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Several meals like Needs definition.frijoles fritos Good specific detail(s)!were easy to Several meals like .frijoles fritos, fried spicy beans, were easy to
prepare, but othersRun-on sentence. such as Needs definition.pozoleRun-on sentence.prepare; others, such as pozole, (definition) ,were very difficult
to cook.
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Sometimes, my grandma cooked the strangest dishes I
have ever seen. ForSometimes, my grandma cooked the strangest dishes I had ever
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erroreve; seen.
example, she prepared chiles en nogada for the 2009 Christmas
It wasTime reference unclear. then when I began to Show this!analyze the recipes of theIt was that Christmas dinner when I began to think about how
weird the combination of all those ingredients is, and thus,
Mexican cuisine,
When I learned to cook mole poblano about two years ago, I was astonished with the
When I learned to cook mole poblano about two years ago, I
wide range of ingredients required to Redundant.cook this Mexican traditional dish. Atwas astonished with the wide range of ingredients required in
Article errorthe first sight, Italics or underline.mole looks like shredded chicken breast this Mexican traditional dish. At first sight, mole looks like
topped with an Poor word choice?insipid-red sauce;Punctuation error .Incompleteshredded chicken breast topped with a tasty red sauce; it was
nothing special or extraordinary for Mexican cuisine
sentence. nothing special or extraordinary for the Mexican cuisine, []
I could not believe that the tasty topping I had eaten since I
I could not believe that the insipid topping I Verb Tenseate since I was a child, []
was a child
Who in their right mind combines chocolate, chili, nuts and animal Who in their right mind combines chocolate, chili, nuts and
animal crackers? I thought to myself, Its nonsense.
crackers?,Punctuation error. I thought for myself, Its nonsense.Punctuation error
((Thus, I believed that ))mole poblano is []
Mole poblano is a []
To my surprise, the dish was delicious; it tasted like spicy []
To my surprise, the dish was delicious:Punctuation error. it tasted like spicy []