Essay 1: Prose Analysis

Instructions
When you have completed Essay 1, submit it to your tutor for marking and feedback using the
appropriate assignment drop box.
Before you begin this assignment, please review the Academic Integrity section in the online Student
Manual. If you use ideas from the Study Guide, you must cite them, even if they are paraphrased.
In approximately 650750 words, state the main ideas of the passage and how these relate to the work
as a whole, and then analyse the style to indicate the effects of the stylistic devices. This stylistic analysis
could include the following elements: figurative language, rhetorical devices, diction, sentence
structure. Not all of these elements will be equally prevalent in each passage. Focus on the most
pertinent elements in the passage you have chosen, and deal with the most obvious characteristics first.
Reading the passage aloud will help to make the effects of the sounds, the sentence structure, and the
diction more apparent. Considering the following questions will also help to determine which elements
are most prominent in your passage.
Figurative Language
Identify and explain the effect of any similes, metaphors, personification. Is there a pervasive pattern of
images, or several related images? How do they convey theme?
Rhetorical Devices
Does the author use parallelism, repetition, antithesis? Is there alliteration, consonance or assonance in
the passage? Is there onomatopoeia?
Diction
Are the words concrete or abstract, colloquial or formal? Are they pervasively monosyllabic or
polysyllabic (more than one syllable)? Is there a preponderance of nouns, adjectives, or verbs? Are the
verbs active or passive?
Sentence Structure
Are the sentences long or short? Are they simple, complex, or compound sentences? Do they use
parallelism for effect? Are there any incomplete or runon sentences?
Under Sample Essays, see the sample analysis of a paragraph from Araby by James Joyce.
Now it is your turn. Analyse ONE of the three following excerpts. Please submit the final copy to your
tutor using the online drop box. Do not email your assignments; if you are unable to use the drop
boxes, contact your tutor.

1. Katherine Mansfield, Bliss, The Harbrace Anthology of Short Fiction, 136.

Reallyreallyshe had everything. She was young. Harry and she were as much in love as ever,
and they got on together splendidly and were really good pals. She had an adorable baby. They
didnt have to worry about money. They had this absolutely satisfactory house and garden. And
friendsmodern thrilling friends, writers and painters and poets or people keen on social
questionsjust the kind of friends they wanted. And then there were books, and there was
music, and she had found a wonderful little dressmaker, and they were going abroad in the
summer and their new cook made the most superb omelettes. . . .


2. William Faulkner, A Rose for Emily, The Harbrace Anthology of Short Fiction, 149.

The two female cousins came at once. They held the funeral on the second day, with the town
coming to look at Miss Emily beneath a mass of bought flowers, with the crayon face of her
father musing profoundly above the bier and the ladies sibilant and macabre; and the very old
mensome in their brushed Confederate uniformson the porch and the lawn, talking of Miss
Emily as if she had been a contemporary of theirs, believing that they had danced with her and
courted her perhaps, confusing time with its mathematical progression, as the old do, to whom
all the past is not a diminishing road but, instead, a huge meadow which no winter ever quite
touches, divided from them now by the narrow bottle-neck of the most recent decade of years.


3. Sinclair Ross, The Lamp at Noon, The Harbrace Anthology of Short Fiction, 160.

And always the wind, the creak of walls, the wild lipless wailing through the loft. Until at last as
he stood there, staring into the livid face before him, it seemed that this scream of wind was a
cry from her parched and frantic lips. He knew it couldnt be, he knew that she was safe within
the house, but still the wind persisted as a womans cry. The cry of a woman with eyes like those
that watched him through the dark. Eyes that were mad nowlips that even as they cried still
pleaded, See, PaulI stand like this all day. I just stand stillso caged! If I could only run!
Note: Your tutor may encourage you to rewrite the Prose Analysis, since you may not have mastered the
necessary writing and analytical skills so early in the course. You may choose a new topic in consultation
with your tutor, in which case you will be awarded the higher of the two marks you achieve for the
assignment; or you may rework the same topic, in which case you will receive an average of the marks
for the initial essay and the rewritten essay.