Dear Dr.

Simon Julier,

I am writing with regard to your university admission program.

I am a Romanian student at Gheorghe Rosca Codreanu highschool, finishing the 11th

grade this summer. I have been attending this highschools classes since the 5th grade,
while I participated in several contests and olympiads in areas such as mathematics,
physics, chemistry, natural sciences, and English, managing to win most of these
contests. I have also been among the first 3 students in my class every year and have been
awarded prises by the highschool for various achievements several times.(Please find
enclosed my diplomas.)

Next year when I am in the 12th grade, i would like to apply for a computer science
degree at your university, so I entered your universitys website and checked the
necessary qualifications. There I found that the minimum level of English accepted in the
CAE exam is B which is equivalent to a 75%. When I took the exam in the 9th grade, I
only managed to score 74%, the equivalent of grade C. I would like to know whether this
is a major inconvenient which can prevent me from being admitted at your university and
if there is something that can be done in this respect, other that taking the CAE exam
again.

I am looking forward to a positive reply at your ealiest convenience.

Yours sincerely,
Olaru Catalin.

Draga Dr Simon Julier,

Va scriu cu privire la programul de admitere al universitatii dumneavoastra.

Sunt un elev roman la liceul Gheorghe Rosca Codreanu, terminand clasa a 11-a in vara
aceasta. Am urmat cursurile acestei scoli din clasa a 5-a, timp in care am participat in mai
multe concursuri si olimpiade in domenii precum matematica, fizica, chimie, stiinte ale
naturii si engleza, reusind sa castig o mare parte din aceste. De asemenea, am fost in
fiecare an printre primii 3 elevi din clasa mea si mi-au fost acordate de catre liceu premii
pentru diferite realizari.

Anul viitor, cand voi fi in clasa a 12-a, as dori sa aplic la facultatea de informatica a
universitatii dumneavoastra, asa ca am intrat pe site-ul universitatii dumneavoastra pentru
a verifica calificarile necesare. Acolo am gasit ca nivelul minim de engleza acceptat la
examenul CAE este B, care este echivalent cu 75% din punctaj. Cand am dat examenul in
clasa a 9-a, am reusit sa iau doar 74%, echivalentul gradului C. As dori sa stiu daca acesta
este un inconvenient major care m-ar putea impiedica sa fiu acceptat la universitatea
dumneavoastra si daca se poate face ceva in aceasta maniera, in afara de a sustine
examenul din nou.
*I am looking forward a positive reply at your earliest convenience* e o expresie
britanica foarte formala si care de bine,da care nu prea are o traducere fixa, dar inseamna
aproximativ Astept un raspuns de preferat pozitiv oricand puteti sa imi scrieti.