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TOBIAS WOLFFS STORY, BULLET IN THE BRAIN (1995)
1. Discuss Wolffs techniques in revealing character in Bullet in the Brain. How does he give us a sense of his characters? Be specific.
2. Analyse how the writer controls the temporal structure of
the story (i.e. creation of scenes, time-frames, etc.)
3. Comment on the strengths of the third-person narrative
with regard to this particular piece. Is it the most effective way of telling this story? Give reasons.
4. Tobias Wolffs stories do not depend on a detailed
description of a particular location for their effectiveness. In Bullet in the Brain there is only one descriptive passage near the middle section of the story in which Anders describes in detail the ceiling of the bank. What does the passage suggest to you? For what purpose does Wolff include the passage in the story?
5. How would this passage be different if it were narrated via
first-person point of view? It is worth noting what Ambers did not remember, given what he did remember. He did not remember his first lover, Sherry, or what he had most madly loved about her, before it came to irritate him her unembarrassed carnality, and especially the cordial way she had with his unit, which she called Mr. Mole, as in, Uh-oh, looks like Mr. Mole wants to play, and Lets hide Mr. Mole! Anders did not remember his wife, whom he had also loved before she exhausted him with her predictability, or his daughter, now a sullen professor of economics at Dartmouth. He did not remember standing just outside his daughters door as she lectured her bear about his naughtiness and described the truly appalling punishments Paws would receive unless he changed his ways. He did not remember a single line of the hundreds of poems he had committed to memory in his youth so that he could give himself the shivers at will not Silent, upon a peak in Darien, or My God, I heard this day, or All my pretty ones? Did you say all? O hell-kite! All? None of these did he remember; not one.
Anders did not remember his dying mother saying of his father, I should have stabbed him in his sleep.
6. At a recent creative writing seminar, a writer observed the
following: There are times when the first person is necessary for observing others (not the protagonist) in a voice that simultaneously creates a character (usually the protagonist) and there are times when the first person is necessary for observing the protagonist in a voice that is not the characters but the storys. Apply this statement to such stories as Olsens I Stand Here Ironing and Updikes A & P.