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concentrations when the body is stressed. There is a great deal of scientific evidence
documenting the essential health roles of Vitamin D, showing that ill health corresponds to low
levels of Vitamin D: Medical scientists and researchers have found that serum Vitamin D levels
are low in 90% of people with degenerative disease such as heart disease, cancer and
autoimmune disease (Healthy Living). Vitamin D is inexpensive, if not free, and promotes
maximal health in biologically based therapies.
The last two categories in CAM are Manipulative Body-Based methods and Energy

Comment [AP10]: Dont include hyperlinks in an academic

paper, particularly in a word document. (that is okay for the multi-
modal project, but not here; people accidentally click on them and
their computers go nuts).
Comment [AP11]: This isnt proof that Vitamin D is important
than a prescription drug; can you find a more specific?

Therapies. As the name implies in the Body-Based Methods, this form of therapy is based on
manipulating or moving parts of the body. Some examples include massage and chiropractic
manipulations. Energy Therapies involve the manipulation of energy fields. These energy
therapies involve biofield therapies, which affect energy fields surrounding and penetrating the
human body, and bioelectormagnetic-based therapies, which use electromagnetic fields, such as
pulsed or magnetic fields (Get the Facts). The Manipulative Body-Based Methods and the
Energy Therapies are the least common alternatives used, but still can be very effective and
beneficial toward ones health.
There have been road blocks in the development of CAM. The key road blocks all stem
from the desire for pharmaceutical and medical industries to maximize their profits and limit
options that may come in the way of maximizing profits. One of the greatest health concerns in
the U.S. is cancer, and one of the most effective over-the counter preventative supplements to
reduce the chance of cancer is vitamin D. Adams, a health editor for Natural News illustrates
and explains this problem: New research published that vitamin D supplementation produces an
astonished 77 percent reduction in all cancers in women, making it the single most effective
medicine for preventing cancer discovered by modern medical science (Adams). If this is true,

Comment [AP12]: Again, are you suggesting vitamin D is better

than a prescription drug, or just that Vitamin D can prevent cancer
(thus avoiding cancer-fighting medication later)?

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then why is vitamin D not used more often? As usual, it has nothing to do with the science, but
everything to do with the politics and profits. If vitamin D were a cancer drug made by Pfizer,
the American Cancer Society would likely be pushing it as the next miracle drug and calling
for everyone to be put on the drug (Adams). If there was ever a cancer prevention strategy to
get behind, vitamin D is it.
Another roadblock to the widespread use of vitamin D, or for that matter, any of the other
effective dietary supplements, is that these substances cannot be patented. Large pharmaceutical
companies are not interested in testing these products used by biologically based therapies
because no patent is needed and there is little profit to be made. Once a dietary supplement is
found to be effective, any company could sell it without paying the company that funded the
original research since all these alternatives are simple and easy to perform for very little cost.
Furthermore, the process of getting a medicine approved by the Food and Drug Administration
(FDA) commonly costs millions of dollars, money the pharmaceutical company will not be able
to completely recover. To date, vitamin D is not FDA approved for cancer treatment primarily
because no company or government agency has funded the multiple million dollar approval
process.
The discussion on the patenting dietary supplements highlights two important problems
with present day medicine: only those treatments that will yield a profit for the
medical/pharmaceutical industry will be tested in sufficient detail to pass the rigorous FDA
approval process, and there is little motivation to develop potentially highly effective medicines
and treatments that cannot be patented and may compete with a profitable, albeit less effective,
patented medicine. It is surprisingly common for large medical-based companies to limit health
options if it is not in their financial interest. These medical and pharmaceutical companies are

Comment [AP13]: Used how? This language doesnt should like

this person is talking about prevention so much as talking about
treatment. So im not buying this connection. Although, discussing
it in terms of prevention is more persuasive.

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simply profit-based companies that are not looking for the cheapest, most efficient ways to help
an individual, but the way that maximizes the profits for their companies.
Modern medicine does not have all the answers yet; indeed, scientists have been working
on some of the side effect troubles for half a century. Most alternative health care options have
had more success, at less cost, and less side effects. People should consider alternative health
care options because the medical industry, like any other free-market industry in the U.S., is
primarily motivated by profits when these industries main priority should be improving health.
By considering complementary or alternative health care, it is possible to obtain effective and
inexpensive care that the health care industry has chosen not to support.
Americas present healthcare is unsustainable in its present form because of increasing
costs, over-prescription of medicines, over-use of medical exams, negative side effects of drugs,
and greater incentive for industries to make profits than improving health care. The next
generation is already overweight, and being raised on junk foods, high doses of different
medications and vaccine injections, which will only lead to an even worsening in health. With
the newfound research on complementary and alternative drugs, Americans have the potential to
have improved health. Good health does not have to be complicated; it just takes the informed
realization that the patients have choices and they are not limited to traditional medical
approaches.
Savannah,
Youve done some really nice research here, and you do a good job synthesizing your research
with your voice. I do feel like you make some strong claims that you need to support before you
can make them (Ive highlighted a few in the margins). Be careful with your language; remember
that you are trying to persuade an audience, so try to make as few assumptions here as you can.
Good work here.

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Sept. 2013.
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Health Statistics, Richard L. Nahin, National Center for Complementary and Alternative
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Mapes, Diane. "In Lust for Lashes, Few Bat an Eye at Odd Risks." Msnbc.com. NBCNews.com,
01 Oct. 2009. Web. 12 Apr. 2016.

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