Essential Question(s):
2.Writeroutinelyoverextendedtimeframes(timeforresearch,reflection,andrevision)andshortertimeframes(a
singlesittingoradayortwo)forarangeofdisciplinespecifictasks,purposes,andaudiences.(5.W.10)
3.Writenarrativestodeveloprealorimaginedexperiencesoreventsusingeffectivetechnique,descriptivedetails,
andcleareventsequences.
a.Orientthereaderbyestablishingasituationandintroducinganarratorand/orcharacters;organizeanevent
sequencethatunfoldsnaturally.
b.Usenarrativetechniques,suchasdialogue,description,andpacing,todevelopexperiencesandeventsorshow
theresponsesofcharacterstosituations.
c.Useavarietyoftransitionalwords,phrases,andclausestomanagethesequenceofevents.
d.Useconcretewordsandphrasesandsensorydetailstoconveyexperiencesandeventsprecisely.
e.Provideaconclusionthatfollowsfromthenarratedexperiencesorevents.(5.W.3)
The student will create their own piece, focusing on sentence fluency and the
inclusion of details.
Language Objective(s):
Anticipatory Set:
Sentence
Details
Teacher Actions/Student Actions:
1. Teacher will read Velma Gratch and the Way Cool Butterfly, as student
listens to the story.
2. Teacher will ask student what she noticed about the authors writing
and use of sentences. What makes a quality sentence?
3. Teacher will encourage student to share some things they may notice
about their own writing and sentences. (Do you vary your sentences or
do they typically start the same? Do you vary your sentence length?
Do you include details so readers can visualize and better understand
your writing? How can you make you make your sentences even
better?)
4. Teacher will go over Stretch a Sentence chart.
5. Teacher will lead student though her own stretch a sentence activity.
Student will come up with her own example and move through the
progression similar to the chart.
6. Teacher will refer back to the story to elicit student ideas regarding
their narrative and provide the prompt: Think about a time or situation
where you were feeling defeated or sad. How did the situation improve
and end happy?
7. Student will apply this knowledge to her own writing by creating a
narrative and writing for 5 minutes without stopping.
Closure:
The student will share their narrative
The teacher will point out and compliment an example of a detailed
sentence from the students writing.
Materials/Resources:
Book- Velma Gratch and the way Cool Butterfly
Paper and pencil
List of what makes a good writer (good writers: Start their sentences in
different ways, Use transition words, use short (simple) and long
(complex) sentences.
Paper chart- Stretch a Sentence