BSMS V-B
Creative Writing
Characters:
Andrew Richards:
Frank Thomas:
Joe Foster:
David Hawking:
Yardley Richards:
The Maid:
Shes the ghost which haunts Yardleys old mansion. Who got
killed by Yardley many years ago, she was a beautiful girl
who loved her mother and lived happily, but her ghost is
shown to be out for revenge and has deep hatred for the
Richard family.
SCENE I
A DEMOLITION AREA:
People are gathered around a certain spot at the demolition
site of the new shopping complex, the town police and an
ambulance is present at the scene too, a body is shown to be
carried away by officials in a corpse sack. Everyone is
puzzled. No one knows what is happening. Some kids are also
present on the situation. The police force asks the parents
to take the kids away as the scene is very shocking and
bloody.
stories that a kid one time stepped inside a house and never
came back. The police has also raided the place a couple of
times but have found nothing. The neighbors also said it is
very disturbing for them since they get to hear a lot of
sounds especially at night time and whenever it is full
moon. The voices get terrible.)
They walk towards the door and just as Andrew reaches out to
open the front door, the door squeaks open it-self, Frank
gets scared, but Andrew signals him to come with him inside.
Reluctantly, Frank steps inside with
walk through the door into the hall,
shut both of them jump up because of
that its a signal, a sort of warning
here. But Andrew tells him to shut up
Andrew:
What the hell just happened, wheres my bracelet? Oh thank
God its right here
Even before thinking of his friend he first thinks about his
precious bracelet and on finding it there, he calms down and
looks around, he sees nothing but darkness. He shouts out to
Frank and tries to ask his friend about what just happened
but Frank doesnt reply back. He shouts out to his friend,
but no one answers back, Franks not there. He starts to get
frightened with loneliness and sheer darkness all around
him. And then a violent cry is heard. It seems like Andrew
is extremely scared. But he is helpless. He cant do
anything. There is no going back. What he can do it just
look for his friend around and try to find a way out or
solve this mystery as soon as possible. There is a threat to
their lives.
ANDREWS LOCATION:
Andrew gets up and looks around himself, he tries to calm
himself down by talking to himself and telling his mind that
hes the bravest of them all, nothing can frighten him, when
all of a sudden, right in front of him, he sees a woman in a
black robe standing, looking at him with fiery eyes and a
face thats showing grotesque and utter hatred.
Andrew screams out frantically, he gets scared from the
entity in-front of him. He jumps back and averts his eyes,
but manages to somehow look towards that area again. He sees
nobody. He hears a whisper in his ears, a female voice which
says:
Ill not let you leave.
Andrew gets more scared and he stars panicking and
screaming, and again, he receives a slap through his face,
and he starts to completely break-down. This is a time when
Andrew starts to cry again and this time its loud, very
loud. He thinks may be Frank will somehow hear him but
everything is of no use. No one can hear him. And he is
tortured again and again by this creature which he has no
idea about. He starts to pray to God to help him and says
that he is going to go any mile to remove all the sins from
his shirt if he somehow manages to escape this prison.
FRANKS LOCATION:
Meanwhile, Frank gets amazed by whats taking place in-front
of him, he sees the room has been lit by a grand
chandelier , theres no trace of dust or spider-webs
anywhere, it seems that everything is absolutely perfect and
as new as it could be, it doesnt look like the house has
been left un-attended for even a day. He looks around as if
ANDREWS LOCATION:
Andrew is scared down to his bone because of whats
happening around him. He is trembling and his head is
shaking because hes hearing a womans screams, hearing a
man shouting, but he cant see anything. All of a sudden he
sees an image of a person standing at a distance. He tries
to see who or what it is. He realizes from the back that
its his friend Frank. He goes over quite relieved and
satisfied. He shouts his name, but Frank doesnt answer
back. He holds his shoulder and turns him around to see that
Franks face is badly scrambled and distorted. Andrew gives
out a blood-curdling scream, and falls back just to see that
Franks not there anymore.
He starts screaming like a wild man as he hears laughter all
around him, and the laughter keeps on getting louder and
louder and a voice screams at him saying:
YOULL NEVER GET OUT!
FRANKS LOCATION:
tells Frank to go, and not to look back, and to never come
here ever again.
Frank leaves with a mind to do whats right, and to bring
Andrews father to justice for what he did.