First Drafts
Purpos
e
Good Start
Emerging
Excellent
6+
7+
8+
9+
No clear
purpose
o Your speech
has no goal
o
audience
o No illustrated
understanding
of audience
Registe
r
Somewhat
interesting
purpose
o Your purpose is
a little
confusing
o Your speech
probably would
not accomplish
your goal
o Speech is not a
good match for
audience yet
o Illustrates
preliminary
understand of
audience
o
o
o
o
Interesting
purpose
Your purpose is
somewhat clear
Your speech
might
accomplish your
goal
Above &
Beyond
10
Thoughtprovoking
purpose
o Your purpose is
clear
o Your speech
would
accomplish
your goal
Speech is great
match for
audience
o Illustrates good
understanding
of what this
audience wants
Speech is good
match for
audience
o Illustrates okay
understanding
of what this
audience wants
o The formality
of your
language is
adequate for
your purpose
and audience
o The formality
of your
language is
good for your
purpose and
audience
Compelling
purpose
o Your purpose is
explicitly clear
o Your speech
would
accomplish
your goal
Speech is
perfect match
in formality for
audience
o Illustrates deep
understanding
of what this
audience wants
o Your language
is perfect level
of formality for
your purpose
and audience
Purpos
e
Good Start
Emerging
Excellent
6+
7+
8+
9+
No clear
purpose
o Your speech
has no goal
o
audience
o No illustrated
understanding
of audience
Registe
r
Somewhat
interesting
purpose
o Your purpose is
a little
confusing
o Your speech
probably would
not accomplish
your goal
o Speech is not a
good match for
audience yet
o Illustrates
preliminary
understand of
audience
o
o
o
o
Interesting
purpose
Your purpose is
somewhat clear
Your speech
might
accomplish your
goal
Above &
Beyond
10
Thoughtprovoking
purpose
o Your purpose is
clear
o Your speech
would
accomplish
your goal
Speech is great
match for
audience
o Illustrates good
understanding
of what this
audience wants
Speech is good
match for
audience
o Illustrates okay
understanding
of what this
audience wants
o The formality
of your
language is
adequate for
your purpose
and audience
o The formality
of your
language is
good for your
purpose and
audience
Compelling
purpose
o Your purpose is
explicitly clear
o Your speech
would
accomplish
your goal
Speech is
perfect match
in formality for
audience
o Illustrates deep
understanding
of what this
audience wants
o Your language
is perfect level
of formality for
your purpose
and audience
o You neither
incorporated
feedback nor
improved
your piece.
o You
incorporated
a little bit of
feedback but
didnt
improve your
piece.
o You
incorporated
parts of
feedback and
made a few
changes that
improved your
piece.
o You
incorporated
feedback and
made changes
that improved
your piece.
You
incorporated
most feedback
and made
significant
changes that
improved your
piece.