ANG TOKSO

("The Inquiry")

Screenplay by
DIEM JUDILLA
djudilla@yahoo.com
Cebu City, Cebu
2013

 SCREENWRITER NOTES
CHARACTERS
NOEL, 20s y.o. adult with a toddler's mind, heart and
tongue. Dressed like a pastor, he looks meek and harmless.
Spasms jerk his body from time to time.
GARDO, an ex-cop in his mid-to-late 40s but looks older.
A tough man borne of tougher living. His own burden of sins
and crimes shows in his hunched posture and bloated body.
HOMER gets only heard by his voice and seen as a body in
the end. Cut from the same cloth as Gardo, they're mutts
from the same breed.
MARCUS/MARK, seen via PHOTOS at least a decade old.
A good-looking young man, bright with a sunny smiles,
he's a hero to Noel.
SETTINGS
There are only three interior settings: Gardo's bedroom,
the den or sala 1and a store-room or bodega.
Ideally, all these settings should be found at one location
for convenience and no need for transportation.
The last scene requires an exterior setting of an empty lot
with an open hole or pit. Locations such as quarries can be
used, or a small dirt hill or mound or beach dunes or river
banks can be made to appear as the ledge leading into a
hole, or a shallow pit can be made to look deeper via
forced perspective: i.e. get the actor kneel down in a
shallow pit and use forced perspective to make it appear
he's standing in a deep pit.

1.

INT. ROOM DAY.

Bright morning heats up this box of a bedroom like an oven.
THE DOOR, forceful knocks makes the knob shiver.
LANDLADY (O.S.)
Gardo, buhi pa ka diha?
Naa kay bisita!
GARDO; a mutt-faced fighter hardened by 40-odd years of
dog-eat-scraps struggles, rises from his rag of a cot,
half-naked with sweat as a shirt.
LANDLADY (O.S., CONT'D)
Basin kliyente, makabayad ka na
sa imung abang!
He swigs up AN EMPTY BEER BOTTLE, realizes it doesn't have
a drop. Lets it fall on the floor.
INT. DEN DAY.
A TV SET blares out TV shows, switches channel to channel.
NOEL; a toddler in a twenty-plus old pastor's body that
jerks at the joints like a string puppet, whose own face
spasms into clownish emoticons, sticks out his tongue with
impatient bitterness then squints into a toothful grin.
He finds A SINGING SHOW/MUSIC VIDEO on T.V.
Noel squats low and sings out the song, matches the
singer's voice identically.
GARDO stands in the room. He coughs.
The cough catches Noel off-guard. He gets up straight.
He's dressed formal; polished shoes belted slacks, collared
shirt with long sleeves, all too tight on his skinny frame.
NOEL
Police Inspector Ricardo Bonin?
Ako si De Guzman, Noel de Guzman
po. Mr. Yap garecomendar nimo.

2.

Noel's slurs every word with an underdeveloped, toddler's

tongue and tone. Her offers his hand and pumps Gardo's in a
clumsy, energetic handshake.
Noel does not let go of Gardo, who pulls out his hand to
show Noel to a chair.
GARDO
Dii nako inspektor, retirado na.
Unsay tuyo nimo nako?
Noel nods several times before sitting down.
NOEL
Mangayo ko og tabang pangita sa
akong maguwang. Si Noy Marco.
Pu'u gatuig na siya di'makit-an.
Noel places A BRIEFCASE on his knees and struggles through
his body's spasms to opens its clasp.
Gardo helps by not letting the case fall off.
NOEL
Salamat. Tabangi ko pangita sa
akong Noy Marco.
Noel gives A DECADE-OLD photo of A YOUNG MAN in casual
clothes, stands in a garden, poses to show off THE PRICEY
WATCH on his wrist.
Gardo takes the photo, studies it.
GARDO
Kanus'a ang kinatapusan nyong
pagkita?
NOEL
Hmmm... hmmm... ingon ni mama
gidaaa si noy Mark sa presingto
para pangutan-on bahin sa usa ga
rally sa iyang kampus. Human di
na siya gauli. Giingnan mi na
niapil na siya Manoy sa Eeen,
Peee, Aaay.

3.

Noel shakes his head. His speech slurs with haste.

NOEL
Di na mahimo ni manoy. Di niya
mi mabiyaan. Pangitaa siya
inspektor. Naa koy kwarta.
From the briefcase, Noel takes A COLORFUL CYLINDRICAL COIN
BANK. Pulls off the lid, pours the open end on the table.
Some coins fall out, followed by FOUR THICK ROLLS OF FIVEHUNDRED BILLS before a surprised Gardo.
NOEL
Sakto na downpayment na?
Sakto na?
Gardo looks hungry at the money. He nods, gets a FOLDER.
NOEL
Kini impormasyon ni manoy.
Naa pud akoang selfon.
Tawgi ko kun naay notisya.
INT. ROOM DAY.
GARDO smokes a cigarette. He looks at Mark's photo then
places it inside THE FOLDER full of reports.
He picks up his phone. Dials. Presses to his ear and waits.
HOMER (O.S.)
(filtered) Gardo. Gatawag ka
bai? Mangutang napud ka?
GARDO
Di. Kabahin ni Marco de Guzman.
A solid pause, Gardo drags long on his cigarette.
HOMER (O.S.)
(filtered) Dugay-dugay pud nako
gadungog bahin niya.

4.

GARDO
Gipangita gihapon siya sa iyang
pamilya. Gi abangan ko
mobestigar kun asa siya ron.
HOMER (O.S.)
(filtered) Kini kinabuhi gyud.
Unsay buhaton nimo?
GARDO
Muikyas gyud ko. Sa lain nasod.
HOMER (O.S.)
(filtered) O naa kay kwarta?
GARDO
Mm way sapayan. Tawgon tika.
Gardo ends the call. He leans down under his cot and brings
out A TRAVELLING BAG. He zips the bag open and takes out a
LOCKED CASH-BOX.
Gardo inserts A SMALL KEY into the lock, opens the lid.
INSIDE THE CASH BOX, several old I.D.s, some jewelry, a
small pistol, and from these Gardo pulls OUT A WRISTWATCH.
A FAMILIAR WRISTWATCH. Gardo holds it up, turns it over to
its back...
ON THE COT, THE PHOTO OF MARCUS PREVIOUSLY SHOWN.
INT. DEN AFTERNOON.
NOEL tears up as he reads the watch's inscription.
He breaks out a happy smile and laugh.
NOEL
For Marcus, we are proud of
you! Love, Nanay, Tatay and
Noel. Kini kang manoy ni!
Noel yells with joy! He eagerly embraces Gardo, pumps the
man tightly. Then releases Gardo.

5.

GARDO
Gikan ni sa prenderyan duol sa
bordinghaws kun asa gapuyo imong
manoy sa una.
NOEL embraces Gardo again. Gardo looks uncomfortable,
forces Noel off him and steady the man's excitement.
GARDO (CONT'D)
Ser Noel! Base sa tiket sa
pawnshop ang gaprenda ay usa sa
amigo ni noy Marco nimo, gapuyo
ron sa Biliran. Kinahanglan ko
muadto didto. Kinahanglan ko ug
ekstra. Para sa biyahe.
NOEL
Sige, mowithdraw ko sa ATM po.
Mubalik ko.
With Marcus' wristwatch, he leaves, then comes back.
NOEL
Tagpila ang kinahanglan niyo?
GARDO hands him A SLIP OF PAPER for Noel to read.
Noel nods and leaves.
Gardo turns to the windows, watches and waits.
THE WINDOWS the daylight dims quickly into dark night.
GARDO looks at his watch, impatient.
He grabs his travel bag and heads towards the front door.
He opens it and bumps into Noel.
NOEL lifts up A FEW PLASTIC BAGS of takeout food, liquor.
INT. DEN - NIGHT
ON THE DEN'S TABLE Roast chicken, barbecue and pancit
Canton are spread out. Noel pours liquor in a glass.
GARDO
Katung kwarta Ser Noel?

6.

Noel slaps his pant's pocket, on a bulge, several times.

NOEL
Magpaparti sa ta. Disbidida!
NOEL raises a glass to Gardo.
GARDO clinks his glass to Noel's and sips.
NOEL drinks in one gulp. Burps loud. Giggles. Pours himself
another glass. Offers the bottle to Gardo.
GARDO drinks in one gulp. Grabs the bottle, pours.
He takes A DRUMSTICK to bite but Noel interrupts him.
NOEL
Naa moy igsoon? Pamilya?
GARDO
(shrugs) Nidako ko inusura ra,
usa ka ilo. Ampon sa nasod.
NOEL
Ampon. Ampon pud si noy Marco.
Nitugot kasi sina mama og papa
na di makapanganok sila.
NOEL pauses, nostalgic then grins.
NOEL
Human niabot ko. Tiguwang na si
mama, usa ra ko na milagros.
Pero lahi ko, di normal.
Pats his clothes, searching. Pulls out A THICK WALLET from
his pocket, full of PHOTOS OF TWO BOYS, the older bearing
the younger with pride.
NOEL
Ingon ni manoy pamilya mi.
Way kalahian. Igsoon mi.
Manghod niya ko.

7.

Tears fall out of Noel's eyes. He touches them with

surprise, without realization of their source.
He smiles at Gardo.
GARDO drinks his glass empty. MORE LIQUOR is poured and
SWIRLS INTO Gardo's empty glass filling it full.
INT. BODEGA NIGHT.
ROPE-BOUND TO A CHAIR, BACK AGAINST THE BARE, CONCRETE
WALL GARDO wakes up with a start.
Half-drunk and confused he stares around.
THE BODEGA is large, well-lit and quiet. A TABLE pins Gardo
and his chair against the bodega wall.
GARDO struggles against the tight ropes. He can't free
himself. A NOISE (O.S.) of a heavy metal drag on the ground
alarms him.
Few feet away, NOEL drags A LARGE SHOVEL and A HEAVY SACK
towards Gardo. He stops and places the rusty, mud-crusted
shovel on the table, then opens the sack, takes out items
such as tarnished garden blades, screwdrivers, hammers,
saws with rusted blades...
GARDO
Unsa ni? Unsay nahitabo?!
NOEL
Mostorya ta Ser Gards. Way
tinonto. Asa si manoy?
GARDO sweats for a pause.
NOEL pushes the tabletop against Gardo, his eyes and skin
flare crimson rage.
NOEL
ASA SI MANOY?! ASA? ASA!
GARDO pales with fright.

8.

NOEL takes a hammer and hits the tabletop hard several

times, a rattling riot while he screams the question again.
GARDO
Di ko kahibaw! Gi abang nimo ko
upan pangitaon siya!
NOEL pulls away, paces like a furious tiger.
NOEL
Gatugot ka na maililong ko?
Dugay na niagi ang mga tuig pero
gihuna huna nako. Gipangita
nako.. gikaplag nako.
Imong gipamakak.
GARDO
Di ko kibaw sa imong gipakusar.
NOEL
Si noy Mark, gidaa sa presingto.
Naa ka didto. Usa sa ga-duty.
Naa ka ato. Naa ka, gatan-aw sa
ginabuhatan ni kang manoy!
NOEL slams the hammer-head against Gardo (O.S.)
CUT TO BLACK!
FADE IN:
UNCONSCIOUS, GARDO lies on his cheek on the table-top,
blood and mucus flows out his nose and mouth.
LITERS OF WATER splashes down on his head, chokes Gardo
awake. He sits up.
NOEL presses his face close to Gardo.
NOEL
Asa siya? Mm asa?
GARDO
...wa wa ko kibaw.

9.

NOEL grips Gardo's temples and forces the bound man's face
on the table-top, against the tools.
NOEL
Ayaw pamakak! Asa si noy? Asa?!
GARDO
...wa koy kahibalo. Motuo ka.
NOEL
Di na giingon ni Homer. Ingon ni
Homer, kabao ka sa tanan.
GARDO gets aware and astounded at the mention of Homer.
GARDO
Homer? Di na tinuod.
HOMER (O.S.)
Kibaw si Gardo sa tanan.
Si Gardo ang galuyong sa lawas.
GARDO freezes. He turns slowly, afraid to look up,
to see...
NOEL sits across the table, now calm, but he speaks out in
Homer's voice identically(!)
NOEL/HOMER (O.S.)
Gipugsan namo katung batan-on
para maniguro way gyud siya
labot sa rally. Gapalabi mi sa
paghadlok. Naa diay sakit sa
kasing-kasing katung si Marco.
GARDO leans forward, can't believe what he sees and hear.

NOEL/HOMER (O.S.)
Si Gardo, ingon si Gardo siya'y
bahala. Siya'y nangita og paagi.
Giluyong ang lawas human gipa
ingon nagawas na ang batan-on.
NOEL glares.

10.

NOEL/HOMER (O.S., CONT'D)

Di namo to gituyo. (pauses)
GARDO. Gardo. Gatawag ka bai?
Mangutang napud ka? Naa kay
kwarta?
GARDO tenses up in a seizure of anxiety. His face falls to
his chest, broken in spirit and sanity.
NOEL
Pakit-a ko kun asa si noy Marc.
Ipaluwas-on tika, tagaan pud
tika og kwarta.
GARDO looks up at Noel, who aims Gardo's own gun at him.
NOEL
Asa si noy?
EXT. EMPTY LOT MIDNIGHT-TO-NEAR DAWN.
THE SHOVEL'S BLADE digs deep into the ground.
GARDO digs deep in a six-feet hole. He stops.
NOEL squats on the hole's edge, gun aimed at Gardo.
A LARGE LUGGAGE BAG, stained with dirt, gets lifted out.
NOEL kneels down, takes a moment and opens the zipper
awkwardly with spastic, shaking fingers.
NOEL pulls open the zipper down and looks inside the bag.
He melts into a crying smile then into a happy grin.
NOEL
Noy... Marco! Noy!
He turns at A SOUND(O.S.); feet scrape loose dirt.
GARDO stands over Noel(!) Holds up the shovel high to
strike down with a shout.
Noel kicks Gardo's ankle, makes the man lose balance and
falls backward hard into the pit. A SHOUT OF PAIN (O.S!)

11.

NOEL stands, leans over the pit's edge and looks down.
GARDO lay on the ground, one leg twist at a broken angle.
Blood frothes out his mouth.
GARDO
(gasps) Tabangi ko...
akong luyo...
NOEL nods. He disappears and returns with A LARGE HEAVY
SACK, throws A PLASTIC BAG down.
THE PLASTIC BAG lands on Gardo's chest. He looks into it,
he sees THICK STACKS OF MONEY... his money(!)
NOEL pushes the heavy sack over the edge the hole, lets
SOMETHING large slide out.
ON GARDO, A MAN'S CORPSE lands beside him.
NOEL
Imung kwarta... og amigo nimo.
NOEL holds the shovel, throws dirt down into the pit.
GARDO
Ayaw, palihug. Ayaw!
ON GARDO, as dirt rains down on him, he cries then screams.
GARDO'S SCREAM is muffled (O.S.) as if buried.
The shovel pats down the dirt on the now-covered hole.
Dirty and sweaty, Noel drags the shovel to the bag.
He looks down into the open bag. He turns his head,
listening. He breaks into a wide smile.

THE END.