I. How you will introduce your thesis statement.

- A quote about how diversity can affect society. (All conflict is about difference;
whether the difference is race religion, or nationality (John Hume))
- Explain the quote with an example.
- Explain why a united society is stronger.
- Conclude about why the human need for diversity is not good for society.
Thesis:
The human need for diversity is ultimately harmful for society because if there is
a problem, humans will never agree each other making more difficult to solve the
problem, in order to achieve a goal humans need to have the same objectives, and
the human need for diversity will make it more difficult, and humans need to be united
in order to be stronger, and the human need for diversity will affect the unity in society.
II. Topic Sentence: In order to solve a problem, humans need to agree each other and,
the human need for diversity will make it more difficult to reach an agreement.
a) Explain that in society there are always problems that need to be solved.
b) Example of a common problem.
c) Explain why it is difficult to solve a problem when people cannot reach an
agreement, and also explain why it is difficult to reach an agreement.
Concluding Sentence
Therefore, if a problem has to be solved and people want to reach an
agreement, the human need for diversity is ultimately harmful for society.
III. Topic Sentence: Moreover, humans need to have the same objectives if they want to
reach a goal and, having diversity in society will make it more difficult to reach a goal.
a) Explain the difference between a goal and objectives.
b) Example of a goal and objectives.
c) Explain why having diversity can make it more difficult to have same objectives
in order to reach a goal.
Concluding Sentence
Thus, the human need for diversity is ultimately harmful for society.
IV. Topic Sentence: In addition, humans need to be united in order to be stronger, and
the human need for diversity will affect the unity that society needs.
a) Explain why a united society is stronger.
b) Example of a united society.
c) Explain with an example how diversity affects the unity in a society.
Concluding sentence
In conclusion, the human need for diversity is harmful for society because it
affects the unity that the society needs.
V. Topic Sentence: It is impossible to reach an agreement when there is the human
need for diversity making this diversity harmful for society.
a) Explain why is important to reach an agreement in society.
b) Summarize all the thoughts about why diversity just makes it difficult to reach
something in society.
c) Concluding sentence
Therefore, humans cannot agree each other because of diversity, so the human
need for diversity is ultimately harmful for society.