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Name : Livia Ellen

Faculty : Engineering (Computer Engineering)
Student Number : 1606887560
Classroom : UI0416_S301
Essay Writing Assignment
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P6: Writing the Body + Concluding Paragraph

P5:Writing the Body (Without Concluding Paragraph)

First, Volunteering help you gain new experiences and insights. Volunteering
allows you to get involved with new things and develop technical, social, and
academic skills. Whether youre helping out at your local library or tutoring
underprivileged kids, volunteering allows you to experience different environments and
situations.

P4: Writing the Introductory Paragraph

Participating in volunteer work is essential to the development of strong
character. The right volunteering experience will force you to work in a new
environment and with different people that enables you to develop new skills and
learn by doing. And if you take the time to reflect on your experience after, it will
truly help you grow as a person. Here are ways that volunteering will help you
develop your character traits.

P3: Essay Outlining (Without Concluding Paragraph)

Title: Volunteering Develops Your Character
I. Introduction
Thesis Statement: Participating in volunteer work is essential to the
development of strong character.
II. Body

A. Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence
Supporting Details:
insights.

Volunteering help you gain new experiences and

1. Volunteering allows you to get involved with new

things and develop technical, social, and academic
skills
2. Volunteering allows you to experience different
environments and situations.
3. It has done something good for someone as a
person
B. Paragraph 3
Topic Sentence : Volunteering builds empathy and connects you to
humanity
Supporting Details:
1. By spending time with other people you will
experience compassion and kindness that so many
volunteers exhibit.
2. You tend to be more aware and care about your
surrounding.
3. Research shows that those that volunteer feel more
loved and feel happier.

C. Paragraph 4
Topic Sentence : By volunteering, you give back and help others
Supporting Details:
1. Volunteers create better environments for others
2. Volunteer work makes us feel good. It builds selfconfidence and lifts up the spirits when you see
someone is smiling because of what you have done.

P2:Writing the Thesis Sentence1

Participating in volunteer work is essential to the development of strong
character.
P1: Selecting a Topic
The reason why volunteering is essential

1 Teachers feedback: Based on your Selected Topic, your Thesis Sentence is

appropriate. You may write P3 (your Essay Outline - ref.UIEAP Module pages
163-165. DO NOT WRITE THE CONCLUSION YET.) and P4 (the Introductory
Paragraph - ref.UIEAP Module pages 166 - 169), and email both of them to me
altogether. Deadline:13.12.16 @ 18:00