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AL WATANIA READY MIX CONCRETE COMPANY Farwania-dhajeej Bobyan coplex buldg.72 Mezaneen office 19 p.o box no. 4887 code no.32079 kuwait tel off.24333342/44 regarding mr. singh in company

AL WATANIA READY MIX CONCRETE COMPANY Farwania-dhajeej Bobyan coplex buldg.72 Mezaneen office 19 p.o box no. 4887 code no.32079 kuwait tel off.24333342/44 regarding mr. singh in company

AL WATANIA READY MIX CONCRETE COMPANY Farwania-dhajeej Bobyan coplex buldg.72 Mezaneen office 19 p.o box no. 4887 code no.32079 kuwait tel off.24333342/44 regarding mr. singh in company

AL WATANIA READY MIX CONCRETE COMPANY Farwania-dhajeej Bobyan coplex buldg.72 Mezaneen office 19 p.o box no. 4887 code no.32079 kuwait tel off.24333342/44 regarding mr. singh in company

AL WATANIA READY MIX CONCRETE COMPANY Farwania-dhajeej Bobyan coplex buldg.72 Mezaneen office 19 p.o box no. 4887 code no.32079 kuwait tel off.24333342/44 regarding mr. singh in company

AL WATANIA READY MIX CONCRETE COMPANY Farwania-dhajeej Bobyan coplex buldg.72 Mezaneen office 19 p.o box no. 4887 code no.32079 kuwait tel off.24333342/44 regarding mr. singh in company

AL WATANIA READY MIX CONCRETE COMPANY Farwania-dhajeej Bobyan coplex buldg.72 Mezaneen office 19 p.o box no. 4887 code no.32079 kuwait tel off.24333342/44 regarding mr. singh in company

IELTS Writing Task 2: problem/solution essay


Here's my full essay for the question we've been working on. In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations. It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems. As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives. There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens. In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older. (265 words, band 9)
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You can follow this conversation by subscribing to the comment feed for this post. Hi Simon Thank you so much for your work, it is so helpful for many of us. I have a question with a title "Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities". So for type of question, i should only write about solutions or it is also a problem/solution question and i will structure my essay as yours( first body paragraph is problem, second is solution)?
Posted by: thangngovan | Wednesday, January 30, 2013 at 14:36

Hi Simon and everyone. Here is my essay for the question above. Every comment is a precious advice for me Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities. It is true that traffic jam is growing issue for many big cities. There are undoubtedly some negative consequences, we can take steps to mitigate these impacts of this problem. One of the effective measures to deal with the traffic problem is upgrading transport infrastructure. The fact that the wider streets and bridges are, the easier means of transports can move. In other words, space of traffic is larger and therefore vehicles can flow more convenient and there is bigger number of means can be on road. To have modern infrastructure, government

should increase spending more on facilities or encourage private enterprises invest in this sector and allow them to charge fee on people when they drive on roads, bridges or underground tunnels built from companies budgets. There is an alternative method as reduce the number of citizens in large cities. When there are fewer people in the urban areas, it means that there is smaller number of vehicles running on the roads. To reach this target, authorities could develop rural areas, relocate the universities, hospital and trade center far from cities. Governments also formulate policies to cut the populations of these cities by restriction of immigration from rural areas. For instance, if a person wants to settle in urban areas, they need to have a steady job for a companies based on cities in time at least 2 years. Traffic congestion is pressing problem for lots of cities but there are various measure to tackle or mitigate the effects of this issue. (253 words)
Posted by: thangngovan | Wednesday, January 30, 2013 at 16:55

Hi Simon, I really do appreciate all your works have done here. The interesting thing is that I always have seen the simplicity and clarity within your essays. You've really adhered to your principle during running your site, unlike other sites, even those who are native and want to write beyond Band 9, you come with simplicity to show where is Band 9, not write in that way that makes candidates bitterly disappointed to achieve higher scores. However, when I take a glimps of your essay saw it begins with" it is" ?? As some writes hold the opinion that DO NOT BEGIN with " it is"?? please let me know whether I made a mistake. The second thing I want to ask you put more task2 essays as homework , for example once a week. Thank you for your efforts.
Posted by: Salamat | Wednesday, January 30, 2013 at 19:21

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations? Technology In todays life is unlikely to be denied in its invaluable resource at nearly most sectors in our life time especially health and care provisions. This unprecedented influence shows a clear increase in peoples overall life expectancy in developed countries list. Reasonable and prudent measures are obliged to tackle this phenomenon. One of the most significant problems facing local authorities in advanced countries is how to fund these pensioners in terms of caring , health and accommodation services. That means a basic rate taxpayer has to feed the required allocated substantial budget that financing ageing people services. For example, the UK authorities provide almost a comprehensive support to pensioners for more than two decades after being retired. Being victims of fraud and car accidents is another issue; they are vulnerable ad suffering from a wide range of elderly chronic diseases such dementia and insomnia . Financial issue could be tackled by imposing an extra money support to the anticipated budget for these elders . For example, There are schemes of charities work together to raise some money to fund these budgets, this could be done by selling their houses if they are having one. Most pensioners houses are no longer needed because they inclined to spend the rest of their life at care homes. Thus , this money may give a minor relief to tax payers citizens. Post caution road signs are required in the areas where these pensioners live in order to mitigate the unanticipated incidents. To conclude, It is absolutely essential to take a part in this society to help the local authorities to backing their ideologies in this matter fiscally, emotionally and managerially. This will help in improving the image of their countries.

Posted by: ANERBAS | Thursday, January 31, 2013 at 00:22

Hi May someone wrires an essay about this? As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young chikdren's social behavior and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?
Posted by: Nj | Thursday, January 31, 2013 at 09:37 Post a comment

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