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1. Research models and methods 2. Developing a research proposal
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This module will help you to: learn about various research models. prepare a research proposal. structure your thesis and its chapters. write convincingly of your research outcomes and implications
A number of studies during the 70s seemed to suggest that younger students obtained better degree results than older students. Studies in a number of countries (Warren, 1975; Barlow, 1978; Smith, 1979) all seemed to confirm original findings by Brown et al (1970). All of these studies, however, were based on only small samples of students who were aged between seventeen and twenty-one and the correlation techniques employed in the studies meant that the relationship between age and performance really only concerned this narrow age band. A closer look at the findings from Browns original study actually suggests that the relationship between age and performance disappears when controlled for intelligence.
In this excerpt from a literature review, youll notice that the writer puts his or her own argument at the end of the section. A series of arguments or evidence is presented then refuted; this allows the writer to present .an alternative. Notice how the use of seemed in the first sentence indicates a lack of credibility in the results. The writer presents argument that refutes earlier research. Notice the use of however to signpost the contrary view the writer is putting forward.
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A number of studies during the 80s reported evidence that supports an opposing view, ie. that older students are just as successful, in terms of degree results, as younger students. Philips and Cullen (1985), for instance, found that those aged twenty-four and over tended to do better than the eighteen and nineteen-year-old age group. Other studies have found that older students, those who delayed entry to university for a year or two, are more successful than those who enter directly from school (Spicer & Owen 1986; Frome 1988; Reynolds 1988). Even more studies since then have reported evidence that suggests that neither of the above views can be accepted too readily. They suggest that the relationship between age and performance is not a linear one, in either direction. Sanders study (1987) found that the university success rate actually fell until the age of twenty or twenty-one, at which point it rose again. Brown (1989) found that The conflicting data resulting from all of these studies suggest that it may be too simplistic to suggest that increasing age brings either more or less success: other factors can account for the apparent relationship between age and performance: To provide conclusive evidence, a study is needed that includes subjects across a broad age range, that gathers data about a range of related factors and that carries out a multivariate analysis of factors on the results
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Here, the writer presents evidence from research that further refutes the earlier research.
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Notice the role that topic sentences play in signposting both the new evidence being presented and the direction being taken by the author. Here, the writer signals a position that refutes both of the previous arguments, then goes on to support that with evidence from research . The writer now puts forward his/her own point of view.
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(Adapted from Bell (1987) Doing your research project Bristol: Open University)
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Linguistic tools to Example sentences help signal levels of certainty/uncertainty any unqualified verbs The results indicate that Is/are The present results are evidence that suggest The present results suggest that can The present results can also be used to address Piagets (1959) claims. could The findings could indicate that may The findings may suggest that . possibly The work is possibly indicative of
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High degree of certainty High degree of certainty Medium degree of certainty Medium degree of certainty
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Successful persuasion in the scientific and generally the academic context also often occurs less obviously when writers are trying to put the best spin on their results and when readers are not aware they have been persuaded. The language through which persuasion occurs has to be implicit, and not obvious to the reader. Consider the following example on the left; the annotations on the right highlight the persuasive features of the example text.
The present results can also be used to address Piagets (1959) claims.. Notice that the things that Piaget has reported are referred to by the authors as claims rather than results. This effectively demotes Piagets results without saying so explicitly. Piaget argued that children under the age Here, the authors write that Piaget argued, of seven years, especially between the suggesting that what he said was an ages of three and five years, find it difficult interpretation which can be argued to accommodate the perspectives of against, rather than a result which their listeners. would have the status of a fact. The results of the present study, however, The authors here refer to their own indicate that children between the ages research as results. They also use the of 3 and 4 years do adapt to differences reporting verb indicates rather than a in listener status and say thank you more verb with more uncertain status such frequently to adults than to peers. as suggests. These findings support the results of In this sentence, the writers research is previous studies in which preschoolers similarly referred to as These findings recognized differences in listener status which are then interpreted as supporting and adjusted their use of politeness similar findings. By linking the findings routines accordingly [references]. to other similar findings, the authors establish a greater level of significance for their own research (pp. 193-199). (Adapted from Hunston, S. 1994, pp. 193 199)
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Youll notice, no doubt, that the writers of those sentences feel Piaget was probably wrong in this particular area, and that they are most probably right, even though they have said neither of these things explicitly. It has only been implied. Whats more, you might feel that youve been persuaded to share the authors views because of the way theyve implied certain things.
Strategic vagueness
As well as persuading readers covertly, as the last section showed, there are ways of leaving out or underplaying certain information that effectively allows your argument to be more persuasive. This is called strategic vagueness: it results from the backgrounding of some points and the foregrounding of others. An example of such vagueness is the text below.
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The results of the present study indicate that children between the ages of 3 and 4 years do adapt to differences in listener status and say thank you more frequently to adults than to peers. This finding supports the results of previous studies in which preschoolers recognized differences in listener status and adjusted their use of politeness routines accordingly [references].
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A number of studies during the 70s seemed to suggest that younger students obtained better degree results than older students. Studies in a number of countries (Warren, 1975; Barlow, 1978; Smith, 1979, etc.) all seemed to confirm original findings by Brown et al (1970). All of these studies, however, were based on only small samples of students who were aged between seventeen and twenty-one and the correlation techniques employed in the studies meant that ...
Notice that the writers do not discuss to what degree preschoolers recognise differences in listener status, and to what degree they adjust their use of politeness markers. To what degree may not be relevant to the argument, and so the numbers are not given. This has the effect of chanelling the readers attention, backgrounding some points and foregrounding others. This lack of information about to what degree preschoolers recognize differences in listener status could also be an intentional vagueness on the part of the researchers. To be more specific, or less vague, would provide information that could be less supportive of their own results. A reader might ask why the author hasnt spelt out more about these studies: the number of them, the countries in which they were carried out, the degree to which their results supported each others findings, and so on. The writer may have chosen to be vague about them because it may have provided information that would be less supportive of the argument being set up.
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While strategic vagueness is a feature of academic discourse, letting an examiner think that you dont know the field by leaving out relevant information or that you have deliberately tried to distort the field will almost certainly detract from the success of your thesis
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Conclusion
This resource has provided some examples of the way language functions to persuade and evaluate, to modify the degree of certainty attached to a knowledge proposition, and to create strategic vagueness. As a research student, part of the process of successfully participating in your chosen discourse community involves learning and negotiating the way your discipline uses these persuasive tools so that you are able to use them in ways that are valid within the discipline.
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References
Bell, ? (1987) Doing your research project Bristol: Open University. Bizzell, P. (1982). College composition: initiation into the academic discourse community. Curriculum Inquiry, 12(2), 191-207. Halliday, M. A. K. (1994). An Introduction to Functional Grammar (2nd edition ed.). London: Arnold. Hunston Susan. (1994). Evaluation and organization in a sample of written academic discourse. Coulthard Malcolm (editor), Advances in Written Text Analysis (pp. 191-218). London: Routledge. Hyland, K. (1994). Hedging in academic writing and EAP textbooks. English for Specific Purposes, 13(3), 239-256.
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Latour, B., & Woolgar, S. (1979). Laboratory Life: the social construction of scientific facts. Beverley Hills, CA: Sage. Myers, G. (1996). Strategic vagueness in academic writing. In E. Ventola, & A. Mauranen (Editors), Academic writing: intercultural and textual issues (pp. 3-18). Amsterdam: John Benjamins. Swales, J. (1990). Genre analysis. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press. Thomson, E., Woodward-Kron, R., Humphrey, S., Droga, L., & Dreyfus, S. Learning disciplinary discourses, learning grammar: exploring academic discourses using SFL with undergraduates. International Systemic Functional Conference 2000.
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