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Adam Ferris completed a unit on the armed forces for his National Certificate in Public Services. His presentation described three areas of work in the army - area 1, area 2, and area 3 - but lacked depth and examples. The grader noted Adam provided basic descriptions with some examples, but needed to add more detail on the importance of each area and provide more in-depth examples of their roles and responsibilities to improve. Adam received a pass grade.
Adam Ferris completed a unit on the armed forces for his National Certificate in Public Services. His presentation described three areas of work in the army - area 1, area 2, and area 3 - but lacked depth and examples. The grader noted Adam provided basic descriptions with some examples, but needed to add more detail on the importance of each area and provide more in-depth examples of their roles and responsibilities to improve. Adam received a pass grade.
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Adam Ferris completed a unit on the armed forces for his National Certificate in Public Services. His presentation described three areas of work in the army - area 1, area 2, and area 3 - but lacked depth and examples. The grader noted Adam provided basic descriptions with some examples, but needed to add more detail on the importance of each area and provide more in-depth examples of their roles and responsibilities to improve. Adam received a pass grade.
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Public Service Presentation AO2 - Describe three different areas of work in your chosen armed force
Excellent description with extensive examples
COMMENT
Area 1 of the Army
x x x
Area 2 of the Army Area 3 of the Army Importance of chosen areas
Overall comments/Suggestions for improvement:
Adam you provided basic descriptions of 3 different areas of the army with some examples. To improve you need to add more information on the importance of the chosen areas as well as more in depth examples of there roles and responsibilities.