Absent or
Below Basic
Developing
Proficient
Advanced
Form: Design
Form: Genre
Content:
Information
Content:
Support
Content:
Organization
Frequently unorganized:
difficult to find a clear
relationship between
paragraphs or sentences.
Headings are inappropriate,
unclear or absent.
Citations:
Readability:
Outstanding control of
language, including effective
diction and sentence variety.
Comments: On what two or three areas do you think this writer needs to focus before submitting this document
Grammar at the end of Fan Needs to be Replaced section is inconsistent. Consider making all examples the same type.
Long paragraph under Loose Headphone Jack. Consider simplifying sentences, or dividing section into different sections for driver not working and
physical damage to headphone jack, to provide two separate solutions for the issue.