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My Writing Review

In my story I have:
My Teacher's opinion opinion

My Writing Review
In my story I have:
My Teacher's opinion opinion

v a clear opening v 2 or more events in sequence v 2 characters v story language v some sentences with capital letters & full stops v simple connectives (and, but, so, then) v simple vocabulary (make, do, get, have, thing) I am working at Level 2 v a sensible order of events & a simple ending v a setting v more details about the characters v at least half the sentences correctly punctuated v some speech marks v connectives (but, when, also, because, so) v subjects & verbs generally agree v simple noun phrases (one frosty day) & adverbs I am working at Level 3 v good plot with pace and logical events v lively writing to interest reader v characterisation & character interaction v correct speech layout and correct tenses/voice v mostly correct punctuation including commas v complex sentences with connectives (although, if) v expanded noun/adverbial phrases (a fierce, howling wind) I am working at Level 4 v well-structured paragraphs, appropriate to chosen genre v narrative techniques (flashback, asides, dual action) v some indication of thoughts/feelings of characters v range of punctuation to enhance plot (add humour, pace) v range of simple & complex sentences & precise language v imaginative vocabulary I am working at Level 5

v a clear opening v 2 or more events in sequence v 2 characters v story language v some sentences with capital letters & full stops v simple connectives (and, but, so, then) v simple vocabulary (make, do, get, have, thing) I am working at Level 2 v a sensible order of events & a simple ending v a setting v more details about the characters v at least half the sentences correctly punctuated v some speech marks v connectives (but, when, also, because, so) v subjects & verbs generally agree v simple noun phrases (one frosty day) & adverbs I am working at Level 3 v good plot with pace and logical events v lively writing to interest reader v characterisation & character interaction v correct speech layout and correct tenses/voice v mostly correct punctuation including commas v complex sentences with connectives (although, if) v expanded noun/adverbial phrases (a fierce, howling wind) I am working at Level 4 v well-structured paragraphs, appropriate to chosen genre v narrative techniques (flashback, asides, dual action) v some indication of thoughts/feelings of characters v range of punctuation to enhance plot (add humour, pace) v range of simple & complex sentences & precise language v imaginative vocabulary I am working at Level 5

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