find the true meaning of family as they take an amazing journey through the
protective over his uncle and that he finds ways to express his feelings. He also
He is protective over his uncle. When ricky and hec stumble on a cabin
they go in and gather some things that would help them in their expedition after a
while the hunters show up (who were living there) and ricky accidentally makes it
seem like hec is a child molester and the hunters start wrestling him. But then
rickey picks up a gun and says get away from him, but the hunters laugh at him
because they thought he would shoot the gun but then he fires it into the air.
Rickey was protecting his uncle from the hunters by shooting in the air to warn
them to get off of hec. Another way Rickey is protective over his uncle is Rickey
started shooting at the boar to protect zag, topac, and hec (his uncle). Rickey is
protecting hec from the boar by shooting at it to make stop running towards him.
Another way rickey is someone you can look up to is that, he always finds
a way to express himself. Rickey uses haikus as a way to express his feelings
and what's going on around him. A haiku is a japanese poem used to express
yourself and your feelings. Rickey just lets everyone know how he's feeling, he's
not afraid to put what he thinks out there. And that's why people can look up to
him because he is brave enuf to let people know what's going on in his head, and
scene when bella died and rickey tried to be nice and helpful towards hec. This is
also shown when hec is upset that everyone thinks he is a molester but rickey
pulls out the ashes of bella and they dump them in the waterfall. These 2
examples show that rickey makes good of bad because ricky is trying to make
Introduction The essay begins The essay begins The essay begins The essay simply
Paragraph with a strong with an with an begins with only a
Your score: 2 introduction introduction introduction thesis statement
paragraph and paragraph that paragraph but is and not a fully
contains the contains the missing either the developed
following parts: required elements: attention-grabber introduction
attention-grabber, attention-grabber, or the bridge paragraph OR the
bridge, and thesis bridge, and thesis and/or the introduction
statement. The statement. attention-grabber paragraph is
thesis statement However, the is clich or the missing entirely.
appears as the attention-grabber transition does not
last sentence of may not be as actually lead into
the introduction. effective and/or the thesis
the transition may statement. The
not be as smooth. introduction
The thesis paragraph
statement appears contains a thesis
as the last statement that is
sentence of the located at the end
introduction. of the introduction
paragraph.
Supporting Details All supporting Supporting details One supporting Supporting details
(x2) details are logical are mostly logical detail may be may not be
Your score: 4 and connect to the but might exhibit missing and/or present or logical.
thesis . weak connectors may contain a
Supporting details to the thesis . direct quotation or Supporting details
are broad enough Supporting details specific evidence may be random or
to effectively summarize the that should appear off topic.
summarize the content of the in the body
content of the body paragraphs paragraph.
body paragraphs and do not contain Supporting details
and do not contain specific evidence. may not connect
specific evidence. to the thesis
statement or
effectively
summarize the
paragraph.
Analysis/ Body paragraphs Body paragraphs The writer has Body paragraphs
Commentary contain effective contain included plot lack analysis and
(x2) explanation of explanation of summary in some contain mostly plot
Your score: 2.5 evidence in your evidence in your places instead of summary.
own words. Each own words, and analysis/
piece of evidence each piece of explanations, OR, There is little
is explained in at evidence is the writer has not evidence of logic
least two explained in at explained each and/or reasoning.
sentences that least two piece of evidence
analyze how the sentences. with at least two
piece of evidence However, the sentences
proves the thesis analysis may be consistently. OR,
and supporting more obvious and the writers
details Analysis lack depth, analysis/
shows depth and therefore, not fully explanations may
goes beyond the proving the claim only state the
obvious. presented in the obvious.
thesis or topic
sentences.
Conclusion The essay ends The essay ends The essay ends The essay simply
Paragraph with a strong and with a conclusion with a conclusion ends with only a
Your score: 1 memorable paragraph that paragraph but is rephrased thesis
conclusion contains the missing either the statement and not
paragraph and required elements: link back to hook, a fully developed
contains the link back to hook, rephrased thesis conclusion
following parts: rephrasing of statement or the paragraph OR the
link back to thesis, thesis statement so-what statement conclusion
rephrasing of and key points, is weak paragraph is
thesis statement transition, and so- missing entirely.
and key points, what statement.
and so-what However, the so-
statement what statement
may not be as
effective or logical
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