CRITIQUE OF THESIS:

Title Study: THE EXTENT OF COMPLIANCE WITH THE IMPLEMENTATION OF THE

DEPED GUIDELINES ON HEALTH PROGRAM
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Date Published:
Introduction
The researcher follow the APA style in his research. There is a
coherence in the field he is studying. He provide legal basis. He
pinpoint key issues and use the referencing to strengthen his study.
He disclosed the limitations and weaknesses of cross reference
materials. He highlight the importance of the work. He also include
the objective of the study and the benefits of his study was presente
Research Locale
The researcher presents and describes the research environment.
He gave a brief history of the four big schools of San Jose West
District
as
culled
from
their
individual
School
Improvement
Plan(SIP)was narrated.
Statement of the Problem
The paradigm conform to his paradigm. His first and second
problem was about the Independents Variables (I.V.). The third and
fourth problem was about the Dependent Variables (D.V.). And the fifth
to eighth problem was about the relationship between the two
variables.
Statement of the hypothesis
The author used the null hypothesis.

Significance of the Study

The researcher points out the vital contribution of his study and
who will benefit from the result of the study. The results of the
study
will
be
specially
benefits
to
the
following:
School
Administration, Teachers, Pupils, Parents, School Nurse. Government
Agencies, Non- Government Organizations (NGO), and to the Future
researchers.

Scope & Limitation

The researcher specify the scope and limitations of the study. I
dont have any suggestions because he already spells out the coverage
of the study.
Theoretical and Conceptual Framework
I dont have any suggestions for a better theory and concept. The
researcher already cited and explained the theories on which the study
is premised in order to establish the relationship among the variables
of the study. The framework justifies the rationale behind the
investigation. The researcher helps us see clearly the variables that
should measures.
Definition of Terms
The needed terms in the study are defined. The definition help in
the attainment of the purpose of the study. It also facilitate
understanding of the problem. It was alphabetically arranged.

Chapter II
The researcher follows the APA style in chapter II. There is a
coherence in the sequence of thoughts and ideas. The synthesis in the
study presents the relationship of the present study to the
investigation being reviewed. He also summarize its relevance to the
current study.