Year Level: 5
Listened to
Spoken
Read
Written
Viewed
Produced
Persuasive:
An opening statement of the issue or concern that is to be argued- this may be called
the thesis statement.
Arguments (points put forward) to support the opinion or proposal, each of which is
supported by evidence or examples that help elaborate or argue a point of view.
Sequentially ordered arguments from the most persuasive to the least persuasive.
A concluding statement that sums up the argument and relates to the point of view
and suggests a solution or possible action.
Emotive words and phrases used to persuade the reader (e.g. we strongly
believe the disastrous consequences)
Connectives to indicate the sequence of the points supporting the stance (e.g. firstly,
secondly, finally).
Specialized vocabulary and technical terms relating to the issue being argued.
A variety of verbs used, e.g. action verbs (run, ruin, drive); mental verbs (hope,
believe, think).
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Explore content by discussing how the convicts were treated in 1808, and how convicts should
be treated. List down how convicts should be treated and the reasons why they should be
treated with more respect, encouraging students to verbally provide reasons to support their
personal views and opinions. As a class, explore related topics such as convict children, adult
convicts and gender stereotypes.
Over a series of sessions, the teacher will assist students in jointly writing a persuasive text in
which they are a convict arguing and advocating for better treatment of all convicts. Teacher
and students will state the reasons why they believe convicts should be treated better and with
more respect. To consolidate and establish text-knowledge, the students will write persuasive
text about a convict child who has not been treated fairly.
Students will have prior knowledge in regards to the structure of a persuasive argument.
However, I assume students will have limited prior knowledge in regards to the content of
convicts in 1808.
Four resource model (Freebody & Luke, 1990/1999): Code Breaker; Text Participant/Meaning
Maker; Text User; Text Analyst
Comprehension Strategies: Predicting; Visualising; Making connections; Questioning; Inferring;
Determining important ideas; Summarising; Finding evidence in the text; Understanding new
vocabulary; Synthesising; Comparing and contrasting; Paraphrasing; Recognising cause and effect;
Skimming and scanning; Five semiotic systems: linguistics, visual, auditory, spatial, gestural.
Question types: self-questioning; 3 levels; (literal, inferential, evaluative); QAR
Thinking Routines: See, Think, Wonder; Headlines; +1, Three word summary, 5VIPs, Give One,
Get One (refer Ritchhart, R., Church, M., & amp; Morrison, K. (2011). Making Thinking Visible:
How to Promote Engagement, Understanding, and Independence for All Learners. eBook online)
Resources:
- Wing Jan, L. (2009). Write ways: Modelling writing Forms (3rd ed.). South Melbourne,
Vic: Oxford University Press.
- Smith, A., & Randell, B. (2007). PM writing: Exemplars for teaching writing 1. South Melbourne, Vic: Thomson Nelson.
-Graham, S., & Ferguson, J. (2010). Exposition/Persuasive texts: Supplementary booklet. South Melbourne, Vic: Nelson
Cengage Learning.
My Place website www.myplace.edu.au Video clip Episode 21|1808 Sarah; ABC3 MyPlace
http://www.abc.net.au/abc3/myplace/
ABC. (2014). Behind The News: First Fleet [Video Clip]. Retrieved from
http://www.abc.net.au/btn/story/s3934600.htm
Nelley, E., Croft, D., Smith, A., & Ciuffetelli, P. (2007). Pm writing 1: Teachers resource book. South Melbourne, Vic:
Cengage Leraning.
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Analysing
Checking
Classifying
Cooperating
Considering options
Designing
Elaborating
Estimating
Explaining
Generalising
Hypothesising
Inferring
Interpreting
Justifying
We are learning to
identify topic words
(nouns) for taking
notes after viewing the
clip.
Performing
Persuading
Planning
Predicting
Presenting
Providing feedback
Questioning
Seeing patterns
Selecting information
Self-assessing
Sharing ideas
Summarising
Synthesising
Testing
Viewing
Visually representing
Working independently
Working to a timetable
MINI LESSON
(Explicitly model the use of a new strategy or a
tool to assist with the literacy learning
intention or focus of the session and to
prepare students for successful completion of
the set task. Reference to Wing Jan include
page details)
INDEPENDENT
LEARNING
(Extended opportunity for students to work in
pairs, small groups or individually on a set
task. Time for teacher to probe students
thinking or work with a small group for part of
the time. Reference to Wing Jan include page
details)
ASSESSMENT
STRATEGIES
(should relate to literacy learning intention
or focus of the session. Includes how &
what you will use to make a judgment on
students attempt/work)
Success criteria written for students to
know what the minimum expectation is.
Think-Pair-Share:
With the same partner,
students share an iPad to
watch a second video clip
Episode 21 (1). Have the
students take notes
individually, documenting
the key topic words
(nouns). Partners discuss
their key findings.
Reflection circles:
After viewing the two
videos, students work
with their partner to
complete the L columnwhat they have learned.
Emphasise the new
vocabulary and their
meanings students have
explored through
specifically focusing on
topic words related to
convicts.
Each partner chooses
their best learning,
records on a sticky note,
shares with the class and
then places on the large
KWL chart in the L
column.
Anecdotal notes:
Teacher will take
anecdotal notes whilst
working with the small
teaching group during
guided writing. Look
for reference to the
literacy learning
intention i.e. finding
and observing topic
words (nouns). Teacher
will observe students
abilities of finding topic
words throughout the
videos and putting these
into sentences, record
these notes anecdotally.
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Reading
Recognising bias
Reflecting
Reporting
Responding
Restating
Revising
WHOLE CLASS
Hook or Tuning In
(Identify a strategy or a tool to help
activate prior knowledge and/or to
introduce the topic.)
Session 1- Building
topic knowledge
Joanna 1808:
Treatment of the
convict children
Listening
Locating information
Making choices
Note taking
Observing
Ordering events
Organising
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Session 2- Building
topic knowledge
We are learning to use
a range of multimodal
texts and record our
understandings of the
topic.
Session 3- Building
topic knowledge
We are learning to use
our knowledge of the
topic-specific words to
develop key
understandings in
relation to the
treatment of convicts
in 1808.
Session 4Building text
knowledge/Model the
genre
We are learning to
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Shared Reading:
The teacher uses
shared reading to
explore the
persuasive text in PM
Analyzing Writing:
The teacher reads the PM
writing persuasive text
again, this time using
colour to deconstruct the
Reflectonthetaskof
deconstructingan
expositionandrevisethe
keyelementsofthistext
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Writing: Exemplars
for teaching Writing
1 (Refer sample,
Smith & Randell,
2007).
How does this text
begin?
What does this text
contain?
type.Demonstrateand
emphasizetheimportance
ofknowingthestructure
ofanexpositioninorder
forstudentstowritetheir
ownexpositiontext.
regards to students
participation. Use the
thumbs up approach
to record students
knowledge and
understanding.
ReturntoTChartused
inthetuninginactivity
anddiscuss/clarifyany
Teacher records
unfamiliarvocabulary
findings on a Tdiscussedinthisgraphic
Chart with the
Small Teaching Group:
organisertoensureitis
heading Expositions
Joint deconstruction:
nowclear.Discussand
(see appendix 3).
Cut a deconstructed text
Add sub-heading
into sections (see appendix demonstratethekey
words,sequenceand
Structure on the left
4) and have labels with
structureofanexposition
hand side then
key headings: Thesis
andaddanynewtermsor
underneath students
statement, first argument,
vocabularytotheT
can add words to
supporting evidence,
Chart.
demonstrate what
second argument,
they know in regards
supporting evidence, third
to the structure of an
argument, supporting
exposition.
evidence, and conclusion.
Scaffold students learning
by working and making
decisions together to build
understanding of the
structure and sequence of
an exposition text.
TheteacherwillcompletethesamelessonasinSession4,however,thistimewithlanguagefeaturesratherthanstructure.Again,asa
classreadthetextthroughandaddlanguagefeaturesasasubheadingontherighthandsideoftheTChart.Teacherthenreadsthe
PMtextagain(refersample,Smith&Randell,2007)andexplicitlymodelsfindingeachofthelanguagefeaturesinthetext.Discuss
andreviewthelanguagefeaturesofanexposition.Havechildrenworkinpairswithadifferenttextandinstructthemtousecolourto
identifythelanguagefeaturesinthetext(e.g.redforalltheemotivewords,purpleforthenouns,blueforfacts,greenforopinions,
yellowforconjunctions).Returntothefloor,discussanddemonstratethekeylanguagefeaturesofanexpositionandaddanynew
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exposition.
termsorvocabularytotheTChart.
Havestudentsreadcopiesofexpositionsinsmallgroupsandidentifythestructureandlanguagefeatures.Returnasawholeclassand
usetheHeadlinesthinkingroutinetoextendstudentsthinking.WriteonapieceofbutcherspaperIfyouweretowriteaheadlinefor
anexpositionthathighlightedthemostimportantaspectorfeaturethatshouldberemembered,whatwoulditbe?Haveeachstudent
respondandsharetheirfindingsonastickynoteandrecordtheclasssheadlinesofthefeaturesofanexpositiontheyfindmost
importantwhenwritingthistexttype.Documentstudentsdevelopingunderstandingofexpositions.
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Think Aloud:
Read the first sentence of
the modality cloze
exercise, orally modelling
to students low, medium
and high modality words,
asking which is most
persuasive? Think aloud,
modelling to the class the
use of high modality
words that demonstrate
emotive language to
persuade the reader.
Emphasize how speaking
and listening is used to
identify how words can be
more persuasive than
other.
Define exactly what
emotive language is and
Students complete a
modality cloze exercise
(see appendix 7) orally in
groups to verbally discuss
which word uses highest
modality to persuade the
reader. Have children read
sentences to orally hear
how different words can
be most persuasive.
Think Aloud:
Teacher models the
modality cloze exercise
sheet. State that persuasive
arguments use emotive
words to make an impact
on their target audience.
State some of the emotive
words that may be used,
refer to continuum
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Shared reading
Cut out newspaper
and magazine
advertisements and
separate facts and
opinions. Ask
students:
Where are most facts
found?
Where are most
opinions found?
How can you tell the
difference between a
fact and a personal
opinion?
Ask students to
orally answer these
questions to
distinguish between
fact and opinion as
teacher scribes into T
chart (see appendix
10). (refer sample,
Wing Jan, 2009).
Prioritise
Reflection Circles
Revisit the key features
that distinguish facts from
opinions. Have one group
from each side of the
argument- Children
convicts should be found
guilty of their petty
crimes to share with the
class.
After revising the key
features and observing
students work, record
any new responses that
students may have in
regards to distinguishing
between fact and opinion
to the T-Chart.
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ideas/opinions/facts
students have found
in the
newspaper/advertise
ment from the most
persuasive to the
least.
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Shared Reading
The teacher uses
shared reading to
explore further the
key elements of an
exposition. In small
groups distribute
copies of various
Shared Writing
Teacher and students work
collaboratively to create
an exposition on the topic
Adult convicts deserve
better treatment.
As a class decide whether
the majority agree or
Reflection circles
Have time to share 1-2
groups of students work
samples. Revise key
features of a thesis
statement.
Continue to discuss key
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follows.
Small Teaching GroupInteractivewriting:
Havetheteacherand
studentsjointlycompose
andsharethewritingof
thethesisstatement.
Teacherscaffoldsstudent
learningbybothmodeling
andguidingstudentsas
theyeachtaketurnsin
scribingarangeofthesis
statements.
also participate in
roving conferences with
students in the small
teaching focus group to
gain a deeper
understanding into
students knowledge
and ability to write a
thesis statement.
*Emphasizethatthesis
statementneedstobe
differenttotheone
constructedtogetherasa
class.
Session 11Joint construction of
text
We are learning to
develop the series of
arguments and
supporting evidence in
a persuasive argument
through joint
construction.
Session 12Joint construction of
text
We are learning to
develop the conclusion
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Reread thesis statement from previous lesson. Teacher and students work collaboratively to create a series of arguments and supporting
evidence on the same topic Adult convicts deserve better treatment. Highlight previous learnings on modality and fact and opinion.
Draw attention to the graphic organisers previously created when jointly constructing arguments to remind students of the structure and
language features of an exposition.
Reread thesis statement and arguments and supporting evidence from previous lesson. Teacher and students work collaboratively to
write a conclusion on the topic Adult convicts deserve better treatment. Draw attention to the graphic organisers previously created
when jointly constructing the conclusion.
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in a persuasive
argument through joint
construction.
Session 13Joint construction of
text
We are learning to put
together the thesis
statement, arguments
with supporting
evidence and
conclusion to jointly
construct a text.
Session 14Independent
construction of text
We are learning to use
our previous
knowledge to develop
a draft exposition that
argues for one side of
an argument.
Session 15Independent
construction of text
We are learning to edit
and proof read our
draft exposition,
ensuring we have
adhered to the
checklist before we
publish our final copy.
Session 16Reflecting on
language choices
We are learning to
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Take the other side of the exposition Adult convicts deserve better treatment (therefore arguing they dont deserve better treatment).
Together, think aloud and construct the whole exposition including the thesis statement, arguments with supporting evidence and the
conclusion. Teacher uses interactive whiteboard to record the text, using shared writing approach.
Inform students they will begin to plan for the writing of their own persuasive argument, arguing that Children convicts deserve better
treatment. Students use previous learning experiences to design their own mind map. Emphasize that students must keep in mind their
own opinions, as well as the purpose, structure and language features such as emotive language and the use of facts and opinions to
persuade the reader. Students will use the think, pair, share thinking routine to share their ideas. Encourage students to begin to use
their concept map to build their exposition e.g. the introduction, body and conclusion. As a class, refer to the graphic organisers created
previously.
Students use their mind maps, along with the jointly constructed exposition model on the treatment of adult convicts to begin to draft
their own exposition on the topic, Children convicts deserve better treatment. Students are given an exposition checklist (see
appendix 11) (refer Wing Jan, 2009, p.178) highlighting the purpose, structure and language features to refer to while writing their text.
At the end of the lesson the teacher refers to the checklist to assist students in proofreading their writing. Eg. Have I used time
connectives to link my arguments?
Allow time for students to complete their draft (see appendix 12). Students work individually to edit and proof read their writing.
Encourage the use of peer support and the use of the sunshine wheel to refer to correct spelling of topic specific words when editing.
Emphasize the use of correct grammar, punctuation and spelling, along with using the appropriate language features of a persuasive
text i.e. connectives (firstly, secondly, finally) and conjunctions. Encourage students to use resources around the room i.e. sunshine
wheel, dictionaries. T-charts. Students use their exposition checklist to ensure all requirements have been met. Conference with teacher
and publish.
Students write in their learning journals (also known as a reflective journal) what they have learnt and how they feel in having created
an exposition. Use the Two stars and a wish activity to support students to reflect on two things they liked about their writing and one
that they could/wish to improve upon.
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