CONCLUSIONS-- Narrative Memoir
The learning target sayS...give a sense of closure by showing how the character
or place changed or how the problem was resolved and leave the reader thinking about
central theme or message.
End with Reflection
+ convey feelings without telling the reader how you felt - and without telling how they should feel.
+ include thoughts about the moment or thoughts looking back, about the experien¢ why it is
important, how it changed you, what it means to you now, what it taught you, what it says about
you.
+ think about what you want your readers to take away from your story. Then think about how best
you can show it.
Ending lines- a few professional examples
... I wished that he had been beside me so that I could have searched his face for the answers which
only the future would give me now. ~James Baldwin “Notes of a Native Son”
What I believe is this: That pinch was entry into our childhood; my arm around him, our smiling, is
the proof of us two surfacing, alive but not unscathed. And here are my own two boys, already
embarked. ~Brett Lott, “Brothers”
It took me a while to get what those words meant. But once I stopped trying to be like other people,
life got a whole lot easier. I'm even growing up to be someone I really like.
~D. Marie O'Keefe “The Moment I Knew I'd Never Be Cool”
Idon't remember the grade I got in fifth-grade religion class, But I do remember the laugh I got. It
‘was huge. It was the whole class (except Sister Margaret Mary). It was out-of-control hysterical. It was
glorious. And it set me on my lifelong path of answering that classic question, "What's so funny, Mr.
Scieszka?” ~Jon Scieszka “What's So Funny, Mr. Scieszka?”
My time spent on my skateboard built up my confidence. It didn't bother me that I didn’t have a
girlfriend or wasn't the popular guy at school. All I cared about was rolling around with other skaters
at the park and having fun, And as far as skating goes, not much has changed.
~Tony Hawk “Intro”
_ ese and sme examples rom