1. b (see Unit 1.2) 2. c (see Unit 1.1) 3. a (see Unit 1.4) 4. c (see Unit 1.11)
5. b (see Unit 1.3) 6. c (see Unit 1.5) 7. a (see Unit 1.8) 8. b (see Unit 1.6)
Answers: Part 1
9. c (see Unit 1.10) 10. a (see Unit 1.11) 11. b (see Unit 1.12) 12. c (see Unit 1.2)
1.1 Background to writing
Notes A written record of the main points of a text or lecture, for a students
personal use.
Project A piece of research, either individual or group work, with the topic
chosen by the student(s).
Essay The most common type of written work, with the title given by the
teacher, normally 10005000 words.
Paper A general term for any academic essay, report, presentation or article.
3 The format of long and short writing tasks
(a) abstract
(b) references
(c) appendix
(d) acknowledgements
(b) sub-title
(c) heading
(d) sentence
(e) phrase
(f) paragraph
(c) In 2009 fewer vehicles were made than in the four previous years.
(d) Between 2005 and 2009 vehicle production peaked in 2007, when the
number reached 164,000.
7 Writing in paragraphs
See Unit 1.10. Organising paragraphs 1 for initial questions
1 Academic texts
1 Formal vocabulary
the marketing planning process in tourism marketing
3 Impersonal style
it has also long been recognised that
it is important to study the tourists attitude.
4 Long, complex sentences Equally, from a political perspective, the nature of state involvement in and
policies for tourism is dependent on both the political-economic structures
and the prevailing political ideology in the destination state, with
comparisons typically made between market-led and centrally planned
economies.
2 Types of text
Possible answers:
Text type Advantage Disadvantage
Journal article Often focuses on a special area May be too specialised or complex
Official report (from government) Contains a lot of detail May have a narrow focus
Newspaper or magazine article Easy to read and up-to-date May not be objective and not give
sources
1 Reading methods
Read intensively to
make notes on key
points
Possible answers:
3 Reading abstracts
(b) Aim and thesis of article This article questions engaged citizenship.
Fact or opinion?
Facts true Opinions
or false? agree or
disagree?
1 Britain has the highest crime rate in the world Fact False
6 Practice
(a)
1 Probably unreliable. The adjectives used (easily, quickly) and the lack of concrete information
suggest that this text is not to be trusted. In addition, commonsense should suggest that you
cannot legally earn hundreds of pounds in a few hours.
2 Probably reliable. The advice the writer is giving appears commonsense, although not everyone
might agree with all of it (e.g. cooking is fun).
3 Probably reliable. The facts given can be confirmed by students own experience.
(b)
Positive aspects: Contains some relevant ideas. The studies mentioned could be
followed up using a search engine.
3 Degrees of plagiarism
(1) Y
(2) Y
(3) Y
(4) N
(5) Y
(6) N
(7) Y
(8) N
(9) Y/N
(10) Y
Analyse break down into the various parts and their relationships
3 Practice
(a) How/ why/ what
Asking for a description of the process of and reasons for segmentation, and
analysis of the social and economic forces involved.
(b) Describe
(c) How
Explain the ways psychology can help to cut down the incidence of bullying.
Consider whether criminal law is becoming more subjective, and discuss the
desirability of this trend.
4 Brainstorming
Possible benefits
Possible drawbacks
Young children may not understand the necessary grammar
5 Essay length
(NB. These figures are only a guide and individual students may have a
different approach).
Approximately 50:50
Approximately 40:60
Approximately 50:50
Approximately 30:70
6 Outlines
(b)
(i) Lists can help develop a logical structure and make it easier to allocate space,
but are rather inflexible.
Mind maps are more flexible as extra items can be added easily.
2 Note-making methods
The notes are paraphrased, not copied from the text. The source is included.
An ageing market
Key points:
(a) The generation born after the second world war, sometimes called the baby-
boomers, are now reaching retirement age, and businesses are starting to realise
that they are a wealthier market than any previous retirement group.
(b) There are, however, certain difficulties in selling to this market. Some
customers resent being addressed as `old since they see themselves as more
youthful, while there is a huge variation in the profile of the baby boomers.
2 This trend may have important consequences for the healthcare system:
according to a recent study (Finkelstein et al., 2009) an obese American is likely
to cost the system over 40 per cent more than someone with normal weight.
3 but medical researchers still struggle to understand the basic causes of the
problem, which is that obesity in America is now three times greater than 50
years ago.
4 those with irregular and badly paid employment are more likely to eat
fewer calories are used in doing domestic chores around the house
5 Although Americans often dislike being told what to do by their government,
these campaigns may be finally having an effect.
6 Practice A
(Example notes)
Source: (Herapath, T. (2010) Journal of Transatlantic Contexts 14, p. 319)
(1) 2/3 Americans overweight, but lately growth in obesity seems to have
stopped
(2) may reduce future healthcare costs (obesity adds 40 per cent to medical
(4) three possible causes: (a) more people have disorganised lives (b) food has
become cheaper (c) people do less physical work
(5) new trend may be result of govt. action on food labelling and childrens diets
7 Practice B
(Example notes)
Source: (Kitschelt, P. (2006) How the Brain Works. Berlin: Freihaus p. 73)
The
4) brain
Univ. andteam
Calif. the memory process
researched process:
group
(1) Siesta can b) performed
help improve better
memory at memory tasks in evening
> learning
1.6 Paraphrasing
2 Practice A The causes of the industrial revolution
a Quite good, but lack of precision (at that time) and unsuitable register (bosses).
b The best paraphrase, with all main points included and a significantly different structure.
c A poor paraphrase, with only a few words changed and extra and inaccurate information added
4 Practice B
(A number of possibilities are acceptable here. These are suggestions)
(a)
(iii) There Henry Ford modified the moving assembly line from the
Chicago meat industry to car manufacturing, thereby inventing mass
production.
(b)
(ii) After the second world war the focus of car makers was on the
style of their products, to encourage more frequent model changes.
(iii) From the 1970s the industry was criticised for its inefficient
vehicles which wasted petrol.
(c)
(ii) Some of the most famous brands in the world are today owned by
the industry.
1.7 Summarising
2 Stages of summarising
(c)
(d)
(b)
(a)
(e)
(a) Falling levels of fertility have generally been found as countries become
richer.
(c) Two results: smaller populations and larger numbers of elderly needing
assistance.
Example summary 1
Falling levels of fertility have generally been found as countries become richer.
In some, the number of children born has fallen below the replacement rate.
There are two likely results: smaller populations and larger numbers of elderly
needing assistance. But recent research claims that this pattern may be
changing. A comparison of HDI (human development index: life expectancy,
income and education) with fertility found that in most highly rated (HDI +0.9)
countries, fertility is rising.
(Example summary 2)
(Example summary)
(c) Y
(d) N
(e) Y
(f) N
A summary allows the writer to condense ideas, while a quotation uses the
words of the original author, which have authenticity and may be difficult to
improve.
6 Practice
(Example answers)
(a) According to Hoffman (2009) mobile phones have had a powerful impact in
the developing world as they offer previously unavailable services, and have
led to the growth of new, focused local operators.
(b) Hoffman points out that the special conditions in the developing world have
produced new phone operators: `that are larger and more flexible than Western
(i) Drnyei
(iii) Flege
(iv) Myles
(b)
(f)
(vi) Myles, nd
1 Mentioning sources
(a) 6
(c) Venkatesh
(e) 2
steps should be taken such as carbon it can be expected that burning of fossil
dioxide. fuels.
she mentions evidence of levels of CO2 Some critics claim unrelated to CO2 levels.
(c) However
Additionally, Lahav (2010) raises the issue of the computer models which are
used to predict future climate, and argues that these may be unreliable
instruments for making critical decisions. He points out that climate-change
critics suggest that, given the uncertainty involved, it might be better to allocate
resources to social improvements rather than green technology.
1 Paragraph structure
The answers are found below the table in (2).
3 Practice A
(a)
Topic sentence
Example
Reason
Supporting point 1
Supporting point 2
Supporting point 3
4 Development of ideas
(a)
Topic sentence iii
Definition i
Result 1 vi
Result 2 v
Result 3 iv
Conclusion ii
6 Practice B
(Example answer)
(a)
1 Topic It has been argued that rises in the rate of home ownership can increase the rate of
unemployment.
2 Reason This is because home ownership appears to make people more reluctant to move
in order to find work.
3 Example Spain is an example of a country where high rates of home ownership coincide
with high unemployment, while Switzerland demonstrates the opposite.
5 Conclusion It is clear that other factors, such as the liquidity of the housing market, must play
a role in the relationship.
(b)
1 This theory was lent support by the performance of the housing market in US states such as California
2 These states had all experienced a major housing boom during the 1990s.
3 But after the start of the recession the rate of house moving declined steeply.
4It appears that one factor in this slowdown was the number of households in negative equity.
6 Therefore a recession may be deepened if labour becomes more static, as a result of high home
ownership rates.
1 Introduction contents
(a)
Y/N
(vi) The method you adopt to answer the question (or an outline) Y
(b)
(i) Background
(ii) Outline
(iii) Purpose
(v) Definition
(vi) Limitation
2 Introduction structure
Essential: Your purpose/ Your method/ Background/ Outline
3 Opening sentences
(Example answers)
(a) In recent years there has been a steady criticism of the lack of women in
senior management.
(b) In the past decade global warming or climate change has become one of the
most pressing issues on the international agenda.
(c) There has been some decline in rates of infant mortality in the developing
world over the last 20 years, but in many countries progress has been slow.
(d) Rapid internal migration from the countryside to the cities is a feature of
many developing societies.
4 Practice A
(Example introduction)
Steadily increasing demand for higher education (i.e. education to degree level)
worldwide has resulted in growing pressure on state budgets for financial
support. In response many countries have attempted to transfer the costs to
students, usually in the form of higher fees. This raises the issue of who benefits
from a university education, which is generally seen as the key to a better
joband whether access to it should be restricted.
The aim of this essay is to answer these questions, taking into account the
expense of tertiary education and the fact that rising student numbers often
result in a poorer quality of education. The question of fairness will be
examined, given that HE benefits a minority, and finally the need to encourage
students from poorer families to attend university will be considered. Given the
limitations of space, China will be used as an example to illustrate the main
points involved.
5 Conclusions
(a) Y
(b) Y
(c) N
(d) Y
(e) Y
(f) Y
(g) Y
(h) N
(i) f
(ii) b
(iii) e
(iv) d
(v) g
(vi) a
6 Practice B
(Example conclusion)
It has been shown that, although in some situations a strong economy is linked
to low rates of home ownership, this is not always the case. There have been
claims that owning a house may make people reluctant to move in order to find
work, and this theory seems to be supported by the examples in some US states
during the recession of 20089. However, it appears that the main factor here
was negative equity, rather than just ownership. As negative equity is the
product of a house price bubble, it seems that the principal threat to a national
economy is rapid inflation of house prices to unsustainable levels.
3 Practice B
(Example re-write)
4 Proof-reading
(b)
(iv present perfect needed with `since: Since 2005 there have been
(vii) `one of the needs plural noun: one of the largest companies
(c)
d) (Example answer)
Many non-European businesses are aiming to enter the single European market
as they see an unexploited potential there. There are three reasons for this
interest. Firstly, the non-European organisations are keen to do business in the
European market because it is one of the leading investment destinations and
the easiest place to set up and run a business in the world. Secondly, the single
European market provides foreign investors with an internationally
competitive tax environment. Finally, there are many wealthy individuals
living in Europe.
5 Confusing pairs
(a) principles
(b) lose
(c) affect
(d) compliments
(e) its
(f) economic
(g) accepted