Kyle Tremain

ENG 114B
Professor Batty
16 April 2014

A Lesson on the Appreciation of the Smaller Things in Life

As humans we often take things for granted, especially those things that do not directly
have noticeable impact on our life. We value superficial items and worship television, laptops,
and money. Currently the average American does not have a lot to worry about beyond work or
school. Advances in technology have made life so simple and caused us to expect so much.

The situation is drastically different in the year 2065. Something so many of us have
considered as insignificant has changed the world. People who once thought they were so
powerful and indestructible with their advanced technology were threatened by a small insect.
The threat grew so huge that the majority of the human population was whipped out and only a
few remain.

What is this strange tiny bug that caused such a big mess? The answer is the bee. Bees
were in the background of the busy and crowded lives that so many people lived. That is why
they were so easily overlooked. No one took their role in nature seriously and this mistake
almost cost us the entire human race.

The bee plays such a crucial role. An ignorant person might think that all this organism
does is obtain nectar from flowers and make honey. But another important responsibility of the
bee is pollination of flowers. When this insect lands on a flower its fuzziness allows pollen to
stick to it. Then the bee travels to different flowers and pollinates them.

Humans needed bees because about a third of peoples food supply depended on insect
pollination. So many people did not know this and those who did were not doing enough to keep
bees safe. They were not made a priority. Therefore when colony collapse disorder was
identified not much was done. Colony collapse disorder was a strange phenomenon where bees
from a colony would disappear.

The negative effects of this disorder were not significant enough until it was too late.
Decreases in bee population had severely reduced pollination. The result was less vegetation and
available food for the human population. Prices for crops quickly rose and people were dragged
into living in poverty. Many people were dying and angry mobs started revolting against
governments around the world. Huge wars began over limited resources as well. The war and
lack of food eventually led to 99% of the human population dying.

Right before the extinction of man- kind, Government-paid scientists who had been
researching for a solution had finally created a man-made substance for people to consume. In
2065 they found how to make Artificially Produced Live Energy Source or APLES. Before this
creation was made the leaders in the world came together to form a new government. This
government was nervous of more revolts so they took drastic measures to ensure that this
wouldnt happen again. In order to have more control over the people this new product was
created. Even though APLES do keep people alive, they also drain a lot of peoples energy and
make them act more like a drone.

They introduced the remaining humans of the world to the city of Minschertorville and
enticed them to come buy promising APLES as a way to feed them. With all the destruction and
death that occurred everywhere people were relieved to hear that there was a new place to live
that offered food. For most it looked like the best chance for survival. The new government
leaders monitored the number of people who entered the city and once enough people arrived
they went through with their plan.

Minschertoville leaders waited until people mated and an adequate amount of new borns
were birthed. Then they had all the parents and other humans over the age of 3 killed. The babies
and young ones were taken into group homes and raised by the adults that the government had
trusted to keep alive. They killed to erase the memory that it was Colony Collapse Disorder that
had caused the war and starvation of the world. These new babies would be taught to be obedient
and grew up following strict rules.

Over the years a giant wall was built around Minschertoville and guards were appointed
from the trusted adults to keep order. The babies were taught that everything outside the wall
was dangerous and that many killer creatures lurked in the forests. Those kids grew up and had
kids of their own who were taught the same things.

After a few generations a boy named Billy and a girl named Jill were born in 2195. They
grew up as neighbors, but didnt get along at first. All the kids would get together to play softball
and Jill and Billy always ended up on separate teams. Each of them had a competitive spirit and
took the games seriously. This would often lead to aggressive plays that would end in a shoving
match between the two hot heads.

Billy said during a close game, Wow Jill way to bring down your team!!
Jill was playing her heart out and obviously one of the better players of the team, But
Billy knew just what to say to distract her.
She yelled back, Shut up! You wouldnt know talent if it hit you in the face.
The game progressed as normal, but when Jill was next at bat she hit a line drive towards
Billy. It hit the ground at the perfect angle to bounce up and hit Billy right in the face.
The injured boy screamed and said, You did this on purpose! I cant believe you. She
needs to be kicked out of the game or something.
None of the other players really paid much attention to him because he was known to be
a wussy.
Hoverer this accusation infuriated Jill and she yelled back, No I did not do it on
purpose! It hit the ground before bouncing up.
She did not like to be accused unfairly of things and kept a grudge against him. Their
ongoing battle would escalate at all the games after this incident and they acted like sworn
enemies.
One day when they were both about sixteen, Billy and Jill relationship would change
completely.
They were walking with a group of mutual friends and he started joking with his friends
saying, Jill is obviously the slowest of the group.
Jill shot back, What do you mean!?
Oh you know exactly what I mean.
I guess I dont because I have the highest grade in our class, dummy.
He laughed and said, Well know you are a nerd and slow! I mean you are not as fast as
us. There is no way you could beat any of us in a race.
She scoffed. Okay, so if you are so sure I challenge you to a race right now then!

The pair ran off ahead of the group not waiting for anyone to yell start. About a hundred
yards ahead they both witnessed a tiny black and yellow dart fly onto Billys skin.

He let out a scream and said, What the heck was that? It pinched me!
Jill saw it happen and watched as the teeny tiny creature buzzed off.
Meanwhile the boy was still in pain and said I have never felt anything like that. I think
I may be sick. We have to go back to the group!
Can you please stop being such a baby and toughen up for once? Jill said.

She was too focused on the little creature that she had seen. It had wings, but not like
those on a bird. Also its brilliant yellow and black coat made her think of a butterfly, but she had
never seen one sting a human before.

Come on Billy! she yelled and ran after the bizarre creature.
Fine. He said and quickly followed.

Following its path led her to the wall that blocked the city from the forbidden forest. Her
strong sense for adventure almost made her forget about all the horror stories she had heard
about what awaited on the other side of the wall.

Jill hesitated briefly which gave Billy enough time to catch up. He ran up to her out of
breath and rubbing the area on his arm where the darting ball of black and yellow had landed.

She cursed, We will never know what that thing was because of this stupid wall.
It is probably for the best. said Bill.
How can you say that?
We do not know what it was and if it came from over the wall it cant be any good.
I wish I could go over that wall. I want adventure!
You know it would be too dangerous, Jill
Since when do you care? she retorted.
Billy looked down at his feet and whispered, I have always cared.

Jill blushed and quickly ran off, but she was smiling. Later the two got together and they
talked about the occurrence for hours. After that they were inseparable and eventually just ended
up going steady.

Years passed and the two love birds got married. Still they never told anyone about the
tiny dart that had stung Billy. People had been disappearing who spoke of seeing such crazy
creatures so they thought it was best that they kept what had happened to themselves. This did
not mean that they didnt discuss what the creature could have possibly been. Their deep
curiosity required them to at least do that.

Let me further explain the city of Minschertosinville that Jill and Billy had lived in their
entire lives. Besides having a huge wall surrounding its boundaries, it had no green vegetation
what so ever. It looked like a desert and the air was warm and dry. Near the center of the city
was a enormous factory called the Food Pen. It happened to be where the happily married couple
both worked.

At Food Pen workers produced Artificially Produced Live Energy Source (APLES). This
is what feeds every person in Minschertosinville so their jobs are very important. The scientist
who created this alternative food modified it into a shake that could be easily consumed by
everyone.

However APLES can have some bad side effects. It causes certain people to lose mobility
in their legs and leaves them paralyzed. Billy and Jill have only seen a couple of these cases, but
the governments leaders actually took these people and disposed of them to make it seem as if
APLES were the best food solution possible. The government feared that if the people found out
they will revolt.

Both Billy and Jill, unlike others, enjoyed going climbing and would always explore new
places they have not been in hopes to also one day find something new and better for people to
eat. They know they are not allowed to go beyond the wall, but it is so hard to resist the
temptation. One day they pack APLES and water and ventured out. The couple walked along the
wall and were so tempted just to climb to the top of it and see what is on the other side.

Jill blurts out, What if we use pegs to just climb to the top.
Billy dreams about it, but then quickly snaps out of it.
He grabs her hands and says, Lets keep walking.
She doesnt budge and keeps gazing up.
I mean maybe we could. He says dreamily,
They both recall the times they wished they could see what was on the other side.
Im doing it. Jill declared. You cant stop me.
Who says I would stop you. Bill says with a smile. He has already made his mind up
that he at least needs to see what is over the wall. The possibility of finding an alternative to
APLES propels him to agree.
Imagine if we find something that the community can eat besides APLES! Jill said.
That would be amazing Bill replied.
I know they say that there is no alternative, but I dont believe it.
Yea, I cant stand to see another friend go paralyzed.
They make their way up the pegs and up the wall. Finally while at the top they look over
and their hopefully eyes droop.
I cant believe this is it. Jill says with a sigh.
I thought there would be more, but it just looks like the desert we live in. her husband
responds.

Disappointed that they see no miracle solution they turn to head back down the pegs.
Then suddenly Jill shouts out and points to a low overhang on a nearby mountain.
Wait she screams.
She is drawn to a strange greenish on the ground of the cave. Billy sees it too and starts
his way over the wall knowing his wife is close behind him.

Their excitement reaches its peak as that stand at the entrance of the cave and look down
at lots of green and flowers.
My god, what is this place? Jill says.
Lets go explore! Billy says with excitement.
It is a sight they have never seen before or been taught about. They walk quickly through
the cave and see more flowers along the floor.
The couple starts bending down and picking up the flowers.
Look at this says the proud husband to his wife.
What about this one! Jill says holding up some plants.

Soon they realized it wasnt a cave at all, but a tunnel that led to a lush paradise. They fun
over to a stationary branched object off which red sphere like objects hang. It was an apple tree.

This is like no tree I have ever seen. says Billy.
I wonder what this is. Jill says as she picks off an apple.
Honey dont we dont know what it is!
She puts it close to her nose and takes in its sweet aroma.
How could anything that smells this great be bad?
The brave Jill is ready to take a bite out of an apple she picked when they both hear a
familiar noise. Its the buzzing of the creature that strung Bill all those years ago.
They listen harder and hear the bees and watch as they visit the lush green things that are
growing out of the ground.
We did it. Jill says.
She realizes they have discovered something so incredible and take a bite of the apple. A
smile spread across her face at its sweet juices and hands it for Billy to try.
Try this she says.
Wow its incredible! he replies after taking a bite.
Imagine all the other edible plants we could find here!
I think there is something about these tiny flying creatures that causes all these amazing
plants to grow!
It was fate that you got stung that day. Jill says and hugs him.
Yea it brought us together Billy smiles and holds her close.
Also we found an alternative to APLES!
Yeah! This is really great. He says and leans in to give her a kiss.

Jill has no fear that the food could be poisonous or inedible. What she tasted was so pure
and right that she knew this was news that had to be quickly shared. The couple new they had
discovered something that could change everyones life for the better. It was decided that they
would sneak out of town going back and forth from this new-found magical area.

Even though they knew that the government would be furious if they found about their
sneaky escape it was crucial to them to find out what was happening. After a couple of weeks
Billy and a group of scientist realized that the flying buzz-making creatures would cause this
pretty green life plain to grow and prosper. They returned to the cave to learn more.

Over here guys! Billy shouted to lead the group over to the apple tree.
I dont think anyone should try to eat anything before we test it all back at the lab. It
could be poisonous. said lead scientist Mr. Herb.
Well Jill tried it and she has been fine the past month.
I know the case of your wife is very uplifting
So why not try a bite? Billy said as he handed another scientist the apple.
Its delicious! the female scholar replied.
Alright, alright I will try some when we get all the samples back to the lab! replied Mr.
Herb. Lets load up!

All the scientists got the samples they needed and headed back the city. Jill was back at
the city preparing a speech to give the leaders of the government. She had to explain why they
had gone over the wall.

In the lab Mr. Herb discovered that the creature that stung Billy was a huge factor in
pollinating flowers and is crucial to the reproduction of the food humans consume. He named
them herbies after himself. Once this was realized Jill and Billy came up with the idea of
capturing about 80 percent of the herbies and bringing them inside the city walls.

There is a chance that our city could become lush with plants like the place we found
said Jill to the leaders.
I agree with this plan added Mr. Herb.
The plants have proven edible and can be used to feed our city said Billy.

When the Jill said her well-thought out speech about spreading the buzzing creatures
around the town, the government reacted with furious disapproval about the idea and also that
the couple was venturing out where they were not supposed to. The government seemed more
nervous than furious about them going to this location. It made the couple very suspicious and
feels that they were hiding some information.

After Billy and Jill got their idea strictly disapproved, the government decided to place
the couple in a house near their main office, so that they could keep a close eye on them. The
couple ended up very disappointed, but are not yet ready to give up on their proposition.

Jill! We need to escape the governments arms tonight and head over to where the food-
producing creatures are! said Billy.
Of course! said Jill
The guards seem to be falling asleep, so lets sneak out the back window and head to
Mr. Herbs place

Once all the guards fell fully asleep they snuck their way out of the small house.
Eventually couple managed to escape and meet up with the professor at his house. They gathered
the utensils needed to capture the herbies and head off.

After about 1,000 bees were collected they went back to the town and released all the
townspeople. They are in time hoping the herbies would eventual create good-tasting food for
townspeople to eat rather than the government-enforced APLES. Their city could turn into a
paradise and have safe food to give them energy and possibly live longer.

Finally when they made it back with all the bees Billy released half at one point of town
and Jane released the other at the opposite side of town. Townspeople observed in awe when the
bees actually started creating green life all around the town. In addition, by the time the
Government saw all the flying yellow creatures in the air, they seemingly gave-up and did not
even punish the couple.

Overtime the town went from sad and dull to nature-like and exciting. People were
gaining a whole bunch of energy from the new foods causing them to venture out of town to new
places and think more clearly. The governments control was starting to eradicate and people
began thinking ill of them for developing such ridiculous and controlling rules..

As time passed by, in about a year the entire bee population vanished causing the new
food that people were getting to learn about to also disappear. The government leaders and
workers were the only people in the town who were happy that everything was going to go back
to normal. The government would start earning money from APLES, and people will be easier to
control.

Scientist later discovered that the bees could not breathe properly due to the smog
pollution from the Food Pen and eventually died out. In the end everything got changed back to
its regular routine and Jane and Billy died full of APLES.















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