Appendix B
Criteria
with
Professio
nal
Standards
Referenc
ed
Outline
Outline Turned
In(Already
submitted for
points)
5
Exemplary
(97 100%)
4
Highly
Proficient
(93 96%)
3
Proficient
(83 92%)
2
Approaching
Proficient
(73 82%)
1
Unsatisfactory
(72%
and below)
Brief outline
with at least
5 original
peer
reviewed
references
written in
APA format
is
submitted.
Brief outline
with some
references but
not 5 original
peer reviewed
references
written in
APA format
are submitted.
Brief outline
No outline
with one or no was
references
submitted.
submitted.
Introduction
is fully
developed
with all
topics
introduced.
Introduction
is addressed
well,
somewhat
organized and
created a plan
for the paper
Introduction
is addressed
adequately.
Introduction is
omitted or
was
disorganized
and did not
create a plan
for the paper.
1. Literature
review
addresses
major issues
in the area.
2. Thorough
use of a
range of
1. Literature
review may
address major
issues, but
issues may
not be
supported
with expert
1. Literature
review does
not address
the major
issues in the
area; the level
of support for
the issues is
1. Literature
review does
not have the
depth of
knowledge
appropriate to
this upper
level course.
10 Points
Logical,
detailed outline
with at least 5
original peer
reviewed
references
written in APA
format is
submitted.
5 x 2=10
points
Introduction
10 Points
Introduction to
the topic and
overview (In
your purpose
statement also
introduce all
subtopics)
Introduction is
fully
developed,
well organized,
introduces all
topics, created
a plan for the
paper and
invites the
reader to read
further.
InTASC 1c,k;
5k; 9f; 10h
NAEYC 6b
NETS-T 3a,d;
4a,c
CEC EC2S1;
CC7K1;
EC7K1;CC9K4;
CC9S8
Literature
Review
Adequacy of
Knowledge
(includes 5 peer
reviewed
original research
articles
references)
InTASC 1c,k;
5k; 9f; 10h
5 x 2=10
points
15 Points
1. Literature
review
highlights
major issues in
the area.
2. Through use
of a range of
references to
support key
issues.
3. Description
of important
studies
establishes
context for the
reader.
4. Includes
more than 5
informative
references.
Synthesis of
Information
Synthesis of
Information
(what did the
articles
collectively say
about the topic?
Which authors
had similar and
different
findings?)
InTASC 1c,k;
5k; 9f; 10h
NAEYC 6b
NETS-T 3a,d;
4a,c
CEC EC2S1;
CC7K1;
EC7K1;CC9K4;
CC9S8
references
to support
key issues.
3. Includes
descriptions
of important
studies to
provide
context for
the reader.
knowledge.
2. Good use
of references,
but additional
references
may have
strengthened
the paper.
not adequate.
2. Includes 3
references.
2. Includes
less than 2
references.
3. Includes 4
references.
4. Includes
5 or more
references.
5 x 3=15
points
15 Points
1. Studies
covering the
same topic
synthesize
related
research.
2. Described
similar or
differing and
detailed
themes
throughout the
articles
3. Demonstrate
thoroughly
how your
research and
the data
collected
supports your
stance on why
your healthy
and active
school plan is
not only
Studies
covering the
same topic
are
summarized
and
integrated
level work.
Information is
presented
study-bystudy rather
than
summarized
by topic.
2. Described
similar or
differing
themes
throughout
the articles
which were
not detailed
3. Somewhat
emonstrated
how your
research and
the data
collected
supports your
stance on why
your healthy
and active
The literature
review is a
mixed set of
ideas without
a particular
focus.
The literature
review does
not
demonstrate a
particular
focus and
lacks ideas
based on the
subject
chosen.
2. Described
similar or
differing
themes
throughout the
articles,
however they
were not
detailed
3. Did not
demonstrate
how your
research and
the data
collected
school plan is
not only
important for
hope and
engagement at
your school
and in your
community,
but ties to
academic
success in
your
classroom as
well.
5 x 3=15
points
Practical
Implications
Practical
Implications
(Discuss how
the findings can
or will later be
applied to your
teaching setting)
InTASC 1c,k;
5k; 9f; 10h
NAEYC 6b
NETS-T 3a,d;
4a,c
CEC EC2S1;
CC7K1;
EC7K1;CC9K4;
CC9S8
supports your
stance on why
your healthy
and active
school plan is
not only
important for
hope and
engagement at
your school
and in your
community,
but ties to
academic
success in
your
classroom as
well.
30 Points
1. Practical
implications of
your event
details
including your
teaching level
and in a
particular
setting are
discussed
thoroughly. A
minimum of 6
topics are
applied.
2. Contains
thorough
discussion on
how each of
the 6
program/comp
onents that are
in place are
organized,
conducted, and
overseen or a
1. Pratical
implications
are
discussed
but not
related to a
particular
teaching
setting or
topic or
certain
details are
missing.
1. Pratical
implications
are discussed
but not at a
particularly
level or in a
particular
setting and
many details
of your event
are missing.
2. Contained
at least 4-5
components
of a
comprehensiv
e school
program;
however,
some of the
needed detail
is missing.
3. Contains
thorough
1. Practical
implications
are not
thoroughly
discussed and
only a few
details of the
event are
present
1. Practical
implications
are not
discussed and
no details of
the event are
present.
2. Contained 3
or fewer
components
of a
comprehensiv
e school
program
3. Contains
little
discussion on
which
programs/com
ponents are
currently in
place
4. Contains
discussion on
how most of
the
program/com
ponent that
are in place
are organized,
conducted,
and overseen
or a detailed
plan about
how the
components
can be added.
4. Most
programs/com
ponents
implemented
include
discussion on
modifications
for those with
disabilities.
5. Contained a
somewhat
detailed
description of
a special
event that
promotes a
healthy and
active school
environment
6. Contained
some
discussion on
a specific
health
behavior
highlighted by
the event
7. Specific
little
discussion on
how each
program/com
ponent is
organized,
conducted,
and overseen
and little
detail about
how the
components
can be added.
5. Few
programs/com
ponents
implemented
include
discussion on
modifications
for those with
disabilities.
6. Contained
little detail on
a special
event that
promotes a
healthy and
active school
environment
7. Contained
little
discussion on
a specific
health
behavior
highlighted by
the special
event
8. Specific
target grade
level was not
target grade
level was
somewhat
identified and
was
appropriate
for students of
that age
5 x 6=30
points
identified
and/or not
appropriate
for students of
that age
9. Contained
little
discussion on
how to
involve the
entire school
in the event
8. Contained
some
discussion on
how to
involve the
entire school
in the event
Conclusion
Conclusion
ITASC 1c,k; 5k;
9f; 10h
NAEYC 6b
NETS-T 3a,d;
4a,c
CEC EC2S1;
CC7K1;
EC7K1;CC9K4;
CC9S8
Writing and
Referencing
Style
First Draft of all
sections
submitted with
changes made
integrating
instructor
comments from
the outline
10 Points
Major issues
support and
establish
conclusions.
Integration of
instructor
comments from
All comments
from instructor
integrated into
The major
issues are
summarized
under
conclusions.
The
conclusions
are not
complete.
Provides
opinions, but
not a
summary of
findings.
No
conclusions
are included.
Detailed
draft of ALL
sections
with some
errors in
content
covered,
headings,
writing style
and/or
refernces in
APA 6.0
style.
Most
comments
from
Detailed draft
of MOST
sections with
some errors in
content
covered,
headings,
writing style
and/or
refernces in
APA 6.0 style.
Missing
sections or
paper has
regular errors
across content
covered,
headings,
writing style
and/or
refernces in
APA 6.0 style.
Incomplete
(missing half
of the
requirements)
or completely
missing paper.
Some
comments
from
Very few
comments
from
No comments
from
instructor
5 x 2=10
points
10 Points
Detailed draft
of all sections
of the paper
with
appropriate
content,
headers,
writing style,
and references
in APA 6.0
style.
final version.
All were
highlighted in
yellow
Writing and
referencing style
1. Cover page
included,
proper spelling
and grammar,
all references
in APA 6.0
style. Paper
was
appropriate
length (at least
5 pages)
instructor
integrated
into final
version. All
were
highlighted
in yellow
1. Cover
page
included,
few
grammatical
errors and
misspellings
, all
references
in APA 6.0
style.
instructor
integrated into
final version.
Most were
highlighted in
yellow
instructor
integrated into
final version.
Most were
highlighted in
yellow
integrated into
final version.
The changes
were not
highlighted
1. Cover page
included,
some
grammatical
errors and
misspellings,
some errors in
referencing
style APA 6.0.
1. Cover page
not included,
many
grammatical
errors and
misspellings,
some errors in
referencing
style APA 6.0.
1. Cover page
not included,
major
grammatical
errors and
misspellings,
many errors in
referencing
style APA 6.0.
2. Paper was
too short for
the topic (1-2
pages)
2. Paper was
too short for
the topic (1-2
pages)
2. Paper was
too short for
2. The file
2. Paper was the topic (3-4
document
appropriate pages)
name
length (at
contains
least 5
3. The file
Lastname.first pages)
name
name.assignme
somewhat
nt#.course#
contains the
Lastname.first
3. This rubric
name.assignm
was added to
ent#.course#
the last page of
the document
4. This rubric
submitted
was added but
not at the end
4. All
of the
sentences are
document
clear and well
submitted
developed
5. Most
sentences are
5. Proposals
clear and well
and events are
developed
appropriate
length with
6. Proposals
standard
and events are
margins, font,
mostly
and size of text
appropriate
3. The file
document
name does not
contain the
Lastname.first
name.assignm
ent#.course#
4. This rubric
was not added
to the
document
submitted
5. Many
sentences are
not clear and
underdevelop
ed
6. Proposals
and events are
not of
appropriate
length with
larger than
standard
margins, font
and size of
text