By
David Polk
An Original Screenplay
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CONTINUED: (2) 2.
ZACH
(loudly)
Snake!
MATT
Shit! Is that all? Team, back to
radio sil --
RAT-TAT-TAT. An enemy force of four OTHER BOYS swoop in on
Matt’s team, shouting war cries and blasting away with toy
guns. The battle quickly goes hand-to-hand as the boys
wrestle and kick and karate chop away.
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CONTINUED: (2) 4.
MATT/ZACH
Aye, Captain.
Zach flashes a devilishly charming smile. Matthew gives the
boys a hug, looks once more at Sandy, who smiles. Then he’s
off to the taxi.
FADE OUT.
FADE UP:
Four objects hit the water too. The SEALs swim toward
them. These are low-profile, high-speed water skiffs. The
SEALs climb on, one drives, another on his back.
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CONTINUED: (2) 6.
TERRORIST LEADER
Lying dog!
Before the radar operator can protest, the terrorist leader
produces a knife and slits his throat. He falls out of his
chair, blood quickly flowing around him on the floor.
The terrorist leader wipes his knife clean on the dying
man’s shirt. Glowers at another OPERATOR.
TERRORIST LEADER
You. Take his place.
The operator leaves his station, sits in the radar
operator’s chair, tries to avoid looking down at his
murdered coworker.
TERRORIST LEADER
(to operators)
Let this be a lesson. You have
only one hope of survival: submit
and obey without hesitation.
(to Terrorist 2)
Alert Vahid to take off and search
for submarines.
TERRORIST 2 begins speaking into a hand-held radio.
At the back of the ship, the SEAL whips out a flat piece of
rubber, pulls a ripcord and the rubber instantly inflates
into a LARGE BALLOON that quickly rises into the sky.
Attached to the balloon is a CABLE. The SEAL hooks it to a
chest harness.
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CONTINUED: (2) 14.
In one swift motion, the Chief grabs the SEAL leader’s SIG
9mm and shoots the terrorist between the eyes --
At that exact moment the SEALs at the extraction spot are
whisked off the deck, their balloon cables snagged by the
C-130’s "V"-grapple. An instant later the SEAL leader and
the Chief are swept away with them.
Rescued rig workers watch in astonishment as all eight Navy
SEALs fly off into the night sky, dangling behind the C-130.
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CONTINUED: (2) 15.
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CONTINUED: (3) 16.
MAN 3
I’ll tell you for what. Asia and
Western Europe are starving for
oil. If we don’t stop the
terrorists over there, we’ll be
staging rescues in the Gulf of
Mexico.
WOMAN 2
I’ve heard that in some cities
people wait in gas lines for hours.
MAN 1
They say that’s what it was like
way back in the nineteen seventies.
SANDY (O.S.)
Alright, enough of this!
The young parents turn to face SANDY RAMSAY (57). Still as
lovely as when we first saw her in the doorway of her home,
but very annoyed at the moment.
SANDY
This is my granddaughter’s birthday
party, not a press conference. It’s
time for cake and candles.
WOMAN 2
Sorry, Mrs. Ramsay.
Sandy turns off the television with the remote control. The
young parents file past her and out the sliding glass door
to the backyard.
Before Sandy follows, she pauses to look at a curio cabinet
full of FAMILY PHOTOS, including: a handsome young Naval
officer being fed wedding cake by a beautiful brunette; the
same man and woman with an adorable little girl; the man
smiling with an Annapolis cadet who’s flashing a devilish
grin...
HOLD on a portrait of the young Ramsay family as we remember
them in our opening scenes: Matthew in uniform, Sandy,
11-year-old Matt and 6-year-old Zach.
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CONTINUED: (2) 17.
PULL BACK to show party GUESTS gathered around the cake and
the birthday girl, MAGGIE RAMSAY (8), smiling and cute as
can be. A woman we recognize as the beautiful brunette in
the photos lights the candles. This is MADELINE RAMSAY
(33), known to her family and friends as "Maddy".
MADDY
Okay, everybody. Happy Birthday!
...
EVERYBODY
...to you! Happy Birth --
ZACH (O.S.)
(booming)
DAY TO YOU!
Everybody turns to see Zach coming from inside the
house. He’s in the dress whites of a Navy Lieutenant,
carrying a huge GIFT, smiling that rakish smile of
his. Sandy and Maddy beam and the 8-year-old girls giggle
with delight at the dreamy officer, but it’s Maggie who’s
most thrilled.
MAGGIE
Uncle Zach! Uncle Zach!
She runs to him and he scoops her in his arms, kisses her.
ZACH
Magpie!
MAGGIE
I knew you’d make it! I knew you
wouldn’t miss my birthday!
ZACH
You can always count on me, Kid.
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MAGGIE
Oh I love it, Uncle Zach! How did
you know it’s just what I wanted?
SANDY
(humored skepticism)
Yes, Zach, just how did you know?
ZACH
Oh, I don’t know, Mom, I guess I’m
just a modern, sensitive guy who
knows what women really want.
Maddy and Sandy rolls their eyes. They know the dashing
Navy SEAL is a ladies’ man.
MADDY
Maggie, honey, it’s getting close
to your bedtime. Better go up and
brush your teeth.
MAGGIE
Aw, Mom! I hardly got a chance to
talk to Uncle Zach.
MADDY
Go ahead, honey. Besides, it’s
getting pretty deep in here and I
wouldn’t want you to drown.
MAGGIE
Huh?
ZACH
Go on and brush those pearly
whites, Magpie. I’ll be up later
to say goodnight.
MAGGIE
Okay. Goodnight, Grandma.
She goes to Sandy and kisses her.
SANDY
Goodnight, dear.
After the child exits, Sandy and Maddy fall into what has
obviously become a routine.
MADDY
You know, Zach, for a guy who
"knows what women really want,"
it’s taking you an awfully long
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MADDY (CONT’D.)
time to settle down with one of
them.
SANDY
Both your father and brother were
married with a family by the time
they were your age.
ZACH
That’s because Dad and Matt got the
two best girls in the world, so
there’s no one left for me. Trust
me, I know.
MADDY
You ought to, you’ve sampled
enough.
ZACH
(grins)
Now, Maddy, don’t hate.
Maddy shakes her head disapprovingly but even she can’t help
but love her sexy-adorable bother-in-law.
SANDY
You don’t have to look very far to
find the perfect girl, Zach.
ZACH
(reacts)
Mom, not that again. I thought we
put a fork in this one already.
SANDY
Tess adores you, and she
understands you better than
anyone. You said so yourself.
MADDY
More importantly, she has enough
dirt on you to keep you from
prowling around at night.
ZACH
Yeah, that’s just what I want, the
old ball and chain that can land me
in Fort Leavenworth with one phone
call... Anyway, you both know the
Navy forbids relationships between
officers and sailors.
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CONTINUED: (4) 20.
SANDY
I also know Tess would resign from
the Navy the second she thought you
were serious about giving you and
her a chance.
ZACH
That’s where you’re wrong, Mom. I
know her a lot better than you do,
and Contessa Cortez is a lifer.
Before Sandy can disagree, she’s seized by a strange
feeling. Zach and Sandy both clock this and react,
concerned.
ZACH
Mom?
MADDY
Mom, are you alright?
Sandy looks at Zach and Maddy then shifts her focus to the
family photos in the curio cabinet. She stares at one of
her with her husband Matthew. Then her eyes drift to the
PHOTO next to it - a Navy portrait of her son, Matt.
SANDY
(prescient)
Oh... My...
EXT. OCEAN/UNDERWATER
The sleek black hull of a Seawolf-class nuclear attack
submarine materializes from the cobalt twilight, glides past
us 900 feet below the ocean’s surface.
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CONTINUED: (2) 21.
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CONTINUED: (2) 22.
SONARMAN
Thirty-five knots, sir.
Matt and his X.O. (Executive Officer) exchange a look. From
this point on, we see that Matt is a masterful skipper -
calm, confident and supremely capable in command.
MATT
Raise the ESM. Have the ROV go to
stand by.
X.O.
Aye, sir.
He repeats the orders into a handset. As he does --
MATT
Helm, put me on her tailpipe.
HELMSMAN
Aye-aye, Captain. Coming around to
two-one-four.
MATT
Communications, signal our position
to CINCPAC. Let them know we’ve
got something unusual on the grid.
COMMUNICATIONS OFFICER
Yes, sir.
He repeats the command to a SEAMAN sitting at a workstation.
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CONTINUED: (2) 23.
MATT
ETA?
NAVIGATOR
Twenty-five minutes at their
present course and speed.
MATT
(to X.O.)
Action stations.
X.O.
Aye, sir.
(lifts microphone)
All hands, this is the X.O. Action
stations. Action stations.
EXT. OCEAN/UNDERWATER
An enormous, translucent ALIEN VESSEL slices past us.
EXT. OCEAN/UNDERWATER
The alien vessel turns over and noses downward with
remarkable agility, like a dolphin at play.
EXT. OCEAN/UNDERWATER
The powerful light source from the alien ship and the
torpedoes from the Jimmy Carter collide and explode in an
incredible fireball, setting off massive shock waves.
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CONTINUED: (2) 27.
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CONTINUED: (3) 28.
X.O.
Fire!
FIRE CONTROL OFFICER
(pushing buttons)
Ten and twelve away!
MATT
Left full rudder, up ten degrees!
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CONTINUED: (2) 29.
EXT. OCEAN/UNDERWATER
The Delta torpedoes pursue their target. The alien sub
turns nimbly and evades one of them. But the second Delta
has locked on and chases the alien relentlessly into the
murky depths. We lose sight of both in the blackness,
then... KA-BOOM! A nuclear explosion as the Delta catches
its prey.
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CONTINUED: (2) 30.
HELMSMAN
Twenty-six-hundred feet!
NAVIGATOR
Fires amidships and aft, heavy
flooding on all decks!
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CONTINUED: (2) 32.
CHIEF
Mrs. Ramsay, I’m so very sorry for
your loss. Commander Ramsay was
admired and respected by all of us.
MADDY
Thank you, Chief. And thank you so
much for coming.
Sandy and the Chief share a long embrace. They kiss cheek
to cheek and Sandy looks into her eyes.
SANDY
Tess, dear. You’ll come to the
house later, won’t you?
CHIEF
Yes, of course, Mrs. Ramsay.
Sandy shifts her gaze to Zach.
ZACH
Mom, Maddy, I’ll just be a minute.
The Ramsay women, Maggie and Admiral Kelly move along. Zach
looks at the Chief. They try to keep their emotions in
check.
ZACH
Thank you for coming, Chief. It
means a lot to Maddy and Mom... And
to me.
CHIEF
It means a lot to me too, Skipper.
Your brother was a hell of an
officer. One of the best in the
Navy. Like your dad.
(beat)
How are you holding up, sir?
ZACH
(sighs, beat)
We all know it’s possible, hell,
damn likely the way the world turns
these days. But I always figured
it’d be me, not Matt. Not Matt...
She reaches out, touches his sleeve in a gesture of
sympathy... and guarded affection.
33.
BAKER (CONT’D.)
military isn’t briefed until
absolutely necessary.
GENERAL BROWNING
Absolutely necessary being after
two $4 billion nuclear subs and 260
men end up on the bottom of the
ocean?!
PRESIDENT PHELPS
Gentlemen, please.
Browning and Baker remember where they are and calm down.
PRESIDENT PHELPS
As tragic as the losses of the
Dallas and the Carter were, those
of us who have served know the
price for defending our national
interests can be high. Exorbitant.
However, the issue we face today is
more daunting than the loss of
nuclear submarines and their crews,
or even the news that we are not
alone in the universe. The issue
we face today is how to ensure the
survival of a species - our own. I
think it’s time we turned our
energy to that... Dr. Pettigrew,
if you please.
VANESSA PETTIGREW (35) stands and walks to the front of the
room. She’s British, black and stunningly beautiful. Once
we get past her looks, the quality that strikes us most is
her innate brilliance.
VANESSA
Thank you, Madame President.
She nods to an assistant in the back of room. Lights dim.
VANESSA
My name is Dr. Vanessa Pettigrew,
special assistant to the Prime
Minister on Science, Technology and
Space Exploration. What you’re
about to hear and see will seem
fantastical, but I assure you,
ladies and gentlemen, it’s all
true.
A slide presentation begins on a WALL SCREEN behind her.
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CONTINUED: (3) 35.
VANESSA (O.S.)
In 1955, two years before the
Soviets launched Sputnik One, a
Russian trawler made a startling
catch in the frozen waters of the
Barents Sea.
ON THE SCREEN: a grainy black and white PHOTO of a
space-suited reptilian humanoid sprawled on the deck of a
trawler. Two Russian fishermen kneeling next to the dead
alien make it clear the creature is easily eight feet tall.
Whispers circle the room like wildfire.
VANESSA (O.S.)
Needless to say, the Space Race
took on an even greater sense of
urgency.
F.B.I. DIRECTOR
Forgive me, Doctor, but I find it
hard to believe such a discovery,
if authentic, could be kept quiet
for long, even in the super
secretive Soviet Union of the
fifties.
VANESSA
Director Bixby, the trawler that
made this "catch" was "lost at sea"
the next day with all hands. And
of course the sinking of the Dallas
and the Carter were not the result
of "training accidents." The
Russians aren’t the only ones who
will go to extremes to keep
secrets.
(she pauses for effect)
Your government learned of the
aliens when C.I.A. operatives came
across these photos whilst
gathering information on the Soviet
space program. Our government was
informed several years later when
MI-6 intercepted your communiques.
Autopsy photos of the dead alien appear on screen. Then a
transition to images of the U.S. and Soviet space programs.
VANESSA (O.S.)
As the U.S. and Soviets sent more
hardware into orbit, there was
sporadic contact with the aliens -
(MORE)
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CONTINUED: (4) 36.
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CONTINUED: (5) 37.
N.S.A. DIRECTOR
(incredulous)
Say what?!
PRESIDENT PHELPS
Ladies and gentlemen, we have
incontrovertible evidence that the
Titanians are well along in a plan
to cause the next Ice Age on Earth,
wiping out the human race so that
they can colonize the planet.
There is an audible hush in the already subdued room.
ADMIRAL KELLY
Forgive me, Madame President, but
after learning that not one, but
three governments have kept the
existence of an intelligent alien
species a secret for the past
eighty years, I’m afraid I’ll have
to ask what, exactly, constitutes
"incontrovertible evidence?"
President Phelps looks to Vanessa.
VANESSA
While Director Dennison’s
assessment of the climate on Titan
is correct based on the
Cassini-Huygens mission to Titan
thirty years ago, in the last ten
years we’ve intercepted
communications by Titanian
explorers in which they speak of
rapidly deteriorating conditions on
their world. Titan is warming up
fast and the Titanians need a new
home. They’ve chosen Earth.
They all look at one another as Vanessa’s words sink.
BAKER
Titanians have entrenched
themselves deep in our oceans,
where they’ve used advanced
technology to speed global warming
over the past forty years. As you
know, global warming could cause
catastrophic climate change,
leading to another Ice Age. They’re
on track to cause such a phenomenon
within a hundred years.
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CONTINUED: (6) 38.
GENERAL BROWNING
Wait a minute. If these
"Titanians" are smart enough to
travel to Earth and have the
technology to spur drastic climate
change, why not just invade and
wipe us out?
BAKER
Earth’s too warm for them,
General. They’d melt in our
atmosphere.
VANESSA
"Melt" may be a bit of an
exaggeration. But essentially, Mr.
Baker is correct. Outside of the
Poles and the extreme depths of our
oceans, the Titanians couldn’t
tolerate Earth’s temperate
climates. Their plan is to freeze
us out before they come.
F.B.I. DIRECTOR
The Jimmy Carter nuked one of their
ships in the Pacific. Why not
focus all of our fleets on hunting
down the rest and taking them out?
ADMIRAL KELLY
We know more about what’s in deep
space than we do about what’s in
our deepest oceans. Even with our
technology it could take decades to
find them down there.
C.I.A. DIRECTOR
And even if we could find them,
we’d be doing their work for them
if we nuked the seas.
President Phelps, Baker and Vanessa all exchange a look.
PRESIDENT PHELPS
Ladies and gentlemen, I have
carefully considered what’s at
stake here - the very survival of
the human race. It’s clear to me
that we have only one choice: we
must launch a preemptive strike on
Titan and destroy their home world
before they can bring about the
destruction of our own.
39.
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CONTINUED: (2) 40.
PRESIDENT PHELPS
Very good, Vladmir. Strong, but
very good.
PERMINOV
It is as it must be, Renee. As we
must be. Yes?
PRESIDENT PHELPS
Da.
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CONTINUED: (2) 42.
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CONTINUED: (3) 43.
HONEYCUTT
"About" ain’t the same thing as
being, sir.
CARLY
Say, where’s the Chief? Shouldn’t
she be celebrating with you?
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CONTINUED: (2) 44.
ZACH
I try not to think too far
ahead. But I’m open to
suggestions.
He flashes the smile. She gives him a scolding look.
CARLY
You never called, Sailor! Just
blew out of my bed like a bat out
of hell! And now you’re looking at
me with those eyes and that smile.
ZACH
Sorry, Carly, but you know how it
is. When duty calls...
CARLY
Yeah, "Duty." Is that the name of
the blond I saw you with two weeks
later?
He pulls her to him. She pouts prettily.
ZACH
What can I do to make it up to
you? Just name it.
She’s played angry long enough.
CARLY
Make me breakfast tomorrow.
ZACH
(smiles)
How do you like your eggs?
The Chief enters the bar and makes her way through the
crowd. Zach sees her as he’s parting with Carly.
ZACH
(calling out)
Chief! Hey, Chief!
CHIEF
Skipper. Sorry I’m late.
ZACH
We’re over here.
They go to the table together.
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CONTINUED: (3) 45.
KEIKO
What happened, Chief? Hook up with
a clinger? I swear, there’s
nothing worse than a guy who won’t
take a hint and go home after he’s
shot his last round.
CHIEF
Tell me about it. But this time it
was gas lines.
LOUDEN
You wouldn’t have that problem if
you went electric, Chief.
CHIEF
I’ve got better uses for my
batteries, Louden.
Keiko and the Chief exchange a look. Just then, Zach
catches sight of Carly near the exit, smiling at him.
ZACH
Well, I’d love to stick around and
drink all night - especially since
you mooks are buying - but I’ve got
places to go and things to do.
SORKIN
Don’t you mean redheads to do,
Skip?
The Chief catches a glimpse of Carly smiling at Zach.
CHIEF
It’s not like you to hit the same
target twice, Skipper.
ZACH
Whatever it takes to achieve
mission success, Chief. Later...
Zach heads off through the crowd. Honeycutt pours the Chief
a beer and drops a shot glass of Tequila into it.
HONEYCUTT
Here ya go, Chief. Lots of catching
up to do.
The Chief downs her boilermaker.
46.
CHIEF (CONT’D.)
you myself before he sent out the
Shore Patrol.
Zach goes to the coffee table, picks up his cell
phone. Power’s off. Carly comes out of the bedroom in
Zach’s shirt.
CARLY
(smiles)
Hi, Chief.
CHIEF
Carly.
As Carly crosses to Zach, she and the Chief exchange a
look. Feminine instinct tells them they’re rivals.
CARLY
(kisses Zach)
’Morning, Tiger.
ZACH
Did you turn off my phone?
CARLY
(innocent)
I don’t know. Maybe?
ZACH
Carly, you never, ever turn off my
phone!
CARLY
Sorry...
Zach makes a bee line to the bathroom.
ZACH
Ready in five, Chief!
CHIEF
Aye-aye, Skipper.
The bathroom door slams. Beat. The Chief and Carly look at
each other.
CARLY
Duty?
CHIEF
(nods "Yes")
I’ll just wait outside.
48.
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CONTINUED: (2) 49.
CAPTAIN ORTON
Zach, this is Colonel Alexi
Silayev, Russian Army Special
Forces, Spetsnaz GRU.
ZACH
Colonel.
COLONEL SILAYEV
Commander Ramsay.
Zach and Silayev shake hands.
CAPTAIN ORTON
Zach, Colonel Silayev has a
proposal for you and your team.
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ADMIRAL KELLY
(regains composure)
Zach Ramsay’s brother, Matt, was
the skipper of the Jimmy Carter.
COMMANDER CAINE
Yes, sir. I know, sir.
ADMIRAL KELLY
Their father, Matt senior, was the
skipper of the Dallas, sunk in the
Barents Sea twenty five years
ago. We were roommates at the
Academy... Matt junior’s first tour
at sea was under my command...
Sandy Ramsay was with my Elizabeth
when she died of breast cancer. I
was on patrol in the Atlantic and
couldn’t get home in time to be
with her.
COMMANDER CAINE
I’m sorry, Admiral, I didn’t know.
ADMIRAL KELLY
I won’t be responsible for taking
the last Ramsay man from that
family. Scratch Zach Ramsay from
the mission.
COMMANDER CAINE
(beat)
Admiral, it’s a volunteer
mission. Commander Ramsay has
already volunteered, sir.
OFF Admiral Kelly...
DOCTOR (CONT’D.)
clinical trials. They’re fairly
aggressive, but I recommend we
consider them.
Vanessa stares at her with a poised, neutral expression.
INT. ELEVATOR
Two NURSES talk casually behind Vanessa. The elevator stops
and they get off, leaving her alone. The doors close,
Vanessa leans against the elevator wall and breaks down in
tears.
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CONTINUED: (2) 52.
VANESSA
(smiles)
You see Pat every day. That should
tide you over, sir.
PRIME MINISTER HUTCHINS
Haven’t you read the papers? My
wife’s too busy running the country
to spend time with an old stick in
the mud like me.
They share a laugh. The Prime Minister signals for the aide
to leave them and they sit across from each other on sofas.
PRIME MINISTER HUTCHINS
So, you wouldn’t ask for an urgent
meeting without good reason. Are
there new developments with the
Titanians?
VANESSA
Not exactly, sir. But it does have
to do with them. I have a theory.
PRIME MINISTER HUTCHINS
Those four words from your mouth
always hold great promise... And
usually cost a great deal of money.
VANESSA
It’s a long shot, but if I’m right
there is a great deal of promise.
And the best thing - at least for
your poll numbers - there’s no
money involved.
(off his intrigue)
But it does entail you doing me an
enormous favor, Jerry.
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PILOT
Ragnar Base this is Hawkeye, on
final approach for landing.
RAGNAR BASE (V.O.)
Hawkeye, Ragnar Base. Take Angels
right, two-three-zero. Your vector
two-two-four, clear for landing.
PILOT
Roger, Ragnar Base. Flaps.
CO-PILOT
(lowers flaps)
Flaps.
Strapped in his seat below the flight deck, Ed Villagra, the
American astrophysicist, feels the plane dip, looks out a
window and frowns.
VILLAGRA
(apprehensive)
We’re landing?
ZHANG (O.S.)
It would appear so.
Villagra looks at the attractive Chinese woman strapped in
next to him. She is DR. ZHANG CHEUNG (30).
VILLAGRA
But where? I don’t see the
field. I don’t see anything.
ZHANG
We have long suspected the
Americans had a secret, underground
base on Antarctica. Now it seems
we know for sure.
He follows her eyes to CHINESE SOLDIERS peering out windows.
On the flight deck, the pilot and co-pilot view the world
below through heads up displays (HUD) in their helmets.
WHAT THEY SEE: A military airfield clearly visible in Night
Vision green.
54.
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CONTINUED: (2) 55.
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CONTINUED: (2) 56.
CHIEF
Clear on the left, Skipper.
ANTON ROMANOV (26) is on his stomach, surrounded by flat,
rugged terrain. He’s looking at the whaling station from
the right side.
ROMANOV
(thick Russian accent)
Clear on right, Commander. Ready
to move in on your command.
ZACH (V.O.)
Red and Blue squads, move to beta
position on my mark... Mark.
VIEW THROUGH HIGH-TECH BINOCULARS
It’s twilight but the binoculars make it midday. Eight
camouflaged soldiers run toward the whaling station from
front and rear. They stop and take cover by lying flat.
SOLDIER 1 (V.O.)
Strike One in position.
SOLDIER 2 (V.O.)
Strike Two in position.
RETURN TO SCENE
Zach is flat on the ground looking through the
binoculars. A handful of soldiers lay hidden near him, guns
ready. All are equipped with special ops com-links.
ZACH
I don’t like it. It’s too easy.
Chief, you sure nothing’s there?
CHIEF (V.O.)
Sure enough, Skipper. No one’s
been in that place since God was a
boy.
ZACH
Romanov, what about your side? Is
it clear to move?
ROMANOV (V.O.)
(thick Russian accent)
Roger, Omega leader. Moving in.
Romanov gets up and begins moving in on the whaling
station.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (3) 57.
ZACH
looks through his binoculars. He reacts, pissed off.
ZACH
No! Ramonov, get back in position!
Too late. "Enemy" soldiers hidden under the snow all around
Romanov’s position pop up and "fire" on the Strike squads,
"killing" them, and Romanov, with harmless blue light
beams. At the same time, enemy soldiers attack Zach’s
position from behind, wiping out Omega. Only the Chief
survives on the left flank.
After the shooting stops, a figure walks up to Zach, who
looks up at his vanquisher. Silayev pushes his hood back,
lifts his snow goggles. We see those piercing blue eyes.
SILAYEV
It will be difficult to accomplish
our mission with only half our
force, Commander.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 58.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 59.
ZACH
Colonel.
Silayev turns and goes into his room. Zach continues down
the corridor. He rounds the corner, comes face to face with
Vanessa.
VANESSA
Commander. Good evening.
ZACH
Miss Pettigrew.
VANESSA
Doctor. It’s Doctor Pettigrew.
ZACH
Sorry, Doctor.
VANESSA
Your training is going well?
ZACH
As well as can be expected, I
think. And what about you?
VANESSA
Me?
ZACH
Yes, you. Your training going
well?
VANESSA
Yes... As well as can be expected.
ZACH
And what, exactly, is it you’re
training for, if you don’t mind my
asking, Doctor Pettigrew?
VANESSA
(disarming smile)
What is it you special ops types
say, Commander: "I could tell you
but then I’d have to kill you?"
He’s surprised - and impressed - by her humor. They share a
look that makes them both wonder, "Is there a connection
here?"
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (3) 60.
ZACH
(smiles)
Well, that’d suck.
VANESSA
Right. Well then, goodnight,
Commander Ramsay.
ZACH
Doctor Pettigrew.
Beat. Then an awkward moment as they bump when they try to
pass one another. They part. ON THEIR FACES as they walk
away from each other: a bit of curiosity.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 61.
CHIEF
I do. Romanov bought a one-way
ticket just like the rest of
us. He doesn’t deserved to be
spoken to like that. This isn’t
boot camp and he’s a seasoned
operator.
Zach gets off the bunk. Stands face to face with her.
ZACH
(vitriol rising)
Tess... those slimy, ice-chewing
lizards killed my father and my
brother. I’ve got one thing left to
do in this life, that’s to send
them and their whole goddamn world
to hell. I won’t let foul ups like
Romanov or anyone else stop me from
completing that mission. You read
me?!
Beat.
CHIEF
I thought our mission was to try
and save the world, Zach. That’s
why I’m here. I’m pretty sure
that’s the only reason Keiko and
the boys signed up too. That and
knowing you would be right there in
front of us.
A long look between them. There’s so much they haven’t said
over the years, so much they can’t say now. She turns and
leaves the room. He just stares at the door.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 62.
LIN
Colonel Silayev is correct, of
course. The simulator will be our
true test. We all have trained in
harsh environments, but they’ve
been of this world.
Zach is only half-listening. He’s more interested in
Vanessa, who is having breakfast with Villagra and Zhang.
ZACH
What do you know about Dr.
Pettigrew?
LIN
(looks over at her, serious)
Besides that she’s here to spy for
the British and Americans?
FITZHUME
Actually, old chap, I have it on
good authority that she’s a
linguist. Speaks the alien
language. Educated at Oxford,
Cambridge, MIT. A Rhodes Scholar.
LIN
You know her personally?
FITZHUME
We rubbed elbows at a few functions
years ago. I hardly think she
remembers me. She was dating my
cousin at the time.
(off their reaction, "Who?")
The Prince of Wales.
Beat.
ZACH
(thinking)
Why the hell do we need to talk
with them? We’re just going to
nuke the filthy snakes to Kingdom
Come.
FITZHUME
(shrugs)
Beats the bloody hell out of me.
63.
INT. BARRACKS
Keiko is on her cot, sharpening her shruiken stars. She’s
HUMMING a tune, though we can barely hear because it’s so
low. Honeycutt comes in and sits on a cot across from her.
HONEYCUTT
Doubt you’ll have much use for
those on Titan.
KEIKO
I just feel better having them.
Beat. He watches her as she carefully, almost lovingly,
wipes the deadly blades with a cloth. He glances around;
for the moment they’re alone in the barracks.
HONEYCUTT
Listen, Keiko... I know this is
probably not a good time. I mean,
you know, with what we’re doing.
(she looks at him)
But I didn’t want to wait till
we’re deployed. I didn’t want you
to think I was being over-dramatic
because of the situation... Keiko,
I --
KEIKO
(interrupts)
I know, Kareem... So do I.
They share a small, knowing, loving smile. Other troops
come in and Keiko goes back to polishing the killing star.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 64.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 65.
CHIEF
(to Boggs, Bliss and Louden)
Well guys, what do you think: does
my ass look big in this?
Before anyone can answer, she clenches her fists and
three-foot-long, razor-sharp bayonets slide out of each
sleeve. Boggs, Louden and Sorkin react. "Gulp."
LOUDEN
(covers his balls)
No way, Chief... You look great.
TECHNICIAN
All systems of the EBS are voice
activated. You tell it what to do
and it does it. Chief, put this on.
He hands the Chief a HELMET and she slides it on with a
CLICK. A holographic HUD pops up inside her visor and we
see the room from the Chief’s POV.
TECHNICIAN
Chief, please say "Minigun ready."
CHIEF
Minigun ready!
A gun barrel opens on her right wrist. She aims at Boggs
and the HUD "locks" onto him. He starts to sweat. The
Chief smiles mischieviously. "This is awesome?"
TECHNICIAN
A radar-aided, multi-targeting fire
control system integrates with your
AK-57 and virtually guarantees a
bulls-eye on every shot.
Identification Friend-or-Foe
prevents friendly fire casualties.
The Chief frowns. Boggs exhales, relieved.
BRITISH SOLDIER
Sounds like a blooming wonder
suit. Tell me, if I catch a round
to the chest will it evac me the
bloody hell outta there?
The troops laugh at the Brit’s gallows humor.
TECHNICIAN
I’m glad you asked that, soldier.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (3) 66.
INT. SIMULATOR
A vast, post-apocalyptic landscape that looks as much like
the surface of Titan as can be imagined by those who’ve
never been there. Wind HOWLS. A blinding strike of
LIGHTENING and we glimpse Zach, the Chief, Honeycutt and a
Chinese soldier crouching in EBSs, AK-57s at the ready.
Suddenly, Silayev and other troops glide down from a dune,
firing their AK-57s. A pitched, mock battle ensues.
Time passes and other troops play war games in the brutal
conditions of the Titan simulator. Over this --
VILLAGRA (V.O.)
Titan’s atmosphere is ninety-eight
percent nitrogen, compared to the
eighty-twenty nitrogen-oxygen
mixture on Earth. The atmosphere
is so thick and the gravity so low
that humans could fly short
distances by flapping their arms...
The surface is smooth but there are
mountains and ice volcanoes. Radar
images show that Titan has vast
hydrocarbon lakes, filled with
methane. The icy moon has seasonal
weather patterns, including wind
and methane rain, that have created
dunes and shorelines like those on
Earth. In fact, except for it’s
extremely low temperatures, Titan
is very much like an early Earth...
DISSOLVE TO:
67.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 68.
EXT. VIKING 1
A massive spacecraft, the main hull of which is an elliptic
cylinder with three large rotating windmill-like arms,
floating high above Earth.
SUPERIMPOSE: Viking 1 Deep Space Explorer
Shuttles Alpha and Omega approach Viking 1 and dock on
opposite sides of the spacecraft. Time passes and the
shuttles disengage. Viking 1 fires its thrusters and begins
the journey into deep space. Over this --
ZHANG (V.O.)
Traveling at 36 kilometers per
second, our journey to Titan will
take one year, ten months and
fourteen days...
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 70.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 72.
VANESSA
Thank you, Commander.
ZACH
Tell me something, Doctor. Why are
here?
VANESSA
I did dream of being an astronaut,
Commander. But we Brits never
fancied having a space program. The
closest I could get was becoming
the PM’s advisor for space
exploration.
ZACH
That explains why you flew a
billion miles across the
galaxy. But it doesn’t explain why
a linguist with enough degrees to
stuff a rhino is on a military
mission. Or why you went into cryo.
They look at each other for a long beat and he realizes that
there is much more to her than meets the eye.
VANESSA
Like you, Commander, I have a job
to do, and there is nobody on Earth
better prepared to do it than me.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 73.
SHARPTON
I don’t want to "think" it’s under
control, Sargeant, I want to
know! You read me?!
SERGEANT
Yes, Ma’am! Loud and clear, Ma’am!
The SERGEANT turns to her subordinates and stresses that
they be extra diligent.
LIN
Lieutenant, it does appear that
everything is in order here. The
nukes are harmless until they’re
electronically armed.
SHARPTON
We drop in five days. We still
don’t know what, if any, resistance
we’re going to face. What we do
know is we have one shot to save
our world. If we fail, it won’t be
because somebody forgot to tighten
a bolt in the cargo bay.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 74.
ZACH (CONT’D.)
they know we’re coming or not,
right, Colonel?
SILAYEV
Correct, Commander. But we need to
take every precaution so that
Colonel Stovall and his crew can
return to Earth safely with Doctors
Pettigrew, Cheung and Villagra.
Vanessa reacts. Now is the time to show her
hand. Partially.
VANESSA
Colonel, I’m not returning with the
Viking. I’m going to the surface
with the assault team.
All but Stovall look at her like she’s crazy.
SILAYEV
Doctor, that’s simply not
possible. You of all people know
we have no room for error on this
mission. And no hope of return
once we leave this ship.
VANESSA
Colonel Stovall.
Colonel Silayev and Zach look to the flight commander.
STOVALL
It’s true. I have direct orders
from the Presidents of the United
States and China and the Prime
Ministers of Russia and Great
Britain authorizing Dr. Pettigrew
to land on Titan with you, Colonel.
SILAYEV
But why?
VANESSA
I’m sorry, but I can only tell you
that once we’re on the surface of
the moon, Colonel.
OFF plenty of confused faces...
76.
EXT. VIKING 1
Moving through space. Saturn comes into view.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 78.
CHIEF
Well, now that you know where I
am...
They kiss, tentatively at first, then deeply and
passionately. They make love in the bay window amongst the
stars.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 79.
VILLAGRA
You’ll be landing here, in the
equatorial Xanadu region in the
middle of Titan’s winter. Methane
rain clouds are present, so that
will slow the descent. I’d say ten
minutes from atmosphere to surface.
SILAYEV
And still no sign of the Titanians?
STOVALL
Negative. Probes we sent around
Saturn before we entered Titan’s
orbit should be returning data
shortly. So far, scans of the
surface and around the moon are
blank.
Silayev and his officers share a look. Nothing left to do
now but get on with it.
SILAYEV
Thank you, Colonel.
They shake hands. Stovall shakes hands with each of them
then he stands at attention and formally salutes. The
assault team leaders snap to and return his salute.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 80.
SILAYEV
Thank you, Lieutenant.
As the troops begin to file into the Ospreys, all hands of
the Viking crew come to attention and salute. The soldiers
pause to take it in, appreciate it.
Boggs, Honeycutt, Keiko and the Chief board Omega Osprey;
Louden, Bliss and Sorkin board Alpha Osprey with
Sharpton. Vanessa, in her EBS, comes up to Silayev.
SILAYEV
(gestures)
Doctor, after you.
VANESSA
Colonel, I know I was assigned to
Alpha, but if you don’t mind, I
would like to land with Omega.
Zach reacts.
SILAYEV
Certainly, Dr. Pettigrew. As you
wish.
She shakes Silayev’s hand firmly, looks him in the eyes.
VANESSA
God bless you, Colonel.
He nods and she walks past Zach into Omega Osprey. Only
Silayev and Zach remain. They look at each other.
ZACH
(salutes)
I’ll see you on the surface, sir.
SILAYEV
(returns salute)
Commander.
When they are both aboard their Ospreys with hatches closed,
the Viking crew end their salute.
WINTERS (V.O.)
Clear the cargo bay and prepare to
launch Ospreys.
The crew evacuates the cargo bay as it transforms into a
launch bay.
81.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 85.
KARAPOVICH (V.O.)
(calm but forceful)
Collision alert. Collision
alert. All crew immediately to
safe zones.
Zhang and Villagra are on their feet, moving quickly.
HERZL
Yes, sir!
Herzl flies like an ace, and as he does we glimpse more of
Titan - vast ethane lakes, mountains, erupting ice
volcanoes, frozen canyons.
87.
EXT. VIKING 1
A missile launches from a battery atop the spacecraft. It
collides with the incoming alien projectile and explodes.
But the alien weapon splits in two and continues hurling
toward the Viking, hitting in two places.
Two explosions rip into the ship, fore and aft. Fires ignite
along the hull. As it’s space and a vacuum, there is no
sound.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 88.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (3) 89.
ZACH
This is as good a place as any to
send those coldblooded monsters to
hell. Get a squad - Cherninko,
Leong, Mao, Romanov - and get ’em
up in those hills.
CHIEF
Romanov is dead. Broke his neck in
the descent.
Beat. Zach feels a bit of remorse then --
ZACH
Dr. Pettigrew?! Where is she?!
HONEYCUTT
Back over there, by those boulders.
Zach sees her, leaning against a boulder collecting her
wits. Satisfied that she’s okay --
ZACH
(to Honeycutt)
Take the Humvee and drop six scouts
five clicks past the perimeter.
(to Lin)
Hail Viking One and confirm that
Alpha is scratched. Tell them if
we haven’t launched our MIRV in an
hour and thirty minutes, we’re not
going to and that they should haul
ass back to Earth.
Honeycutt takes off, barking out names. Lin looks at Zach
grimly and nods. He heads back to the Osprey to get on the
line with Viking. Zach looks at Vanessa.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 91.
ZHANG
(sad smile)
And I won’t have to tell my parents
about the White American Devil I’ve
fallen in love with.
They step into the pod, sit down and hook themselves up to
tubes before strapping themselves in. Zhang flips switches
and pushes buttons, beginning the cryo process, while
Villagra punches coordinates into the navigation system.
VILLAGRA
It’ll be like finding a needle in a
haystack, but if someone does get
the Viking’s distress call and
comes looking for us, we’ll be in
their flight path.
ZHANG
Cryo sequence will initiate thirty
minutes after launch. They assumed
that anyone needing the escape pod
would want to go into cryo sleep as
soon as possible, due to injury or
trauma.
VILLAGRA
The board is green. All systems go
for pod launch. Launch in thirty
seconds, starting...
(pushes ignition button)
now.
The countdown clock starts. Zhang looks over at him,
squeezes his gloved hand in hers.
VILLAGRA
You’re in love with me?
(beat, she nods)
I love you too, Zhang.
EXT. VIKING 1
The escape pod jettisons from underneath the space ship.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 92.
VANESSA
I can’t believe it. Colonel Silayev
and all those soldiers. And I was
supposed to land with them...
ZACH
Listen, Dr. Pettigrew. There’s no
point in fretting: they’re gone and
that’s that. We’ve got a mission
and that’s all that matters now. We
traveled over a billion miles to
end these bastards and that’s just
what I intend to do.
VANESSA
Yes, of course, Commander. I
know. It’s just... I never
thought...
ZACH
Nobody ever does, Doctor. Now this
mission of yours; considering the
total "cluster" we’re in right now,
I’d say it’s time for you to cough
up why you’re here.
She looks up into his battle ready eyes, knows there is no
point in playing diplomacy games.
VANESSA
By the late sixties, Britain, the
U.S. and Russia had established
ongoing diplomatic discussions with
the Titanians. They shared space
exploration technology with us in
exchange for the right to
peacefully explore our deep oceans.
Zach reacts, anger rising.
ZACH
You mean we knew they were down
there?! Matt and my father and
their men were killed by an enemy
we gave refuge to!
Zach is so furious he has to turn away.
VANESSA
I’m so very sorry, Commander.
Believe me, I am... Everything we
knew about the Titanians’ Earth
explorations indicated they were
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (3) 93.
VANESSA (CONT’D.)
peace-loving and diplomatic
beings. But that changed after
Pioneer Eleven.
He faces her again, back in mission mode. She stands.
ZACH
What about Pioneer Eleven?
VANESSA
The Titanians shared their
technology with us on the condition
that we not send probes to Saturn
or any of her moons. Pioneer
Eleven made the first flyby of
Saturn in 1979. A year later,
Voyager One made a close flyby of
Titan. Communications with the
Titanians broke down after that and
by the mid-eighties we were
convinced they were becoming
hostile toward us.
ZACH
Hostile in what way?
VANESSA
(beat)
The Space Shuttle Challenger didn’t
explode due to a faulty oh-ring,
Commander.
ZACH
(disgusted)
My God...
CHIEF (O.S.)
INCOMING!
We hear a sickening WHISTLING SOUND. Zach turns just as Lin
steps out of the Osprey and an alien mortar EXPLODES into
it, BLOWING the craft and Lin to pieces.
Zach grabs Vanessa and throws her between two boulders.
ZACH
Stay here! Don’t move!
He leaves her to command his troops in what turns out to be
a fantastic battle.
94.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 95.
MAO
Incoming! Aircraft!
Mao’s POV: a ptarodactyl aircraft zeroing in on the MIRV
launcher. It opens fire.
MAO
Ready RPG!
A mini-rocket propelled grenade launcher flips out of the
left shoulder of his EBS. Mao’s HUD locks onto the "Foe."
MAO
Fire RPG!
The RPG streaks into the sky and blows the alien ship away.
MIRV LAUNCH SITE
the missile launcher is unhit, but Boggs is dead on the
ground, a slushy red hole the size of a softball through his
chest. His gum now stuck to the inside of his bloody visor.
Yardley and Rowe continue preparing the MIRV for launch.
ZACH
moves to another position. As he does, he takes note of
Vanessa - terrified but still alive - and of the Chief -
she’s sending aliens to alien hell. He looks around, finds
Keiko, who’s targeting foes and firing away.
ZACH
Honeycutt, come in! Sit rep!
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 96.
HONEYCUTT
Like a baby treats a diaper! And
we’re way low on baby wipes!
Beat. The silence between them is telling.
Zach looks across at Keiko. She hears the exchange via her
com-link and looks at Zach.
ZACH
Send them to hell, Kareem. And
I’ll see you when I get there.
HONEYCUTT
Not if I see you first, Zach.
Zach and Keiko continue to look at each other. She fights
back tears. Then she flicks a mental switch, turns toward
the enemy and starts blasting.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 97.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (3) 98.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (4) 99.
She points her right arm at the "Foes" and opens fire. They
fall. We hear the ZOOM of a pterodactyl engine overhead. It
shoots powerful energy bursts at the Chief and the prone
Zach. Misses.
The Chief turns to Zach, still out. She watches as the
alien aircraft circles back. It’s after them and only
them. She stands over Zach, ready to defend him to the
end. The pterodactyl swoops in for the kill.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 102.
VANESSA
Two factions of Titans have been at
war for at least a fifty years:
those who want to colonize Earth,
and those who want to reestablish
diplomatic relations with us.
KEIKO
And these Grull are the good guys?
VANESSA
Yes. They believe we can work out
a mutual solution to our problems.
HERZL
Mutual problems? Our only problem
is them trying to put us on ice!
The Chief grabs Vanessa’s arm. She smells a rat.
CHIEF
What gives, Doctor Pettigrew?! Why
are we really here?!
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (3) 103.
CHIEF
Shut it, Herzl!
(to Vanessa, pointedly)
Is that true, Doctor? Is it?!
VANESSA
We’re not just running low. We’ve
run out. Within a hundred years,
Earth will be completely devoid of
fossil fuels.
The troops react, incredulous.
KEIKO
What about the reserves. There has
to be enough there until we find
new sources on Earth?
HERZL
Yeah, what about drilling deeper
wells. Alaska, Siberia --
VANESSA
We did that fifty years ago; it’s
all been used up. Our voracious
appetite for oil has left the world
dry. Totally parched.
CHIEF
So we didn’t come here to stop them
from taking over our world, we came
to wipe them out and take theirs!
Jesus H. Christ! Why not just tell
us what this was all about in the
beginning?!
KEIKO
Would you have volunteered for a
suicide mission just to make gas
lines shorter?
VANESSA
We knew it was a long shot, a very
long shot. But if we could connect
with the Grull, we might be able to
tilt the balance of the civil war
in their favor, and negotiate a way
for them to live peacefully in our
oceans in exchange for our mining
their world for hydrocarbons... And
if that didn’t happen. Well, we’d
still need to stop the Vang’s plan
to colonize Earth.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (4) 104.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 105.
VANESSA
(smiles, covering)
Yes, of course. When it’s turned
off.
The Chief can’t take it any more. She shoves Rowe aside and
starts punching in random codes. The clock: 00:00:51 and
counting... She looks at Zach, lying on the ground in the
near distance.
QUICK MONTAGE - MEMORIES
The Chief thinks hard, trying to piece together events,
words, objects - anything about Zach that would give her a
clue to what the code is. FLASHES of faces, places,
missions, bar outings, his mother, his brother, girls he’s
dated, girl’s he’s loved... Maggie Ramsay.
END MONTAGE
The clock is at 00:00:9. The Chief punches in 07-25-28 and
the countdown continues, 00:00:07... The Chief blinks,
confused and stunned that Maggie’s birthday wasn’t the
code. She looks at Zach. Beat. Then she punches in
11-30-12.
The countdown clock STOPS. 00:00:02. The Chief and all of
Omega exhale, powerfully relieved.
FADE OUT.
FADE UP:
EXT. SPACE
A Titanian SPACECRAFT, like the one we saw in our opening
scenes, floats through space. In its path is a tiny SPACE
CAPSULE: the Viking One escape pod.
DISSOLVE TO:
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 106.
Zach’s eyes move to the Chief’s voice. PULL BACK and we see
her, coming toward him in a jumpsuit, her black hair longer
than Navy regulation. He sits up, stiff and in some pain.
ZACH
(groggy)
Tess, what the hell. Where are we?
CHIEF
On an alien ship. Going home. To
Earth.
Zhang steps into frame.
ZHANG
You should take it easy, Commander.
The oxygen here is much thinner
than our own. Here, chew these.
They help with oxygen absorption.
She hands him two pills. Zach pops them. Then he sees a
space-suited Titanian behind Zhang and the Chief. He
appears to be quality checking the walls. Zach’s at a loss
for words.
ZHANG
The walls generate oxygen. The
Titanians modified this ship so
that we could survive the journey
home.
CHIEF
Go figure, huh. They live in three
hundred below temperatures but
can’t make a cryo chamber.
ZACH
The team? Where are they?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 107.
CHIEF (O.S.)
She had ovarian cancer. Less than a
year to live when we left Earth.
It’s why she went into cryo. She
wanted to live long enough to reach
the surface, just on the off chance
we came across the rebels before we
blew the place to hell.
The Chief steps up and stands next to Zach. They both look
down at Vanessa.
CHIEF
A billion to one shot that she’d be
able to do it, but she did.
(Zach looks at the Chief)
Now everybody gets what they
needed; they get a home, we get
more fuel than we can ever use...
And she got to save the world
before she died.
OFF Vanessa’s face...
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2) 108.
MADDY
Alright, girls. It’s time for cake
and candles.
The girls make a space for the cake on the table. Maddy
puts it down and lights a candle shaped like a "12".
Birthday girl Maggie forces a smile. She’s not happy even
though she tries to put on a brave face.
MADDY
Alright, everybody... Happy
Birthday!
EVERYBODY
...to you! Happy Birth...
ZACH (O.S.)
(booming)
DAY TO YOU!
Maggie turns and smiles big and pretty. She runs to Zach
and they embrace. The 12-year-old girls nearly swoon.
MAGGIE
(thrilled)
Uncle Zach! I knew you’d make it!
ZACH
(that devilish smile)
You can always count on me, Kid.
Tess (the Chief), in a pretty dress, joins Maddy and Sandy
looking at Zach and Maggie’s reunion. A PHOTOGRAPHER sees
the chance for a great shot.
PHOTOGRAPHER
Mrs. Ramsay...
TESS/MADDY/SANDY
Yes.
PHOTOGRAPHER
Do you mind if I get a picture?
She SNAPS the photo. FREEZE on the image of the three
lovely Ramsay women, Navy wives...
109.
THE END