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Descriptive paragraph:

MY LITTLE DOG
If you have visited my house you have found a little dog waiting with joy. My little dog
is called Burbujita and it is very small, its color is yellow and is very light weight. My
dog is like a little prankster, she is always running around with a lot of speed for the
sole purpose of bite you while she plays with your hands. Sometimes she is looking
serious and meditative; it reminds me that even animals have feelings. I do love her
because we take care of her and she has become a special part of our family. That is
why she is the consented girl in the family.

TOPIC SENTENCE:
If you have visited my house you have found a little dog waiting with joy.
SUPORTING DETAILS:
My little dog is called Burbujita and it is very small, its color is yellow and is very light
weight. My dog is like a little prankster, she is always running around with a lot of
speed for the sole purpose of bite you while she plays with your hands. Sometimes
she is looking serious and meditative; it reminds me that even animals have feelings. I
do love her because we take care of her and she has become a special part of our
family.
CLOSING SENTENCE:
That is why she is the consented girl in the family.
HELPER WORDS:
Color, weight, is like, speed, sometimes.


Narrative paragraph:
INTERESTING EXPERIENCE IN INTERNATIONAL AFFAIRS
I had experienced the funniest experience in my life when I visited the village market.
I am a person who is not used to visit a market, however this time I needed the
services of one of them. One day I was walking inside a crowded alley when I came
upon an American who was struggling shocked by the large number of people there. I
remember I felt sorry for him because he was having a bad time. He wanted to pass a
narrow alley in the market when he tripped over a basket on the floor and
accidentally he shot a saleswoman who was very upset because of the rudeness. Then
the saleswoman kindly replied crying Gringo hijue You have to pay all you have
thrown away! You have to pay all of the merchandise! semejante then the American
replied politely "I have no guilt, but let me tell you. You are everything you said and
P.U.T.A. on it". Since then I believe international affairs are a pretty difficult subject;
we must defend our rights from meddlesome countries who try to strike into our
freedom.


TOPIC SENTENCE:
I had experienced the funniest experience in my life when I visited the village market.
SUPORTING DETAILS:
I am a person who is not used to visit a market, however this time I needed the
services of one of them. One day I was walking inside a crowded alley when I came
upon an American who was struggling shocked by the large number of people there. I
remember I felt sorry for him because he was having a bad time. He wanted to pass a
narrow alley in the market when he tripped over a basket on the floor and
accidentally he shot a saleswoman who was very upset because of the rudeness. Then
the saleswoman kindly replied crying Gringo hijue You have to pay all you have
thrown away! You have to pay all of the merchandise! semejante then the
American replied politely "I have no guilt, but let me tell you. You are everything you
said and P.U.T.A. on it".
CLOSING SENTENCE:
Since then I believe international affairs are a pretty difficult subject; we must defend
our rights from meddlesome countries who try to strike into our freedom.
HELPER WORDS:
One day, remember, then, since then.

Expository Paragraph:
RENAL FAILURE IN EL SALVADOR
The kidney failure cases in El Salvador increase annually as epidemic. First, In the
Salvadoran coast area, chronic renal failure kills more people in six months than social
violence, but in a slower and painful way. It is estimated that 10 new patients per
month get in hospitals in the east, about two remain on dialysis and the other eight
died without being part of the statistics. Second, in the first six month of 2011 the
number of gunshot injuries, deaths from violence or accidents was not the leading
cause of deceases. Nevertheless 972 inhabitants suffered renal failure because of
water contamination, air pollution and excessive use of pesticides. Finally, according
to health professionals the common belief of not drinking enough water causes kidney
failure is a myth. Exemplary, Sri Lanka is a country where the behavior of renal failure
is similar to El Salvador and it was determined that pesticides and fertilizers were the
main cause of the disease. In our country we have not implemented specific
regulations to avoid problems with chemicals yet.


TOPIC SENTENCE:
The kidney failure cases in El Salvador increase annually as epidemic.
SUPORTING DETAILS:
First, In the Salvadoran coast area, chronic renal failure kills more people in six
months than social violence, but in a slower and painful way. It is estimated that 10
new patients per month get in hospitals in the east, about two remain on dialysis and
the other eight died without being part of the statistics. Second, in the first six month
of 2011 the number of gunshot injuries, deaths from violence or accidents was not
the leading cause of deceases. Nevertheless 972 inhabitants suffered renal failure
because of water contamination, air pollution and excessive use of pesticides. Finally,
according to health professionals the common belief of not drinking enough water
causes kidney failure is a myth. Exemplary, Sri Lanka is a country where the behavior
of renal failure is similar to El Salvador and it was determined that pesticides and
fertilizers were the main cause of the disease.
CLOSING SENTENCE:
In our country we have not implemented specific regulations to avoid problems with
chemicals yet.
HELPER WORDS:
First, it is estimated that, second, nevertheless, finally, exemplary.



Persuasive Paragraph:
NUCLEAR FISSION VS NUCLEAR FUSION
Nowadays, developed countries are looking for alternative ways to obtain energy such
nuclear energy. They invest a lot of money in the development of nuclear energy in
order to obtain electricity cheaply and in large quantities. However, the use of nuclear
energy brings ecological and economic problems due to nuclear waste and
thermonuclear plants maintenance that are difficult and costly. Fortunately this may
change with the researching in news technologies that will allow fuse atoms instead
merge them to fission; this would avoid disasters like Fukushima plant in Japan
because a chain reaction cannot be sustained in atom fusion so they can never melt
down like a fission reactor which produces large radioactive waste. It is evident that
the better and safer nuclear power future will be in the fusion choice.

TOPIC SENTENCE:
Nowadays, developed countries are looking for alternative ways to obtain energy
such nuclear energy.
SUPORTING DETAILS:
They invest a lot of money in the development of nuclear energy in order to obtain
electricity cheaply and in large quantities. However, the use of nuclear energy brings
ecological and economic problems due to nuclear waste and thermonuclear plants
maintenance that are difficult and costly. Fortunately this may change with the
researching in news technologies that will allow fuse atoms instead merge them to
fission; this would avoid disasters like Fukushima plant in Japan because a chain
reaction cannot be sustained in atom fusion so they can never melt down like a
fission reactor which produces large radioactive waste.
CLOSING SENTENCE:
It is evident that the better and safer nuclear power future will be in the fusion
choice.
HELPER WORDS:
Nowadays, however, due, fortunately, it is evident.

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