Greene lets even more insults fly as he continues: "O that I might intreat your
rare wits to be imploied in more profitable courses: & let those Apes imitate yo
ur past excellence, and never more acquaint them with your admired inventions."
It seems very possible such events are connected to the poet s distressed declarat
ion in line 8: "With what I most enjoy contented least."
All is not lost, however, for the sonnet ends with a positive affirmation that t
he poet can combat his anguish with the "sweet love" (13) of his dear friend.
------------------------------Resenting his bad luck, the poet envies the successful art of others and rattles
off an impressive catalogue of the ills and misfortunes of his life. His depres
sion is derived from his being separated from the young man, even more so becaus
e he envisions the youth in the company of others while the poet is "all alone."
Stylistically, Sonnet 29 is typically Shakespearean in its form. The first eight
lines, which begin with "When," establish a conditional argument and show the p
oet's frustration with his craft. The last six lines, expectedly beginning in li
ne 9 with "Yet" similar to other sonnets' "But"
and resolving the conditional ar
gument, present a splendid image of a morning lark that "sings hymns at heaven's
gate." This image epitomizes the poet's delightful memory of his friendship wit
h the youth and compensates for the misfortunes he has lamented.
The uses of "state" unify the sonnet's three different sections: the first eight
lines, lines 9 through 12, and the concluding couplet, lines 13 and 14. Additio
nally, the different meanings of state as a mood and as a lot in life
contrast t
he poet's sense of a failed and defeated life to his exhilaration in recalling h
is friendship with the youth. One state, as represented in lines 2 and 14, is hi
s state of life; the other, in line 10, is his state of mind. Ultimately, althou
gh the poet plaintively wails his "outcast state" in line 2, by the end of the s
onnet he has completely reversed himself: ". . . I scorn to change my state with
kings." Memories of the young man rejuvenate his spirits.