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Tanya W Haynes
Professor Brenda Stephens
Engl 1053 Writing for Adults
15 April 2014
Either You Will or They Will
Two things are guaranteed in life.: To be born and to die. If you are fortunate enough to
be reading this, then two things are for sure, you are alive and you are not dead. But suppose
death knocked on your door before you finished your sentence. What would happen to the house
you just sent in the mortgage payment on, the car you just paid the note on and the bank account
from which you just withdrew one hundred dollars? If you have an attorney drafted Last Will &
Testament, then you already know what will happen. If you dont, then the state in which you
reside will say what will happen. Who better to say what will happen to the things you have
worked for than you?
A Last Will & Testament speaks for a decedent when they have passed away. The Last
Will & Testament is as if the decedent is speaking from the grave giving instructions to the
executor as to how their items are to be disbursed. Family dynamics can be taken into
consideration when drafting a will verses leaving it to lawyers laws to decide. For example, if a
husband and wife have been separated for 30 years, but never divorced and the husband dies
without an attorney drafted Last Will & Testament, then under certain laws, the wife can take a
portion of the husbands estate. It is essential that a Last Will & Testament be drafted by an
attorney in order to ensure a properly executed will. Verses a homemade will that may not
even be properly executed by the probate law statutes. A Last Will & Testament allows for
flexibility in creating trust(s) that provide for surviving spouses and/or minor children under the
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the third sentence. All of this naturally leads
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guidelines set forth by the decedent. For example, if a decedent is divorced with minor children,
the decedents Last Will & Testament can set up a trust whereby the minor children can be
supported financially thru the trust until they are of age to inherit the remaining proceeds
directly. A Last Will & Testament appoints an individual to be the executor of the decedents
estate. It can also appoint an individual as trustee of their trust, guardian of their minor or
incapacitated children, as well as alternates for all appointed persons. A decedent can also
expressly disinherit an individual in their Last Will & Testament. Some decedents also dictate
how their body is to be interned. For example, a decedent wising to be cremated can include their
desires in their Last Will & Testament. Verses a decedent without a will that wishes the same
and the family not being agreement with the decedent being cremated.
The Bible says, It is appointed unto man once to die, so wouldnt you rather die
knowing that you had left specific instructions as to how the things you worked so very hard for
will be distributed. Verses not having any say at all and letting your state law give your wife,
which tried to stab you with a butchers knife before she left town with your best friend, all of
your assets.
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This is a great idea for a concluding sentence!