Example of Ode
America
From Selected Poems by Robert Creeley. Copyright 1991 by The Regents of the
University of California. All rights reserved. Used with permission. Originally
published in Pieces (1969).
2. Example of Elegy
Theodore Roethke (19081963)
1953
My Student, Thrown by a Horse
I remember the neckcurls, limp and damp as tendrils;
And her quick look, a sidelong pickerel smile;
And how, once startled into talk, the light syllables leaped for her,
And she balanced in the delight of her thought,
A wren, happy, tail into the wind,
Her song trembling the twigs and small branches.
The shade sang with her;
The leaves, their whispers turned to kissing;
And the mold sang in the bleached valleys under the rose.
Oh, when she was sad, she cast herself down into such a pure depth,
Even a father could not find her:
Scraping her cheek against straw;
Stirring the clearest water.
My sparrow, you are not here,
Waiting like a fern, making a spiny shadow.
The sides of wet stones cannot console me,
Nor the moss, wound with the last light.
If only I could nudge you from this sleep,
My maimed darling, my skittery pigeon.
Over this damp grave I speak the words of my love:
I, with no rights in this matter,
Neither father nor lover.
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Grief
Published in 1844
By Elizabeth Barrett Browning
I tell you, hopeless grief is passionless;
That only men incredulous of despair,
Half-taught in anguish, through the midnight air
Beat upward to God's throne in loud access
Of shrieking and reproach. Full desertness,
In souls as countries, lieth silent-bare
Under the blanching, vertical eye-glare
Of the absolute Heavens. Deep-hearted man,
express
Grief for thy Dead in silence like to death
Most like a monumental statue set
In everlasting watch and moveless woe
Till itself crumble to the dust beneath.
Touch it; the marble eyelids are not wet:
If it could weep, it could arise and go.
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Element of Poetry
1. Denotation and Connotation
Denotation : Meaning defined in a dictionary. (Kennedy: 455)
Connotation : Overtones or suggestions of additional meaning that it gains from all
the contexts in which we have met it in the past. (Kennedy: 455)
The process of analyzing denotation and connotation consists of:
1 Finding a key word (words) or phrases in each stanza;
2 Checking the denotative meaning from a dictionary (choose the definition that is
close to the context where the word appears);
3 Finding the connotative meaning;
4 Finding other words in the poems with similar connotations to the key words;
5 Interpret the key words or phrases based on their contexts/lines in the stanza
where they appear. (Kennedy: 458)
2. Imagery
Imagery is related to a word or sequence of words that refers to any sensory
experience.
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Visual
Auditory
Tactile
Olfactory
Gustatory
Kinesthetic
Abstract
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: sight
sound
touch
smell
taste
movement
idea (Kennedy: 465)
3. Figurative language
Language uses figures of speech or figurative language, for example, metaphor,
simile, alliteration, etc. Figurative language must be distinguished from the literal
language. He hared down the street or He ran like a hare down the street are
figurative (metaphor and simile respectively). He ran very quickly down the street is
literal. (Cuddon, 1979, 171)
A. Simile is the rhetorical term used to designate the most elementary form of
resemblances: most similes are introduced by "like" or "as." These comparisons are
usually between dissimilar situations or objects that have something in common, such
as Robert Burns, "My love is like a red, red rose." (Abrams: 119)
B. A metaphor leaves out "like" or "as" and implies a direct comparison between objects
or situations. "All flesh is grass." (Meyer: 415)
eat a slice of pepperoni pizza because they are hungry. It may not make sense,
but it is an illustration of irony.
Dramatic Irony: audience has more information or greater perspective than the
characters. For example: In Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare, Romeo
finds Juliet in a drugged state and he thinks she is dead. He kills himself. When
Juliet wakes up she finds Romeo dead and kills herself.
o Verbal Irony: saying one thing but meaning another
Overstatement (hyperbole) adds emphasis without intending to be
literally true: The teenage boy ate everything in the house. Notice how the
speaker of Andrew Marvells To His Coy Mistress exaggerates his devotion
in the following overstatement:
An hundred years should go to praise
Thine eyes and on thy forehead gaze,
Two hundred to adore each breast,
But thirty thousand to the rest:
That comes to 30,500 years. What is expressed here is heightened emotion,
not deception. (Meyer: 419)
Understatement (meiosis) is the opposite figure of speech, which says
less than is intended. example of understatement appears in the final line of
Randall Jarrells The Death of the Ball Turret Gunner (p. 378), when the
disembodied voice of the machine-gunner describes his death in a bomber:
When I died they washed me out of the turret with a hose.
Sarcasm is verbal irony that is calculated to hurt someone by false praise.
For example:
Friends, countrymen, lend me your ears.
(Julius Caesar by Shakespeare)
Irony may be a positive or negative force. It is most valuable as a mode of perception
that assists the poet to see around and behind opposed attitudes, and to see the often
conflicting interpretations that come from our examination of life.
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Stressed
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Unstressed
a. Iambic
Iambic meters can be thoughtful and recollect since they move from the uncertainty
of an unstressed syllable to the certainty of a stressed one. (Gill, 1995, 52)
e.g.
in ter
the sun
2 iamb
2 feet
b. Anapestic
Anapestic meters build up emotional tension by hurrying the reader through
unstressed syllables to the stressed one. (Gill: 53)
e.g.
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hat 2 feet
Note: Iambic and anapestic are known to be rising rhythm. (Cuddon, 575)
c. Trochaic
Trochaic meters start with a stress so it sounds assertive. (Gill, 52)
e.g.
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en ter
want to
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2 feet
d. Dactylic
Dactylic meters tend to be sad, create a feeling of decline, of falling away from
certainty. (Gill, 53)
e.g.
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co lor of
2 dactylic
2 feet
Note: Trochaic and Dactylic feet are known as falling rhythm. (Cuddon, 259)
e. Monosyllable
Stressed (Gill: 53)
e.g.
truth
monosyllable
1 foot
Note: A monosyllable that occurs between two unstressed syllables is called rocking
rhythm. (Cuddon, 576)
f.
Spondaic
Stressed (Gill: 53)
e.g.
true
blue
2 spondee
2 feet
g. Foot in Meter
1 foot : Monometer
5 feet : Pentameter
2 feet : Dimeter
6 feet : Hexameter
3 feet : Trimeter
7 feet : Heptameter
4 feet : Tetrameter
e.g. When weeds, in wheels, shoot long and lovely and lush,
The alliteration /w/ and /l/ helps to create a poems distinctive tone. (Gill: 61)
Onomatopoeia is the name given to the effect of sounds of words imitating miming,
the sounds of the object. (Gill: 62)
e.g. From: The Tempest, Act I, Scene II, by William Shakespeare
Hark, hark!
Bow-wow.
The watch-dogs bark!
Bow-wow.
Hark, hark! I hear
The strain of strutting Chanticleer
Cry, 'cock-a-diddle-dow!
Onomatopoeia helps establish the atmosphere of the poem. (Gill: 62-63)
6. Rhyme
Rhyme ... occurs when two or more words or phrases contain an identical or similar vowelsound, usually accented, and the consonant-sounds. Excellent rhymes surprise give
pleasure by satisfying expectations. (Kennedy: 525) Rhyme creates harmony giving
emphasis to the words of a poem focus the meaning of a poem. (Gill: 67)
a. Masculine and feminine rhymes
Masculine rhyme
Masculine rhyme is a rhyme of one-syllable or final syllable. (Kennedy: 527) Masculine
rhyme often sounds settled and determined. (Gill: 67)
e.g.
Feminine rhyme
Feminine rhyme is a rhyme of two or more syllables, with stress on a syllable other
than last. (Kennedy: 527) Feminine rhyme is fluid and musical. (Gill: 67)
e.g. leaving and weaving
b. Stanza form
Stanza form creates inward looking . Show[s] doubts and uncertainties. (Gill:
76, 81)
The quatrain
A stanza of four lines, rhymed or unrhymed. The commonest of all stanzaic forms in
European poetry, . (Cuddon, 545)
abab
e.g.
You beat time on my head
With a palm caked hard by dirt,
Then waltzed me off to bed
Still clinging to your shirt.
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7. Tone
Tone the authors attitude communicate amusement, anger, affection, sorrow,
contempt. It implies the feelings of the author. (Kennedy: 74)
8. Theme
The theme of a story is whatever general idea or insight the entire story revels.
theme is the center, the moving force, the principle of unity. (Kennedy: 103, 104)
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My Papa's Waltz
1948
3 A Sick Child
1951
4 "Cargoes"
1902
London
1794
Grandmother
1980
(1950- .)
if i were to see
her shape from a mile away
i'd know so quickly
that it would be her.
the purple scarf
and the plastic
shopping bag.
if i felt
hands on my head
i'd know that those
were the hands
warm and damp
with the smell
of roots.
if i heard
a voice
coming from
a rock
i'd know
and her words
would flow inside me
like the light
of someone
stirring ashes
from a sleeping fire
at night.