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Several meals like Needs definition.frijoles fritos Good specific detail(s)!were easy to Several meals like .frijoles fritos, fried spicy beans, were easy to
prepare, but othersRun-on sentence. such as Needs definition.pozoleRun-on sentence.prepare; others, such as pozole, (definition) ,were very difficult

were very difficult to cook.

to cook.
Verb
Tense
Sometimes, my grandma cooked the strangest dishes I
have ever seen. ForSometimes, my grandma cooked the strangest dishes I had ever
Capitalization
erroreve; seen.
example, she prepared chiles en nogada for the 2009 Christmas

It wasTime reference unclear. then when I began to Show this!analyze the recipes of theIt was that Christmas dinner when I began to think about how
weird the combination of all those ingredients is, and thus,
Mexican cuisine,
When I learned to cook mole poblano about two years ago, I was astonished with the
When I learned to cook mole poblano about two years ago, I
wide range of ingredients required to Redundant.cook this Mexican traditional dish. Atwas astonished with the wide range of ingredients required in
Article errorthe first sight, Italics or underline.mole looks like shredded chicken breast this Mexican traditional dish. At first sight, mole looks like
topped with an Poor word choice?insipid-red sauce;Punctuation error .Incompleteshredded chicken breast topped with a tasty red sauce; it was
nothing special or extraordinary for Mexican cuisine
sentence. nothing special or extraordinary for the Mexican cuisine, []
I could not believe that the tasty topping I had eaten since I
I could not believe that the insipid topping I Verb Tenseate since I was a child, []
was a child
Who in their right mind combines chocolate, chili, nuts and animal Who in their right mind combines chocolate, chili, nuts and
animal crackers? I thought to myself, Its nonsense.
crackers?,Punctuation error. I thought for myself, Its nonsense.Punctuation error
((Thus, I believed that ))mole poblano is []
Mole poblano is a []
To my surprise, the dish was delicious; it tasted like spicy []
To my surprise, the dish was delicious:Punctuation error. it tasted like spicy []

the corn Word form incorrect.smuts analogous to mushrooms


nevertheless, for Mexican Vaguepeople, the fungus is

the corn smuts analogue to mushrooms []


nevertheless, for most Mexican people, the fungus is

I think that quesadillas de huitlacoche illustrates


I think that quesadillas de huitlacoche Subject-verb agreement error.illustrate how
))
During my lifeRun-on sentence. I have tried(( Vaguedifferent
MexicanDuring my life, I have tried Mexican dishes from spicy soups
unnecessary
comma
like pozole to fried desserts made of flour and sugar
dishes,
from spicy soups like pozole to fried desserts
Because the stew looked like a combination of ground meat, onions, tomatoes, spices, Because the stew looked like a combination of ground meat,
and green peppera typical combination of ingredients in the Mexican cuisine, I onions, tomatoes, spices, and green peppera typical
decided
combination of ingredients in Mexican cuisine, I decided
I have learned that no matter how unusual the ingredients of a
I have learned that no matter how unusual the ingredients of a dish are, since it is a matter
dish are, it is only a matter of time until one accepts that meal as
of time to accept that meal as an everyday food.
an everyday food.

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