Statement
Preview
Point
Elaboration
3. Conclusion or recommendation
Significant Lexicogrammatical Features
1. Focus on generic human and generic non-human Participants
2. Use of:
containers, plates, shavers and cutlery, are made using the Earths resources. When these
products are thrown away, the resources are lost.
Another example of waste is the unnecessary packaging on many products. The material is often
not recycled and used again.
Throwing thing away also increases pollution. The amount of disposable plastic litter that ends
up in waterways is a serious problem. When this waste reaches the oceans, it can kill marine life.
Industrialist counter these arguments with their own point of view. They claim that consumers
expect to be able to purchase food which is attractively presented, prepackaged to extent its life
and easy to store. In a busy society, convenience is a priority. Products which make life easier,
era in demand. Industrialist argue that they cater to this perceived need.
Packaging is also big business and provides jobs for many people who might otherwise be
unemployed and a burden to society.
Environmentalist declare that for thousands of year, people survived perfectly well with reusable products. However, people of the twenty-first century have become used to wing in a
thrown-away society. It is up to each one of us to dispose of waste products carefully, recycle
as much as possible and to reduce the stress on our environment. Think when buying prepackaged goods and consider whether the same products can be bought without the extra
wrappings. Lets make the best of what we have.
produces
sealed up
increasingly
It does not produce smoke or carbon dioxide, so it does not contribute to the greenhouse
effect.
It produces huge amounts of energy from small amount of uranium.
It produces small amount of waste.
It is reliable.
On the other hand, nuclear power is very, very dangerous. It must be sealed up and buried for
many years to allow the radioactivity to die away. Furthermore, although it is reliable, a lot of
money has to be spent on safety because if it does go wrong, a nuclear accident ca be a major
accident.
People are increasingly concerned about this matter. In the 1990's nuclear power was the fastest
growing source of power in many parts of the world.
Note on the Generic Structure of Discussion Text
Discussion is a process to find the meet point between two different ideas. It is important to to
get the understanding between the two differences. In many social activities, discussion is the
effective way to calm down any friction and difference in thought, perception and
recommendation.
This example of discussion text present the two poles, between the advantage and disadvantage
of using nuclear plant to fulfill the energy needed. It is a case which need to be talked and
discussed from two points. They are represented in the generic structure which is used:
Stating the Issue: In the first paragraph, it is stated that using nuclear power can be the choice in
fulfilling the needed energy.
Supporting Point: In the second paragraph, it is presented the advantages of nuclear power plant
to be used as the source of the world's energy needed
Contrastive Point: The third paragraph shows the balance. It gives the contradictory idea in
using nuclear power plant as the resource of energy.
Recommendation: This text is ended with a similar recommendation on how people should
concern in the matter of nuclear energy.
homework
A further point
Parents
done
additional time
pointless
support
sense
independent
claim
argue
arguments
against
point of view.
learned
Furthermore
claim
balance
weekend
There are a lot of discussion as to whether children should be given homework or not. Is it
enough for children having time to study at school or needing additional time in home for study
after school time?
Some people claim that children do enough work in school already. They also argue that children
have their hobbies which they want to do after school, such as sport or music. A further point
they make is that a lot of homeworks are pointless and does not help the children learn at all.
However, there are also strong arguments against this point of view. Parents and teachers argue
that it is important to find out whether children can work on their own without the support from
the teacher. They say that the evening is a good time for children to sit down and think about
what they have learned in school.
Furthermore they claim that the school day is too short to get anything done. It makes sense to
send home tasks like independent reading or further writing task which do not need the teacher
support.
I think, on balance, that some homework is good idea but that should only given at the weekend
when children have more time.
Theme :
Hacking: Pro and Contra?
hacker
enjoy
exploring
hacking.
legal
illegal
breaking into
considered
try
strengths
weaknesses crimes
white collar criminals robbers
money launderers
break up
Security system
object to
break into
vital institutions
destroy
sell
treachery
government
accessing
eliminating blame
stretch
views
dare
case
credit card forgers
reason
worst
conspiracy
nut shell
capability
positive points
finding
catch
caught
skills
secret
responsible
wealth
say that a hacker likes finding the strengths and the weaknesses of a computer system. They feel
proud if they can find the weaknesses. So I dont really see the crimes in this case. In addition,
these hackers sometimes help the police catch the white collar criminals, such as bank robbers,
money launderers, credit card forgers. For example, in 2000, the U.S. hackers caught some
Singaporean hackers who made Virus Love to break up the programs of the U.S. National
Security system.
Nevertheless, those who object to the good points of a hacker say that hacking is a crime. The
reason is that some hackers use their brilliant skills to break into banks and other vital institutions
where they can get money, destroy information, and the worst thing is they can get secret
information and sell it to another country. This is a treachery.
Take for example, in 1994, The U.S. government broke a conspiracy of computer hackers out of
Majorca, Spain. These hackers were responsible for accessing and eliminating 190,000 telephone
credit card numbers over computer bulletin boards in America and Europe. Seeing this fact, I
dont blame those who think negatively about hackers.
To put the whole thing in a nut shell, I personally think that hackers are not bad people with their
brilliant skills. However, they could be bad because of money orientation to get the wealth.
Thats just the point.
Birth Control
Most people agree that some form of family limitation or spacing is desirable for the good of the
family and society. But individuals and groupsespecially religious groupsdiffer sharply on the
methods of birth control that they consider moral and acceptable.
Couples that practice birth control do so for various reasons. They may want to limit or space
their children, or to have no children at all. Young couples often postpone having children so that
both partners can work full-time. Other couples space their children so they can give each child
as much attention as possible. Some women are advised by their doctors to avoid pregnancy for
health reasons. In many countries with rapidly growing populations, the government encourages
couples to limit the size of their families.
Even though birth control has gained in acceptance, opposition to the practice is continuous.
Some people fear that birth control encourages sexual relations outside marriage or that
government might impose birth control. Some religious groups oppose birth control on moral
grounds.
Some religious groups teach that artificial methods of birth control are immoral because they
separate the two purposes of intercourse in marriageconjugal love and the procreation of
children. Although they oppose all artificial birth control, they consider natural family planning
acceptable.
National exam becomes the hot topic in most of discussions. Though the Supreme Court has rejected an
appeal by the go-vernment on the organization of the national exams, the controversy over whether it is
necessary to maintain the national exams (UN) has continued. Some debates include the primary
questions such as; does the quality of Indonesia education depend on the national exam?, will the
quality of the Indonesian education system worsen without natipnal exam?
People, who support the national exam explain that the quality of the Indonesia education system will
drop without the national exam, so they try to defend the current system.
Hoever there are people who disagree with the opinion. Those who against this national exam kept in
our high school education say that it doesn't need the national exams because the quality of education
does not just depend on the national exam. Further, the national exam only measures a small portion of
students' competence in specific subjects, and does not measure students' competences throughout the
semester.
In fact, the national examination can still be useful as an instrument to evaluate or detect the level of
students' cognitive competence in several subjects, on a national scale.
need it. So before deciding a choice of attending distance learning or not, each student needs to
do a fair analysis regarding the kind of person he/she is.
effort and time and divert it to other more productive things because while working, we are close to our
families.
However making home as office also has some disadvantages. For some people, keeping the schedule is
hard in flexible time. Such people type will harder if they are working just from home. There will no clear
border between working and breaking. Working just from home also reduces the possibility to meet
new people. It is true that computer and Internet connection possibly relate people every time and
everywhere but we will interact with them in a dimension which is not real face.
So considering carefully what we actually need in running our business is very recommended before
choosing to have office at home or not.
In this globalization era, we separate from technology, including cell phone. Now, many people
have cell phone. Including us, we also have cell phone , havent us? But there is a controversy
about using cell phone at school. Some people against with the using cell phone at school, but
some people support it.
Those who agree to use cell phone at school will bring beneficial. For example, we can browse
the internet with our cell phone to find out some lessons that we dont understand. Another
beneficial of using cell phone is if we havent scientific calculator and a dictionary or too heavy
to bring dictionary to school, we can down load scientific calculator and digital dictionary to our
cell phone. So, we can study with our cell phone.
Not everyone agree with this idea, however some people feel that it could have terrible effect.
When the student feel bored with his lessons maybe be quietly use his cell phone to play game or
to access social networking such as facebook or send short message to his friend. So, it will
disturb his lessons. The fatal effect is when student have something about porn in his cell phone.
It makes his moral so bad.
The school rules therefore made rules about using cell phone at school. It can make the students
moral so bad. But, it can use to support our study.