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The lecture was about the various techniques to be used in
proofreading for ourselves. Firstly, we have to carefully check the
grammar, punctuation, and by eliminating the errors committed in the
past. Secondly, each paragraph should have a logical flow with distinct
ideas. Lastly, there should be enough time maybe a day or two to
proofread your work so it will be easy to spot the mistakes.
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There are three primary areas of concern of functioning of the local
government. Firstly, the citizens should take responsibility and
determine the types of services they would like to have. Secondly, the
creation of an effective mechanism between public service and public
servants. Finally, there should be a relationship between national and
local governments and its citizens, as in the past due to overcentralization the citizens had faced the issues. (70 words)
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them understand what services they need, secondly, to enable them to contribute in these
services, lastly, to create public services and public servants. These issues can be
overcome by reducing over directive centralism. Overall, the communication among the
national government, local bodies and citizens should be more transparent.
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There are three main areas of concern for people at the local level in the town. Firstly, they
should understand the varieties of services they would require. Secondly, if citizens want
to receive these services, there should be a proper co-ordination between public services
and public servants. Lastly, the communication among the national government, local
bodies, and citizens should be more transparent.
producing more harmful gases. To conclude, the industrial growth has adversely
impacted the climate, therefore it needs to be addressed immediately.
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The speaker discusses the various problems and solutions of allergies. An allergy is a
body reaction to something which is harmful to it and the impact can be mild to lifethreatening. Furthermore, the histamine released by the body and the less developed
hygiene conditions help in coping with allergic reactions in the later stage. To conclude,
the best avoidance from allergy is to identify of the main cause.
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The lecture discusses about the Europeans travelling experiences of various countries via
reading or electronic media, but they had the most interest in America, as they migrated to
America long ago. Nowadays there are two main views about whether America is
inevitable or imitable? One says the USA is very unusual country as compared to other,
while other says that the country is forerunner in each category than other nations.
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natural scenes of the environment in his poetries that hampered his reputation. After the
1920s, he became more popular and his reputation was at the peak. (70 words)
four books on the divorce, but the one book on the divorce was very famous as the
relevance of the text portrayed the defence of freedom of expression and against the
censorship. (63 words)