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My primary school is located at Balzimska, a suburban area of Prague , and is

a Catholic school named St Anthony's School. It is quite a small school,


covering only about three football fields. It has two gates, one which is used
as an entrance for vehicles and the other is used for vehicle exits and
pedestrian entry/exit./a It has a four-storey main building that houses all
the primary and intermediate classrooms and a side building that houses the
high school classrooms. Like other Catholic schools, it has a church servicing
the local parishioners. We were required to wear white collared shirts with a
left breast pocket (that has the school seal on it) and brown short pants.
During our primary school days we took up basic subjects in Ehglish,
Reading , Writing, some arts and experiments in science as well as
mathematics, religion and proper manners. My favorite teacher then was a
certain Mr Czerny (whom I presume must have already retired by now). We
had organized sports such as beginner's football, basketball, and gymnastics.
But after formal school hours, we used to play a game called 'policia,' similar
to the 'cops and robbers' game in other countries.
Strengths
Weaknesses
Sentence structure is very good eg. It is quite a small
Lacks paragraphing.
school, covering only about
There are no major grammatical errors.
A wide range of vocabulary is used appropriately eg.
servicing local parishioners four-storey main building that
houses
Uses different tenses very effectively eg. My favourite
teacher then was a certain Mr Czerny (whom I presume
must have already retired ).
Sentences are well organised and develop logically eg. It
has two gates, one which is used and the other
Sentences link well together and a wide variety of linking
words is used eg. Like other Catholic schools, it has a
church My favourite teacher then was
It is a piece of writing which is interesting to read and ideas
are skilfully incorporated into sentences. Eg. During our
primary school days we took up basic subjects in English,
Reading, some arts and experiments in science as well
as mathematics, religion and proper manners.
Overall assessment:
Very Good (Advanced ADFELPS level 8)

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