What the audience thought How we reacted to this feedback

They really liked the cross dissolves and thought We made sure that we had these cross dissolves
that they were vital in reflecting the mood which we whenever the music was slow and gloomy, to
wanted to convey. convey the reflective mood we wished to create
One of my friends pointed out how the suicide We immediately changed it so that it was the same
scene was a bit off- colour, where we had used the colour.
colour corrector, we had not made it completely the
same colour
They suggested that we include more graveyard Luckily, we had some graveyard footage that we had
scenes as this was a focal point of our video. not already used therefore we could add this to
make sure there was more footage there.
They really liked the use of chroma key and thought We were really pleased that the audience saw this in
it was a really good way to present how the love was the same way we saw it, because this is specifically
still continuous while the character’s whole world what we wanted to convey.
was black and white
They liked the cross dissolve in-between the pills We all reviewed this, and lengthened it slightly, so it
and the roses in the suicide scene but one friend had maximum impact.
commented that it could be a bit longer