Writer:

Level 301 Peer Review: Descriptive Paragraph Reader: Yes Yes No No No No No somewhat somewhat

1. Does the paragraph have a title? 2. Is the first line of the paragraph indented? Write it below:

3. Does the paragraph have a topic sentence? 4. If yes, does the topic sentence contain the main idea of the paragraph? 5. Is the topic sentence related to the supporting sentences? 6. How many supporting sentences are there? 7. Do the supporting sentences flow smoothly? 8. Does the writer use enough descriptive adjectives? 9. Can you see, hear, taste, touch, feel the view that the writer is describing? 10. Does the paragraph contain a concluding sentence? 11. Did you have difficulty understanding the paragraph? 12. Does the write need to work on the paragraph? Final Comments:

Yes Yes Yes

Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes

No No No No No No

somewhat Not enough somewhat somewhat somewhat somewhat

Writer:

Level 301 Peer Review: Descriptive Paragraph Reader: Yes Yes No No No No No somewhat somewhat

1. Does the paragraph have a title? 2. Is the first line of the paragraph indented? Write it below:

3. Does the paragraph have a topic sentence? 4. If yes, does the topic sentence contain the main idea of the paragraph? 5. Is the topic sentence related to the supporting sentences? 6. How many supporting sentences are there? 7. Do the supporting sentences flow smoothly? 8. Does the writer use enough descriptive adjectives? 9. Can you see, hear, taste, touch, feel the view that the writer is describing? 10. Does the paragraph contain a concluding sentence? 11. Did you have difficulty understanding the paragraph? 12. Does the write need to work on the paragraph? Final Comments:

Yes Yes Yes

Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes

No No No No No No

somewhat Not enough somewhat somewhat somewhat somewhat

Writer:

Level 301 Peer Review: Descriptive Paragraph Reader: Yes Yes No No No No No somewhat somewhat

13. Does the paragraph have a title? 14. Is the first line of the paragraph indented? Write it below:

15. Does the paragraph have a topic sentence? 16. If yes, does the topic sentence contain the main idea of the paragraph? 17. Is the topic sentence related to the supporting sentences? 18. How many supporting sentences are there? 19. Do the supporting sentences flow smoothly? 20. Does the writer use enough descriptive adjectives? 21. Can you see, hear, taste, touch, feel the view that the writer is describing? 22. Does the paragraph contain a concluding sentence? 23. Did you have difficulty understanding the paragraph? 24. Does the write need to work on the paragraph? Final Comments:

Yes Yes Yes

Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes

No No No No No No

somewhat Not enough somewhat somewhat somewhat somewhat

Writer:

Level 301 Peer Review: Descriptive Paragraph Reader: Yes Yes No No No No No somewhat somewhat

13. Does the paragraph have a title? 14. Is the first line of the paragraph indented? Write it below:

15. Does the paragraph have a topic sentence? 16. If yes, does the topic sentence contain the main idea of the paragraph? 17. Is the topic sentence related to the supporting sentences? 18. How many supporting sentences are there? 19. Do the supporting sentences flow smoothly? 20. Does the writer use enough descriptive adjectives? 21. Can you see, hear, taste, touch, feel the view that the writer is describing? 22. Does the paragraph contain a concluding sentence? 23. Did you have difficulty understanding the paragraph? 24. Does the write need to work on the paragraph? Final Comments:

Yes Yes Yes

Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes

No No No No No No

somewhat Not enough somewhat somewhat somewhat somewhat