Part I: Outline

Thesis statement: There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of
whether college students should have part-time job. Some people assert that college
students are benefit from doing a part-time job while many others argue that doing a
part-time job has a negative influence on college students.

Argument 1: Part-time job will offer college students with more chances to develop
their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job
markets.

Counter argument and rebuttal: Having a part-time job is detrimental for students in
their college lives. According to the article Student part-time employment:
characteristics and consequences, the author David Robotham states that some
students may be destroyed by pressures (Robotham).

Argument 2: College students can get financial support from doing a part-time job.
Obviously, students can get some money from their part-time jobs to cover their daily
expenses.

Counter argument and rebuttal: Doing a part-time job may increase college students
financial burden. For example, the author Jacqueline Fitzpatrick states students get
less help from OSAP if they have a part-time job (Fitzpatrick).

Argument 3: Doing a part-time job can make the college students independent.

According to the article College students should have a part-time job, the author
states that college students, who have a part-time job, will not have to depend on their
parents for their needs (UWIRE).

Counter argument and rebuttal: Having a part-time job will affect

the college students result negatively. According to the article One
in five Oxford students has to work; Debts and lack of cash force
many to juggle part-time jobs with studies, even though college
authorities strongly discourage it, reports Becky Barrow, the author
states college students spend too much time on their part-time jobs
so that they have not enough time on their academic study
(Barrow).

Part II: Annotated Bibliography

Works Cited
Barrow, Becky. "One in five Oxford students has to work; Debts and lack of cash
force many to juggle part-time jobs with studies, even though college authorities
strongly discourage it, reports Becky Barrow." Daily Telegraph [London,
England] 28 July 2003: 05. Infotrac Newsstand. Web. 1 Nov. 2015.

"College students should have a part-time job." UWIRE Text 4 Nov. 2013: 1.
Academic OneFile. Web. 1 Nov. 2015.

Fitzpatrick Jacqueline,. "STUDENTS WITH PART-TIME JOBS BEING

PUNISHED." Guelph Mercury (ON) n.d.: Canadian Points of View Reference
Centre. Web. 1 Nov. 2015.
Robotham, David. "Student Part-Time Employment: Characteristics and
Consequences." Education & Training 54.1 (2012): 65-75. ProQuest. Web. 1
Nov. 2015.

Sources Analysis:

Daily Telegraph: Daily Telegraph is a daily newspaper providing service in London,

England. More importantly, the article I used from Daily Telegraph which is posted on
Senecas library database. Therefore, the article should be suitable for students to use.
From the article One in five Oxford students has to work; Debts and lack of cash
force many to juggle part-time jobs with studies, even though college authorities
strongly discourage it, reports Becky Barrow, the author emphasizes that some
cannot concentrate on their study because they spend too much on their after school
jobs. Therefore, having a part-time job negatively affects college students. It is
relevant to my essay.

Education & Training: The type of Education & Training is scholarly journals.
Senecas library database provides some reliable sources for students. Education &
Training is one of the most reputable sources on Senecas library database. The author
analyzes the pros and the cons of having a part-time job in students college life from
the article Student part-time employment: characteristics and consequences. The
author states that students have some pressures from their part-time job. It is related to
my essay.

Guelph Mercury:

I think Guelph Mercury is reliable not only because Guelph

Mercury is one of the oldest daily newspapers in Ontario, but because I got the article
from Senecas library database. The main idea of the author in the article
STUDENTS WITH PART-TIME JOBS BEING PUNISHED is that the total of

OSAP will reduce if students who have a part-time job. As a result, doing a part-time
job will increase students financial burden. It is one of the negative impart for the
students who have a part-time job, which is related to my essay.

UWIRE: UWIRE is a college news wire service which provides the news from more
than 600 college newspapers. UWIRE is reputable, because the article from UWIRE
which is under the database Academic OneFile. And Academic OneFile is an excellent
database for beginning searches. According to the article College students should
have a part-time job, the author lists the benefits for the students who have a parttime job, such as enriching their experience, earning money, managing time
effectively, becoming independent, etc. It is related to my essay.