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compound, and complex sentences and then adding adjective clauses into the
mix can result in some confusing situations regarding punctuation. There are
some specific rules when punctuation is permissible or required around
adjective clauses (when the information in the adjective clause is nonessential information); however, in my composition classes, I insist that
students NOT use commas around adjective clauses for several reasons.
First, non-essential information should generally be avoided in academic
writing, at least in the short essays required for these composition classes.
Thus, not including the commas will more often be right than wrong.
Second, my Spanish speaking students have a natural tendency to write long
sentences using many commas inappropriately. By not using commas around
adjective clauses, students can perhaps more readily recognize when a period
is required.
Third, I believe it is easier to learn to apply commas later when they are
required than the other way around. Indiscriminate use of commas is a hard
habit to undo in my experience. Therefore do not use commas around
adjective clauses, at least for one semester. Are you ready to take the quiz?
This quiz is very difficult. These sentences are actually the hardest I could
find (in the sense that you need to know ALL the rules in order to get them all
correct), so please follow the directions carefully.
1. Do not use commas in any of the completed sentences.
2. Make adjective clauses of the second sentence in every case. (Obviously,
any of these sentences could be written using the first sentence as the
adjective clause; however, making adjective clauses of the second sentence is
harder because it requires knowledge of all the "rules" of writing adjective
clauses.)
3. Spell correctly! This quiz is "graded" by computer, so any spelling mistake
or punctuation error, like forgetting a period at the end of a sentence, will be
counted wrong.
4. Put the adjective clause immediately after the noun phrase it modifies
(the repeated noun):
The book which I like is on the table.
The man who wants the book is here.
1. REDUCING Verb To Be RP + BE = 0
People who are living in glass houses should not throw stones. (clause)
People living in glass houses should not throw stones. (phrase)
Mary applied for a job that was advertised in the paper. (clause)
Mary applied for a job advertised in the paper. (phrase)
2. RP + OTHER VERB (not BE) = OTHER VERB + ing
People who live in glass houses should not throw stones. (clause)
People living in glass houses should not throw stones. (phrase)
Students who sit in the front row usually participate more. (clause)
Students sitting in the front row usually participate more. (phrase)
All of the words in red are adjectives. They are describing the nouns (the
words in blue).
Here are some more examples:
THERE IS STILL A PROBLEM. When you use adjective clauses, you often
need a word that connects the noun with the adjective clause. The word
acts like glue and keeps the noun and the adjective clause together. This
word is called the relative pronoun. For our purposes, lets call it the RP
(relative pronoun).
So, here are the rules:
If the NOUN is a
then the RP is
person
>>
who or that
thing
>>
which or that
Who, which, and that are just three RPs. There are more RPs
(whom, whose), but they will be discussed in a later lesson.
Sometimes, you dont need the RP. A good rule to remember: If the
word after the RP is a verb, you must have the RP there. If the word after
the RP is not a verb, you probably dont need it.
Example:
The word after the RP is you. You is not a verb. Therefore, the following
sentence is also correct.
I just bought the book you recommended
When the noun is a proper name (and begins with a capital letter), do
NOT use that.
CORRECT
CORRECT
INCORRECT
Lastly, do not include the noun or use a pronoun that refers to the noun
you are describing.
Example: The concert was loud. I went to it.
CORRECT
INCORRECT
Quiz Time
Directions: Put the two sentences together to create one sentence by
making an adjective clause. Note: There may be more than one
answer.
1. I love movies. Movies are exciting.
2. Do you have a dog? The dog is large with white fur.
3. She is the lady. The lady helped me find the magazine I was looking
for.
8. New York's Long Island has a booming real estate market. Long Island
is shaped like a fish.
Answer: New York's Long Island, which is shaped like a fish, has a
booming real estate market.
9. The manager is from Brazil. She is in my office. Answers: The
manager who is in my office is from Brazil. The manager that is in my
office is from Brazil
.
10. The music is rock and roll. I listen to the music.Answers: The music
that I listen to is rock and roll. The music which I listen to is rock and roll.
The music I listen to is rock and roll.
Rules to Remember!
1
Adjective clauses are adjectives. However, they look like sentences
because they have verbs and nouns. Adjective clauses are placed AFTER
the noun they are describing. Example: The music that I listen to is rock
and roll.
2
When you use adjective clauses, you often need a word that connects the
noun with the adjective clause. The word acts like glue and keeps the noun
and the adjective clause together. This word is called the relative
pronoun. When the noun is a person, use that or who. When the noun is
a thing, use that or which. Example: Cars which run on electricity are very
efficient.
3
Sometimes, you dont need the RP. A good rule to remember: If the word
after the RP is a verb, you must have the RP there. If the word after the RP
is not a verb, you probably dont need it. Example: I just bought the
book that you recommended.
The word after the RP is you. You is not a verb. Therefore, the following
sentence is also correct.v I just bought the book you recommended.
4 When the noun is a proper name (and begins with a capital letter), do NOT
use that. Example: Mount Everest, which is the highest mountain in the
world, is very dangerous to climb.
5 Some adjective clauses are necessary in the sentence; some adjective
clauses are not necessary, but they are used just to give extra
information. When the adjective clause is NOT necessary, use
commas. When the adjective clause IS necessary, dont use commas.
6 In addition, when the adjective clause is not necessary at all (it just adds
extra information), that is usually not used. Example: New York's Long
Island, which is shaped like a fish, has a booming real estate market.
7 Do not include the noun or use a pronoun that refers to the noun you are
describing. Example: The speech was too long. My friend gave it. The
speech which my friend gave was too long.
(no it.)
How's the grammar? You may have learned that when you write adjective
clauses, use when with time words and where with place words. However,
that is only part of the story. There are some simple rules to remember. Look
at the above examples. We used when withtime (a time word)
and where with place (a place word). Are the above sentences correct?
NO. Let us explain.
In this lesson, we will discuss adjective clauses. We strongly recommend you
read our first lesson on adjective clauses in order to thoroughly understand
this lesson. We will republish part of the first lesson about adjective clauses
here.
Adjective clauses are adjectives. However, they look like sentences because
they have verbs and nouns. Take a look at the following sentences with
adjectives.
All of the words in red are adjectives. They are describing the nouns (the
words in blue). Here are some more examples:
Rules to Remember!
1
1. Simple Sentences
sentences, but simple sentences often are short. The use of too many
simple sentences can make writing "choppy" and can prevent the writing
from flowing smoothly.
A simple sentence can also be referred to as an independent clause. It
is referred to as "independent" because, while it might be part of a
compound or complex sentence, it can also stand by itself as a complete
sentence.
2. Compound Sentences
For And
Nor
But
Or
Yet
So
Clearer and more specific relationships can be established through the use
of complex sentences.
3. Complex Sentences
because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon
"but," but both parts could still stand as independent sentences -- they are
entirely equal, and the reader cannot tell which is most important. In the
third example, however, the sentence has changed quite a bit: the first
clause, "Although my friend invited me to a party," has become
incomplete, or a dependent clause.
A complex sentence is very different from a simple sentence or a
compound sentence because it makes clear which ideas are most
important. When you write
My friend invited me to a party. I do not want to go.
or even
My friend invited me to a party, but I do not want to go.
The reader will have trouble knowing which piece of information is most
important to you. When you write thesubordinating conjunction "although"
at the beginning of the first clause, however, you make it clear that the
fact that your friend invited you is less important than, orsubordinate, to
the fact that you do not want to go.
Written by David Megginson
6. Unless my girlfriend postpones her visit from Calgary, I will not have
time to study for my exam.
7. Susanne wanted to be here, but she cannot come because her car is
in the shop.
8. The football game was cancelled because it was raining.
9. The football game was cancelled because of the rain.
10.
When the train arrives and if Ms. Langlois is on it, she will be
served with a subpoena.
When / Where
"Flower Child" in San Francisco
in the 1960s.Adding descriptive information for time or place
when
The city
where the "flower
children" lived, is a colorful city.
The "flower
children" lived there.
INDEPENDENT
CLAUSE
DEPENDENT CLAUSE
4. Add punctuation if
the clause
is nonidentifying.
San Francisco,
INDEPENDENT
CLAUSE
DEPENDENT CLAUSE
4. Add punctuation if
the clause
is nonidentifying.
The 1960s,
ON WHICH
IN WHICH
exact address or
residence
the house
in which I
work is
here.
in which I
work is
nearby.
in which I
pay
taxes is
Utah.
ON WHICH
IN WHICH
day
the time
on which I
eat
lunch is
noon.
was bornwas
snowy.
the hour
on which I
the season in which I
work (Tuesda
pay
y)
taxes is
spring.
the time
on which I
quit (June
31)
Using Commas
pay
taxes is
April.
the year
in which I
will
retire is
near.
Identifying vs.
nonidentifying clauses
AN IDENTIFYING CLAUSE
A NON-IDENTIFYING CLAUSE
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