Identify and underline the dangling modifiers in the following passage. Then,
revise these sentences to eliminate errors of dangling modifiers in the space
between the lines.
Home Alone
Every day, thousands of children in Hong Kong come home after school to an
empty apartment. Thinking that it is safe to leave children at home alone, many
children are left at home alone while their parents go to work. In fact, if left on their
own, children can get hurt easily. Children are always full of energy. If left
unsupervised, their boredom may make them try every means to have fun. Curious
about everything, they may play with hot objects and burn themselves accidentally.
Missing their parents, the children may climb to the window to find out whether their
parents are coming home or not. If forgotten to close the windows, the children may
fall out and lose their life. In addition, children are too young to distinguish certain
things such as alcohol and water. If not put in a proper place, children may drink
alcohol by mistake.
Note: To correct errors of dangling modifiers, you may change the dangling modifier
to a subordinate clause or change the subject of the main clause to the one that the
modifier can appropriately attach to. There is no single exact way to revise each
sentence. The above revisions are only suggestions.
Exercise C1: Combine the following pairs of sentences by using the opener shown
in the bracket.
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Exercise C2: Make sentences using the modifiers given to you. Then, circle the
word(s) being modified.
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Exercise C3: Identify and underline the dangling modifiers in the following
passage. Then, revise these sentences to eliminate errors of dangling modifiers
in the space between the lines.
School Violence
Have you ever tried to bully your classmates or been bullied by others? Last
year, a video on some teenagers beating their classmates in a school was put on the
Internet. Having watched this video, school violence became a hot topic in the local
community. After that, many other cases were revealed. Having learnt about the
seriousness of this problem, many people in Hong Kong called for immediate actions
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of the government, schools, and parents. First, the government should put more
aroused. In addition, schools can organise some talks and exhibitions to promote
students may stop using violence at school. Lastly, parents should also devote more
time to talk to the teenagers. By discussing the problems with the teenagers,
these parties, teenagers will eventually learn how to deal with problems by using more