Audience Feedback Form

Producer Name: Rebecca Smith Title of Production: Norgaard by The Vaccines promotional package Audience Details: Emma Pople, 17 Description of Work discussed / observed Magazine Advert First Draft Comments: Magazine Advert I like the main image used, as it is eye catching and effective but does not deter all the audiences attention especially due to the faded slightly old fashioned effect, for example from the name of the band and record, as these are just as, if not more important. So I think you should keep this as it is. You could include more details about the product, like the website for the band and the company logos etc. Also the text at the bottom of the page doesnt look that professional, you could change the font for it goes better with the page and feel of the band. Action To Be Taken: I will continue to receive audience feedback on my products, to ensure that the suggested changes are popular ideas. I will also add the company logo to the magazine advert, as this will make it look more realistic and professional, thus more like an existing product. I may change the font at the bottom of the page, but I may try to receive more feedback from others on what fonts would look more effective and thus improve my product. Date: 19/12/11