The
graph illustrates the quantities of fish and
different kinds of meats consumed in a
European country between the time
period of 1979 and 2004. Over this span
of 25 years, the consumption of beef,
lamb and fish have all decreased while
the consumption of chicken has
dramatically risen.
The biggest consumption in 1979 was
beef (about 220 grams per person was
consumed every week) while the lowest
consumption in 1979 was fish (around 60
gram per week was consumed by a
person). The amount of fish which was
eaten has remained almost constant at
about 50 grams from 1979 and 2004. The
trends of beef and lamb consumption
were similar, with decreases in amount in
between the years. While beef
consumption had declined from over 200
grams per person per week to around 100
grams during 25 years, lambs was
starting 150 grams to approximately 50
grams at the same period.
R.
This is a good letter, all it need is a
little more attention as there are
certain language inaccuracies (see
comments underlined in blue).
Overall, this looks like a Band 7
letter.
IELTS essay plan Should developing
countries receive non-financial help?
Today we are sharing some ideas for
writing an essay on the topic below,
which was recently seen in the IELTS
exam in Dubai, UAE. Below you will find a
list of arguments that can be used in your
own essay.
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Writing task 2 topic
Even though developing countries
receive financial help, poverty is still
an issue. Some say they should be
receiving other kind of help, to
eliminate poverty. To what extent do
you agree or disagree? Give
examples and suggest what other
form of help can be offered.
You should spend about 40 minutes on
this task and write at least 250 words.
Introduction version 1
Millennia have passed but the problem of
poverty still hounds mankind. So-called
developed countries have largely tamed
this issue; however, developing countries
are still suffering despite receiving billions
of dollars in the form of international aid.
It is clear that simply providing monetary
assistance will not be sufficient and
radical approach is required on the part of
the rich nations to deal with the menace
of poverty in the Third World.
Introduction version 2
In the wake of the present financial crisis
that has swept across most of the rich
world, questions are being raised as to